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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: *Woh Ajnabee*



Hey, you're SMART! That was my first thought as well. The pink is a bluff, I'm quite sure.

As far as "Anju" goes, most people call me "Ajnu". Only Summer bhaiyya calls me 'Anju', but it seems like the Sarah and Joe entry is his writing.

Only two thoughts come to mind - either Gauri di is pulling a fast one here, or this is Karan's doing. 😆


I don't think it's Gauri. A mushy tale about 'essence of an Indian woman' doesn't really click with Gauri's image. Such essence of Sati-Savitri tales is more for LJ (now JR) kind of people.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
Gengu you wrote no. 5 ? it is your style except that the author seems to be a lady perhaps?
Still I liked the style and humour.
You got my vote.👍🏼
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I was shocked.I had to warn the bollywood guys. I first met

amitabh, who was adjusting his wig. He came in and recited a few

boring poems, and jaya bacchhan laughed irritatingly. I asked them

if they still were uncomfy about rekha and they shut up.They were

shocked about salmans evil plan. They called abhishesh and

aishwarya, who was drunk😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: *Woh Ajnabee*



Hey, you're SMART! That was my first thought as well. The pink is a bluff, I'm quite sure.

As far as "Anju" goes, most people call me "Ajnu". Only Summer bhaiyya calls me 'Anju', but it seems like the Sarah and Joe entry is his writing.

Only two thoughts come to mind - either Gauri di is pulling a fast one here, or this is Karan's doing. 😆



Me missing a dinner date with Terence just to save some vanilla essence - you really think I'd do that😡 If it is Karan, he is soooo dead once I know for sure who wrote that story😡😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
........ she noticed that her husband was standing out on the front porch, the two cute girls who were gauri's life were on his back, getting a piggy back ride from him. .....................

awww.....how cute! My girls are almost 16 and 10 now. I hope my hubby's back is intact 😆

Gauri was putting the last of the dish in the dishwasher when she heard the intro music of 'Dance India Dance'. She wiped her hands and ran towards the TV. DID meant Terrence (the star of DID) for Gauri. Her story started with Terrence, ended with Terrence and in between was Terrence everywhere. Just the thought of watching her favorite Terrence made her go weak in her knees. Her husband watched her with amusement. "Terrence haan!!" he said and gave Gauri a wink. "OK I will let you watch in peace. I will go and finish some work." Gauri thanked God again for such an understanding and loving husband.

He does the dishes, I watch DID on DVR (so that I can freeze and re-play my baby T :)) and my hubby calls him chhakka when I am watching DID 😆

They both giggled like little girls.

One of us is actually a little girl 😆

Gauri was in her late thirties but she looked no more than twenty five. Anju gave her a whistle when she looked at the beautiful Gauri.

awwww....you have been way too kind to me🤗 Even took a few years off me 😆

"Terrence" she said and Terrence turned to look back at her. His eyes held hers. He was mesmerized by Gauri's beauty. One of his producers started towards Gauri to ask her leave but Terrence stopped him and he crossed the room towards the door where Gauri was standing, his eyes soaking in the beauty of the beautiful angel standing in front of him. "Hi" he said as he extended his hand towards Gauri. His producer signaled him to hurry but Terrence just ignored him. It was fairly visible that he was smitten with Gauri. "What is your name? Are you a student?"he asked. " Gauri" she said and deliberately ignored the second part of his question. "A beautiful name just like you" he smiled.

This one is my absolute favorite part 😆

"Listen Gauri, I am getting late now for some appointments although I wish I could cancel them and talk to you but I am free tomorrow, would you like to have dinner with me? His eyes looked imploringly at her. ..............She lowered her gaze and said "Terrence, although I adore you but I cannot accept the dinner date. I am married to the most wonderful man and I am a mother of two kids.But thank you so much."Gauri said.

😡 yeh kis janam ka badla ley rahey ho aap mujh sey, author jee! Kam sey kam khayalon mei toh hamara milan ho janey detey😡 😆

Terrence looked shocked and hurt and said "It's OK, I understand, if I was in your place I would have done the same but I will never forget you. This is one of the most beautiful moments of my life." He gave Gauri a tight hug and whispered good bye in her ear and left.

**SIGH** chalo, ek hug toh dilwaya aur Terence sey itnee meethi meethi baatein toh karwayeen😍 Maaf kiya for not letting me go on a dinner date with that man-candy.

Gauri turned and walked back with a heavy heart, her eyes welled up with tears. What has she done? She was wondering as she rang the bell at her home. Her husband opened the door smiling, "How was the show and Terrence?" Just looking at her husband made Gauri realize that she had done the right thing. Nothing could come between her husband and her. She ran into her husband's arms and said" I love you."

Yeah, awright😡 😆

This is the essence of an Indian woman.

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I absolutely loved the above story. I am still shocked though. I am not used to folks being so kind to me here in DM 😆 Whoever the author is ( I feel it's Summer), I realize you wanted to make it up for me. I really appreciate your kindness, your efforts and your time that you took out of your busy schedule to write something that brought a smile to my lips.

Yes, I had a smile on my face the entire time I was reading your story. You did nail one thing though - I drool and drool hard but that's pretty much where I stop. In reality, I have never gone back stage or taken an autograph:) Never felt the need. I don't want to come out of the bubble I create around my image of Terence or any other celebrity. I feel once you see them in person, most of the magic drains out of that bubble. They cease to be larger than life from close quarters and the image in our hearts takes a severe beating😳

Thanks for making my day🤗 I loved this story despite couple of my reactions above😆. I have copied/pasted it on my hard drive:)


Edited by Gauri_3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: souro


I don't think it's Gauri. A mushy tale about 'essence of an Indian woman' doesn't really click with Gauri's image. Such essence of Sati-Savitri tales is more for LJ (now JR) kind of people.



Sati Savitirs won't even allow themselves to drool over anyone except their husbands. Paap jo lageyga unhey😆

Yeah, the story is really mushy. I would never write something like this. But I loved reading it!
Edited by Gauri_3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: _DrEaM_

I wonder if gauri sarina and K would like to tell Empti the author about what exactly happened at the car park 😆



I wish Empti the author had the guts to spill those beans here😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: *Woh Ajnabee*

Entry six is funny. 😆 Good job, Empti. 😛

And Entry 7 ... I want the name of that author. I love GD to death, but ain't no way I'm handing her my only backstage pass to go see Terrence, when she will so brutally refuse to go on a date with him! 😡 But, jokes apart, I seriously went into Terrence-haven reading that entry! Beautifully written by .... well, I'm still trying to figure that out. 😆



😆😆 but but but I got a "tight" hug!

Yeah, that one is my favorite so far!

😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Any guesses to the first entry?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: angie.4u

Any guesses to the first entry?


I have a clue (see my post on page 3), but thats it for the moment 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Why're you guys attributing entry #6 to Empti?? I mean what are the clues that made you think that way??

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