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Her pacing the room, fidgeting her sari mirrored her impatience and anxiety.

"Bahu, did he come yet?" Asked an old women who just entered the room with a frown.

"No Dadi, not yet", she answered dumping herself on the couch with distraught.

"Ye Bitto bhi na", the lady left the room shaking her head with exasperation.

It's about time to check out the hotel and they have been intimated twice already.

Yet there is no clue about him. How and where will they find him in that Dubai?

Her chain of thoughts got disturbed with some movement in the room. She slowly lifted her head to find him entering the room.

She sighed in relief, "Sharma Jii, where have you been? Come fast, we are already late..." She rushed towards the other end where the luggage is kept.

She stopped in her tracks when she heard him call her, "Manju..."

She turned around to find him forwarding his one hand which has a packet to her, folding the other arm.

She raised her brow in question, for which he gestured with eyes to take the packet.

"What is this?" She asked observing the packet in her hand from all directions.

"Apparently, a gift", he said folding his arms.

That's when she saw his face attentively. There is a different glow in his face and a new glint in his eyes. A small smile, which is playing on his lips, the small dimple that formed, made him look even cuter.

A small smile formed on her lips seeing him, "For whom?"

He rolled his eyes," For the princess of wales".

She kept her hands on her hips hearing his reply," Hmm??"

"Arre.. For you dumbo."

Repressing her smile, she unwrapped the packet only to find a large box of branded lipsticks of all shades.

The events of the previous evening crossed her mind where he said that buying lipsticks for her will cost him more, when Bipasha who came for the magazine interview, suggested her to buy lipsticks.

She is totally awed and only a word escaped her lips in a mere whisper, "For me??"

He rolled his eyes again, "No..no... for the wife of my Dadi's pota."

She is too numb to react and is constantly staring at him.

He with a smirk, pulled her closer, pecked her cheeks which made her come back to senses and she blushed looking down.

He kept both his arms on her shoulders, leaned closer and whispered observing her intently, "How much big your lips are..."

She frowned and pouted listening this and he continued smirking, "...that much beautiful and adorable is your smile."

She beamed listening his words.

"Achcha sun..." he sounded serious gaining her attention, for which she nodded her head that he has her attention,"...select the colour you want to paint our bedroom wall, from your lipstick collection, so that you can kiss the wall wearing that." He concluded muffling his laugh seeing her face for that.

She hit his arm when they heard a lady calling his name.

"Coming bua...", he answered that lady and turned to her and said, pecking her cheek,"..come fast.."

But before can leave the room, he heard her call him, "Sharma Ji.."

He turned when she came near him, stood onthe tips of her toes to match his height and brought her lips closer to his cheek.

"Shangun ki Pappi??" He asked smiling.

She shook her head denying," That's Dadi's department"

"Then??" He asked with a frown.

"Shararat ki..."

Before he can comprehend that, she bit his cheek and rushed outside the room.

He caressed his cheek where she bit and smiled broadly.

Those are the lips, he made fun of but those are the same lips which filled his heart with warmth with the brightest of the smiles.

These are the people who often bestowed curses upon each other in the presence of others.

But devoted one another by hearts.

"Main maike chali jaaungi", she often threatened him.

"Chal dafa ho jao", he often shooed her away.

But both knew very well that they cannot live without each other, especially he.

He knew very well that she has the knowledge of the fact that he is vulnerable without her.

He is the moon, she is the radiance.

He is the lid, she is the pupil.

He is her bliss, she is his mirth.

He is her Bitto and she is his Manju.

And they are our ManTu.


Hmm...How's it?❓

My first ever drabble on ManTu..🤔

I made this getting inspired from...-De.De- who does a great work on KaSum.👏


I didn't copy it from any FF/SS/OS or film/show/book, but if you feel so, please let me know.
Please notify me the mistakes


Please don't forget to leave your comments.
Bouquets and brickbats all are welcome.

For those who are interested in my other works,


My other works
(On Maaneet)
(I wrote some on RishBala, but discontinued so not giving the links)


A light-hearted, fun, romantic(err I feel so) SS



Is it a sin, to be in Love with your Guardian?


A cute love story with less emotional, bucket-filling scenes.


(completed)


NOOO
(completed)


You can catch my other works in my blog
(except OSs, nothing is completed😆)


https://ravzmadhubala.wordpress.com/


Have a beautiful Day😊

But before going...

Char page comment ka...

Kaam aapko main soumpta..

aa...

ae.. aa..

Char page comment ka...

Kaam aapko main soumpta..

Aap puri na karne se...

Mera husband aapko tokta..

Oo..

Yo Yo..Mrs. Sittuu...

Oo...

😆


Sorry for mistakes...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!! OH EM GEE!! OMG!! This is PERFECT!! OMG... it's so beautiful that I wanna cry. *sniff* I can totally imagine them like this. Please do write more, I so want to read more on Manju & Bitto. While I do Sumona/Kapil I would love to see more Manju & Bitto.❤️
Thank you for writing this.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -De.De-

OMG!! OH EM GEE!! OMG!! This is PERFECT!! OMG... it's so beautiful that I wanna cry. *sniff* I can totally imagine them like this. Please do write more, I so want to read more on Manju & Bitto. While I do Sumona/Kapil I would love to see more Manju & Bitto.❤️
Thank you for writing this.🤗

Thank you...Thank you...Thank you sooo much🤗😃

It's really very overwhelming to get such a response from a great writer like you😳😊

Thank you..


I really love your KaSum...And you are my inspiration to write in this forum..
Thank you once again😊

P.S. I really love your edit...'Haaye meri Jaan'.
It's really really awesome⭐️
Edited by Sittu_pe_Lattu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yipeee Finally a Manju-Bitto OS 👏
loved it, write soon and add me to the pm list 😊
This really made my day.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalmoon

Yipeee Finally a Manju-Bitto OS 👏

loved it, write soon and add me to the pm list 😊
This really made my day.

Haha...Thank you so much😃
definitely, I'll😊
Thank you once again for sparing the time to read and comment😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOOW...Just read it nd fell in love with this...never thought of a scene like this...yaar u r an amazing writer...loved how u created the whole atmosphere...so well written...
now u also got the task of writing on KaSum/ManTu...
ur fault coz mujhe to teri lat lag gayi😳

already waiting for the next😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sittu_pe_Lattu

Thank you...Thank you...Thank you sooo much🤗😃

It's really very overwhelming to get such a response from a great writer like you😳😊

Thank you..


I really love your KaSum...And you are my inspiration to write in this forum..
Thank you once again😊

P.S. I really love your edit...'Haaye meri Jaan'.
It's really really awesome⭐️


Great writer like me?😲 (Yeh kab howa?😆) Honestly, friend... this drabble, you wrote.. is absolutely MIND BLOWING!! It's so cute, adorable.. it gave me too many feels.☺️ I thought about writing on Manju/Bitto many times but I guess I've always too occupied with Kapil/Sumona to actually pay attention on M/B and today you've written it, this drabble made my whole day. I have read it like 5 times now.☺️
Thank you for liking the edit, it's free to use.😉 Will hopefully make more on them.😳

Do continue to write on M/B, I am too in love with your writing.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manju/Bittoo drabble. Bring it on. Loved it Loved it. So beautiful and well written. And you put some dialogs from various shows. I remember that princess of wales walla comment. 😃

👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sittu_pe_Lattu

Char page comment ka...

Kaam aapko main soumpta..

aa...

ae.. aa..

Char page comment ka...

Kaam aapko main soumpta..

Aap puri na karne se...

Mera husband aapko tokta..

Oo..

Yo Yo..Mrs. Sittuu...

Oo...

😆




drabble on ManTu..😃😊

Nice name innovative ...👏

drabble was cute awsm + your song its good🤗

you r Mrs Sittu🥺 (vaise to I like Bittu but still I feel like competition😉😉)

i think its ur first OS on ManTu am i right ??😊
Edited by SanchiIndu - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

WOOW...Just read it nd fell in love with this...never thought of a scene like this...yaar u r an amazing writer...loved how u created the whole atmosphere...so well written...

now u also got the task of writing on KaSum/ManTu...
ur fault coz mujhe to teri lat lag gayi😳

already waiting for the next😉

I cannot thank you enough for the love and appreciation. 🤗
Thank you so much 😃

Haha ... I dunno whether I'll be able to write another drable on ManTu or not...

But am very happy with the response for this one. 😃

Thank you once again 😊


P.S. You are such a beautiful writer, loved your OS to the core. ❤️

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