~ Building Life ~ (A Swadarsh FF) ~ Note, Page 76

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Meghna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Amazing Priti...

Kuch tou acha hua..

Aab appa nai honge tou swadheenta k liye better hoga...

Aab bus Adarsh bhi thoda soch me swadheenta k baare mein...

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: olsen_124
Lovely update.Adarsh miyaa will have to make up for his mistake.Loved how the SInha clan helped Asad for staying with freedom.

Thanx for PM
Update soon

Thanks. Yup. They have all become good friends now. They will help each other.

I am happy you liked the update

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: Aalina.
Pri appa😡 ka murder kar kar do please..please please.. Yaha to atleast ye kar sakte hain..
I agree with both jaidev n jaya(unfortunately).

Abhay n asad r always a rockstar.

I have achieved the impossible.. you agree with Jaya and Jaidev 😆

Appa is not a bad person either. He is orthodox, egoistic, short-tempered, control-freak... but not a bad person. He will come around, sooner or later. But tab tak chori chori, chupke chupke 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: Aimsha
Thanks for the update dear it was a fabulous part amazing now seems next part shall be an interesting one I suppose

Thank you. Was this one not interesting? 😆

I will try and make the next one interesting. Hope you like it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: sushfiza
hey priti
superb writing!!👍🏼
so d plan worked out
waiting fr d next part

Thank you Fiza. Yes, at the end of the day Abhay DCP hai. Doctor toh manega hi 😆. Just kidding. The doctor has seen these guys together, and he knows how Swadheenta's life was / is in danger. He is a good man. He was bound to help.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: Dumpling
Abhay n asad cutie pies yes n appa ka murder r may b accident 😛

Kitne saare appa ke dushman 😆. Nahi nahi. Aisa na karo. He will come around I think. We will see. I am not sure at the moment. 🤔

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
👏 rest of members of brothers league -Jay-Abhay-Asad Is there to Help SwAdarsh
I feel asad should be with brothers .
Jay-Adarsh-Abhay-Asad (i wish, could C) 👏 at least the way u portrayed in ur FF

and JJ fight 😆
Abhay 🤣
poor Asad 🤗
Actually Abhay-Asad both r such A Sweetheart ,always think about others & SwAdarsh is their 1st priority..
😆 Doctor too team up with them ,
U r right 👍🏼
Many people r standing against Appa 😆 👏 🥳

Thanks Sana. Asad was a very sweet guy. Abhay and Asad became such good friends. I am sure if things were normal, these brothers would hangout together and have lots of fun. I just want to portray that aspect atleast in my story.

Jaya and Jaidev had a rough start even in my FF. They were not in love. But they have accepted their marriage, and are now content with each other.

So, team Swadarsh appa pe bhaari padega 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Kaaveetaaj
life is a...

🤔😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Fun update, Pri! I was 🤣 during Jaya and Jaidev's argument. 😆
I love how you are creating a bond between Asad and Abhay. Had these two been alive in the show, we wouldn't have seen the end of their bandarbaazi! 😆

I'm excited to see what these four will come up with together to wake up Adarsh and get Appa to his senses.

You may be surprised by the next part because it may not be these 4 that make Adarsh realize his mistake (at-least not completely 😆)

I love Abhay and Asad, and they will all be the nautanki's in my FF. No death's or losses in my story.