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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Superb.. I am glad you are maintaining the characters of Jaidev and Jaya even while you find common ground for them..

Funny that you read Jaidev as protective and caring in the club scene too. Based on the scene, I was thinking of writing an OS too, just in some other direction but starting from the same point.

Enjoyed your work.. do continue soon. This has great promise.

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advena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: c85rie
Superb.. I am glad you are maintaining the characters of Jaidev and Jaya even while you find common ground for them..
Funny that you read Jaidev as protective and caring in the club scene too. Based on the scene, I was thinking of writing an OS too, just in some other direction but starting from the same point.

Enjoyed your work.. do continue soon. This has great promise.

Thank you! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it!

And as for the club OS - OMG!

Please do!

I've been dying to read more Jaya-Jaidev - and the Club scene was a phenomenal scene, the little nuances, the way he looks up, and just shakes his head no - literally broke my heart!

I'll be keeping an eye out for that OS!

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Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Gripping!

Given the kind of equation shared by these two, forming love between them through the story is an uphill task, and things like instinct and feelings like protectiveness do come in handy for starters. Awaiting the next chapter to know where Jaya has disappeared to and whether or not, she's got herself into trouble considering the fact that she chose to walk out on the same day that the skirmish occurred.

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advena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Gripping!

Given the kind of equation shared by these two, forming love between them through the story is an uphill task, and things like instinct and feelings like protectiveness do come in handy for starters. Awaiting the next chapter to know where Jaya has disappeared to and whether or not, she's got herself into trouble considering the fact that she chose to walk out on the same day that the skirmish occurred.

Thank you!

And yes! I think Jay for one has spent so much time resenting Jaya he doesn't really know how not to - so let's see how that works out for him!

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Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

When's the next update coming up? 😃

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

A great update it was! 😊

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Heart breaking to read about Jaya;s past.

From personal experience, i have come to learn that endurance is highest in people who have been exposed to a lot of pain and turmoil in their lives. The reason Jaya has been able to ensure a loveless marriage and rejection with such poise is because she had endured, endured worse things in her past.

After knowing her past, and knowing that she married him mainly to fulfill her dead father's wish, I wish Jai could at-least award her the consolation that everything that has gone wrong is not her fault. He can try and be more civil towards her if not anything else.

An arranged marriage is not a alien concept in our society. And most couples dont start off being head over heels in love with their partners. But as long as you are willing to try, love happens, dependability happens, sharing happens, compromises happen, life happens... I don't know that love for this couple is an easy phase to get into. But I hope they start giving everything else a chance. If not love, a life of togetherness is also wonderful.

Amazing.

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: advena

Thank you! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it!

And as for the club OS - OMG!

Please do!

I've been dying to read more Jaya-Jaidev - and the Club scene was a phenomenal scene, the little nuances, the way he looks up, and just shakes his head no - literally broke my heart!
I'll be keeping an eye out for that OS!

It was just a thought... Not sure if I'll end up writing this one. Dahleez comes quite late and I am tired to my bones so not a regular viewer. But love .. love the Jaidev Jaya angle.. I am not sure I want them to fall in love at this point. Jaidev maybe a decent brother, son, beurocrat but he is not a decent husband. He has burnt too many bridges for him and Jaya to get their happily ever after. And I cannot start another long story when I have already started on Devakshi just 2 weeks back. But maybe at some point, if they move me to the extent the story spills out of me.

Btw waiting for your update eagerly. By my estimates soon, right?

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
Heart breaking to read about Jaya;s past.
From personal experience, i have come to learn that endurance is highest in people who have been exposed to a lot of pain and turmoil in their lives. The reason Jaya has been able to ensure a loveless marriage and rejection with such poise is because she had endured, endured worse things in her past.

After knowing her past, and knowing that she married him mainly to fulfill her dead father's wish, I wish Jai could at-least award her the consolation that everything that has gone wrong is not her fault. He can try and be more civil towards her if not anything else.

An arranged marriage is not a alien concept in our society. And most couples dont start off being head over heels in love with their partners. But as long as you are willing to try, love happens, dependability happens, sharing happens, compromises happen, life happens... I don't know that love for this couple is an easy phase to get into. But I hope they start giving everything else a chance. If not love, a life of togetherness is also wonderful.

Amazing.

I loved your thoughts. I know the like button is there, but I thought this deserved a shoutout.. life happens, love happens.. Both of them are doing a great disservice to each other and themselves, with this limbo. She just told the family the bitter truth and he apparently as always remained mum. And then just like before everything was normal.. in their kind of way.. a pretense.. but for whose benefit? Either Jaidev has to give this marriage a try or Jaya has to move out towards her own life path. This is just misery at its best.