::Abhimanyu & Tejali Heaven 2:: Updated pg14/p1 - Page 6

OH MY GOSH !!!
when you told me it was updated, i got exited and now (**behosh**)

But that was so great, you are such a great writer !!👏 👏 👏

Do hope to see more 😃 😃

Awww.... that was so ...., got no words to describe 👏

hope a new surprize comes with this like rebirth or in some new way 😉 😳

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

WHATTTTTTTTT??????????????????????
NOO they cant dieee....NO WAYYYY
MAKE THEM ALIVE IKAAA....
luveddddd the part soo muchhhhh
it wuz reeleee shocking, surprising and romanticcc
truly enjoyed readin it...
just luvvv their dialogues....
the story goes with the title
wonderful writeup ika
keep it uppp
luvv u
Daisy11!

Sorry Asma..Can't make them alivde here but will definately make them alive in my next short story😉😃
Thanx for liking it...will continue soon😃

Originally posted by: payal_r

OH MY GOSH !!!
when you told me it was updated, i got exited and now (**behosh**)

But that was so great, you are such a great writer !!👏 👏 👏

Do hope to see more 😃 😃

Awww.... that was so ...., got no words to describe 👏

hope a new surprize comes with this like rebirth or in some new way 😉 😳

😆behosh hi hogayi 😉 hosh mein ajao ab
Aww..thankyou...😃
arre baba it's a short story na, not Fan-Fic...so this is anjaam na....
Will write new one soon😃

Originally posted by: sim_indian

OMG ika!!..
i was seriosuly not expecting this!!..
intense story..
i agree with daisy..make them alive..lol..maybe in the next birth..
and i just love reading your stories!..hope to see some more soon..
good job, ur a wonderful writer 😃

I know, maine pehle hi kaha tha...ending will not be so good😳
Thnaks for appericiating my work...will start New SHORT STORY soon😊

Originally posted by: suchi_dev2006

just stupendous ika, i think u have done the right justice with the characters, somehow I feel that the tragic end is more effective & lasts for long . initially humko dukh hota hai aur hum tragic end ko accept nehi kar sakte hai lekin ye humari akhome asu bhi late hai, hume sochne ke liye majboor kar dete hai, I like this one veeeeeeeeeeeeery much.believe me , iska asar bohot din tak rahega. very very well done ika though I know u r enough brilliant & don't need anything to do such a creative job.
take my loooooooooooooooooooooooooooong 🤗 this time.

Glad that you understood.....😃 this is totally right. you know if I only kill Teji so Abhi could not live in peace aswell...coz somehow Teji was important in his life than Sia...so i had to killl both...u noticed in the end abhi did not let her fall from cliff alone, he wanted to save her..he did not wanted her to go away from his life😳😃

😆 😆
as you say 😉

cant wait for next short story 😉 😃

OMG....I'm so loving this song and it perfectly goes with Abhi-Teji...

Meri bukkal de vich churni
Meri bukkal de vich churni
Meri bukkal de vich churni
Kehno kok sunawan ni
Kehno kok sunawan ni
Chori chori nikal gaya te
Jag vich peh gaya shor ni
Meri bukkal de vich churni
Meri bukkal de vich churni
Kehno kok sunawan ni
Kehno kok sunawan ni
Chori chori nikal gaya te
Jag vich peh gaya shor ni
Meri bukkal de vich churni
Meri bukkal de vich churni

(this is just first line....whole song is like 3 pages long (WD))
Imagine Abhi trying to love Tejali on this song 😳 😳 😳 😍

Aww... 😆

whats this song in ?? 😊

yea..im trying to find this song too..
which movie/album is it from..

btw..awsome song! 😃