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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

awesome part...loved manveer romantic moments...update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

wow!!

lovely updates

hope show goes this way..

cont soon

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Binita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Sonali.. that was so beautifully written.. I loved how you have gradually shown UV and Manyata maturing and willing to accept one another as they are.. yet their personalities have staid in tact..they are simply wiser.. Oh and you even added the head massage UV wanted in a previous episode you are too good.. 😳 loved UV's explanation touching will not get her pregnant.. blunt 😆.. will be waiting for your next update..😊

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Sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

People including my sister say I am too blunt at times, but I never really intend to hurt anyone for the most part. I just like to be clear most of the time.

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Binita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

People including my sister say I am too blunt at times, but I never really intend to hurt anyone for the most part. I just like to be clear most of the time.

/QUOTE]I have a similar issue at times.. my family members say it could come across as rude (although I mean no harm) I say I am simply trying to keep things as clear as possible.. but what you have written is perfect UV would say something similar to that we all know how he is he does not mince his words..😆 btw I hope you will be writing a new FF once this one is done... 😃

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Troll Master Gogo!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

P23:

He smiled realizing she was checking him out.

"Princess you like what you see?," he asked.

Ha, ha. Cheeky Udayveer <3

"Udayveer does Manyata snore and walk in her sleep," she [JN] inquired. 🤣🤣🤣

P24:

I found the key card part so adorable. I was like her when I was a kid!! 😆

"Aao na humare paas humari jungli billi," he teased. 🤣🤣🤣

And of course the chap was ☺️.

P25:

awww 😍

P26:

"Arre oh pagali. If I just touch you , it doesn't mean you'll get pregnant right away." 🤣🤣🤣 It was funny in HDDCS and its funny here too 😆

I loved, loved each and every update. You are such an amazing writer! :) Just wonderful!

Aww... so sad about the last update. :( Hopefully you will change ur mind... Even if you dont, it's okay becoz i am sure u will come up with another fanfic *glances up hopefully*

TC.

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Sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Yeah I might do what I did with this one, it started as a series of oses, but i turned into a fic later on since everyone liked it . I'll write some oses hopefully and then we shall see if anything turns into a fic. Stay tuned, picture abhi bakki hai mere dost!( For the show and hopefully I will get inspired to write more)😉