SwaDarsh OS Series ~ Those Moments | Post-marriage Moments - Page 2

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Sarcy.. This was.. This was sooo good.. ❤️
I'm just stuck at a point if this would have been the way, Adarsh had proposed to Swadheenta..

for me this is the most romantic proposal ever written by any writer for any couple ever..

too good... Super.. Super.. Super amazing.. ❤️

I'm gonna share your OS with my friends on Facebook... I'm sure they gonna love it too.. 😃

Btw are you on facebook???

Thanks for the Pm loved the first bit

Love it!! Please add me to your PM list. Need this writing to keep me from mourning lack of SwaDarsh scenes in the last episode

Sarcy, loved it to the core.

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome and lovely

looking forward to read more

Thank you! :) Glad to hear that.

Beautiful!!!!! You wrote it well, it was we were watching it...👏👏👏 Loved, that it was string of diamonds and not a ring...more strength and shine to their love ⭐️

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Just loved it. Such a beautiful n cute proposal. I again fall for them

Just Awesome

Thank you, Alu! 😃

I'm glad to hear that. That's the magic of SwaDarsh. 😳

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Thank you, Alu! 😃

I'm glad to hear that. That's the magic of SwaDarsh. 😳

Originally posted by: Justice2016

I opened this bcoz I was left in wanting for more in the proposal scene (In show) .

Though I loved the pigeons,purani dilli and sirf salary mein kaam chalana padega dialogue with the realistic touch ,yet , the endless chasing this IAS officer had done for Swa leaving his high responsibility Job , was not in line with Proposal .

Either you could have shown Adarsh as a serious lover who had grown bonding in a more mature way or a cheesy stalker one. Proposal scene was something I found little amiss .

## Thats why I actually loved the proposal scene you have written here .I love realistic stuff but still I loved it as it was more in line of characterisation of Adarsh .Thanks . 😊

# Btw its really admirable to write a gripping story with all the visualization readers can do .And the typing is more so . 👏

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Oh Man Sarcy. That was something.

I had planned on reading it after the show, but couldn't wait. I could so imagine the entire scene playing out in front of my eyes. And I was hoping Swadheenta will take her time saying "Yes".

Simply loved it.

How nicely he redefined the meaning of flowers, chocolates and diamonds in their life. And loved the "Me" will be "We".

Cannot wait to read the next bit.