NEW KaSum OS (Drabble) by MyAna - Page 4

Originally posted by: Duskybeauty30

Awww this qas so so romantic!!! I wonder how much I love them! Always ,there is lways a new feeling while reading their stuff... so lovely pair and so mature relationship which you showed...amazing, just superb!!!! Please do continue, will wait!! :D

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Omg!!! This was killer.Fabulous job,I loved loved loved it!!! Pls post the next soon,and update ur other story too,I'm waiting 😊 lots of love and hugs!!! Tc 😊

Originally posted by: aashup

ufff...😳 finally i cud able to register myself in this forum it took my lot of tym and energy for this, but trust me after reading this TS i wanted to register myself in this forumat any cost, just to tell you that how beautifully you have written this, seriously i cud able to connect myself with this story so easily specially the KISS that was so damn imperfectly perfect just wanted to say keep writing and plzz post chapter 2 soon😊

Originally posted by: crystalmoon

awww it waas such a romantic chapter i loved it

Originally posted by: -De.De-

Reserved! :)

OMG!! I love this drabble so much!! I had to re-watch the bua wedding episode in order to enjoy their moment. Lovely OS, hun!! I love how Kapil was so worried about Sumona that he kept fumbling.😆 This was sooo cute and adorable!!

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

My first TS on ManTu (based on the scene where Rekha was there nd Kapil said tht Manju's hair never look combed)

Their first kiss

Oh Wow... you are on a roll, hun!! New OS.. amazing!!!👏👏 I really loved reading it, the kiss was adorable and hawtt.☺️ Though, I am slightly confused on few points, I hope you can cealr them out for me. Is it Manju/Bitto story or Kapil/Sumona? Because you said, it's ManTu but you kept addressing Bitto as Kapil and also after the shoot it seemed more like it was Kapil & Sumona rather than Bitto & Manju. And also, just out of curiosity, if they are living together, same room and all then how it was their first kiss? (as you said, it's their home.)😳 I am sorry, I don't mean to hurt you or anything, but I was slightly confused. I apologize if you are hurt.

Originally posted by: -De.De-

OMG!! I love this drabble so much!! I had to re-watch the bua wedding episode in order to enjoy their moment. Lovely OS, hun!! I love how Kapil was so worried about Sumona that he kept fumbling.😆 This was sooo cute and adorable!!

Originally posted by: -De.De-

Oh Wow... you are on a roll, hun!! New OS.. amazing!!!👏👏 I really loved reading it, the kiss was adorable and hawtt.☺️ Though, I am slightly confused on few points, I hope you can cealr them out for me. Is it Manju/Bitto story or Kapil/Sumona? Because you said, it's ManTu but you kept addressing Bitto as Kapil and also after the shoot it seemed more like it was Kapil & Sumona rather than Bitto & Manju. And also, just out of curiosity, if they are living together, same room and all then how it was their first kiss? (as you said, it's their home.)😳 I am sorry, I don't mean to hurt you or anything, but I was slightly confused. I apologize if you are hurt.

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

thank u for ur comment, always make me feel happy😳

ND YES WILL UPDATE BOTH STORIES ASAP ONLY FOR U😆

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

thank u sooo much for reading, liking nd asking questions on my story😳😃

The story is about Bittu nd Manju... Bittu is a nickname for Kapil nd in my story the name Bittu didn't fit, Kapil was better in the scenes (thts wht I felt😳) nd also only Dadi nd Bua call him Bittu, Manju always calls him as Sharmaji so Kapil was next to this,,,,Bt I have to admit I didn't pay much attention to this I jst payed attention to write Manju instead of Sumona so yeh miss ho gaya😆

I really tried to make it a ManTu TS bt I guess I'm not so good at it bt this story was suiting more on ManTu then on KaSum (atleast I felt so😆😳) otherwise it would be 100% pakka a KaSum story.

And coming to ur last point: Yes, I wanted to show them as a married couple...they r married for some years bt didn't took their relationship to the next level then friendship...the story is based on this topic, tht they r soo much engrossed in working nd cnwk which influences their personal life nd which side effects this has on their life...Maybe Chapter 2 will show u the point of my story😃

Puuhhh, I really hope tht I could clear ur confusions (if u still have some then u can ask me again I'll not mind😃)

P.S: I really do not mind ur questions its totally ok...infact I'm really happy tht u hav read it with soo much attention tht u noticed these kind of details...U can ask me anything at any time, I will not mind it..instead I'll be happy answering u ur questions😳

Ah.. now I got it. Thank you hun for explaining it. I guess the chapter 2 will be more explaining. Will wait foe next chapter.😃