*Fan Fiction Corner* - Page 2

Part 22

By: Sallu_lover & Day_Dreamer

Friday's Part

Abhi got out of his car n he walks n sees this girl from the back n trying to look y she looks familiar, abhi looks at her n its NONE other then ANU, anu is shocked to see abhi in front of her she looks around abhi is about to ask her, she tries to run away from abhi, but abhi catches her. He is asking her question suddenly Anu's Boyfriend comes n then the B/F starts fighting with abhi n he punches abhi n gets hurt abit n abhi falls in the ground anu n her B/F runsaway from abho.

Abhi is stil lying on the floor everything is just abit blury for him so stranger helps him n he says iam a doctor don't worry everything will be fine by the way my name is Raj Malhotra Dr. Raj malhotra, raj takes Abhi to his house.

Raj is putting bandages on abhi when abhi's fone rings he picks the fone n its NONE other then Tej, Tej has called abhi to invite him to Pratab's surprise party when he is in raj's house, raj is putting the bandages as he kinda hurts Abhi n abhi says ouch n tej says r u alright abhi says i just had a small fight. Tej is about worried about him but abhi says he is fine.

The next day Teji n Priya sees pratab but none of them wishes him, pratab feels really down n h says to himself that its my b'day n no one has wished me yet, maybe they don't know its my b'day. Pratab asks Tej that i will take to the buearu but she makes an excuse n she says she has to meet a friend in the mall so pratab leaves n goes to work.

Teji n Priya decides that they will call ACP n Make sure that Pratab is busy at work, Teji calls ACP n Tells him that keep pratab busy at office so he doesn't go out anywhere. ACP asks y so teji tells that she is aving a suprise party for him n he SHOULDNT find out about it. So now Pratab is in the office n down that he has to work on his b'day n no one has wishes him yet.

Priya starts decorating the house for him, n tei says i will go n buy him a gift n also the cake. Teji is walking in the mall n looks for something unique so she sees this lovely decoration piece for pratab, so she goes inside the shop to buy it but the sales man says that its already sold, another lady bought it, so teji asks where is the lady who bought this n the salesman points the lady.

The End

PART 23

By: Sallu_lover & Day_Dreamer

Teji goes to the lady n says excuse me? The lady turns n says Yes, Teji is shocked to see coz its none of the then anu, anu is shocked to see teji too n tej starts firing her with her questions and why she left abhi n how much abhi was hurt when she left him. Anu say to tej u have no right asking me y i left abhi, so both argues and tej says she is not here to fight with her, tej says atleast abhi has the right to know y u left him. Tej also asks her that if can get that gift from her n she can get something else but tej wants that gift for someone.,

Pratab goes to the buearu n walks to the office n everyone is acting normal n no one wishes him, soo pratab gets about upset that no one has remembered his birthday n no one has wished him yet not even ACP, so ACP asked him to work with him today. ACP asks pratab y he has that sad face on, he asks if everything is ok with teji n pratab says no no sir everything is fine. ACP says cheer up if nothing is wrong.

Anu n Tej r still in the shop, tej says how could u break abhi's heart n go out with someone else, he really luved ya, anu says wat about you, you are being two timer plays with abhi and getting married t pratab, anu says to tej first clear up ur own mistakes n choose who you wanna be with and then judge other people. Anu gives the Gift to teji and walks away from her and teji is in tears n remembering her old days with abhi n then how used to tell her how much he loves anu, and then remembering pratab how much he helped her out at time when she needed someone the most.

Teji goes n sits in this coffee club and she is very sad about wat anu said to her. She thinks for while n then goes n gets fresh n then goes n gets pratab's cake, while waiting for the cake, she calls up priya how she is going with the decoration at the house, priya tells teji that she is nearly fnished n teji tells her that she is bringing pratab's cake now soo everything is nearly done. Abhi thanks raj for looking after him and they become friends and then abhi leaves.

ACP is trying to keep pratab busy as much as he can so he doesn't go to his house or soo, so ACP decides to send Pratab somewhere to keep him busy with office work until its evening n by then priya and teji finishes preparing for the party. So ACP gives this file to pratab and asks him to go and investigate this place, and pratab is just looking abit shock and ACP says any problem pratab, he says no sir.

Its evening and the house is full of decoration and guests starts coming so priya n tejali decides that its time to call pratab and give him a scare, so priya calls pratab and say pratab plz help me and tejali then priya makes all these background sounds as if someone is attacking her, then priya shouts no teji are you alright, pratab is really freaking out n rushes to get in his car n drives soo fast to get him as he thinks someone is trying to hurt priya n teji. Pratab reaches his home its very dark outside of his house so get runs towards his house and the door is already opened, he enters the house and its very dark n he shouts priya!!!! Tejali!!!!! Suddenly Tejali shouts n lol pratab is looking around and then the light is one n everyone is saying HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pratab is shocked and soo surprised that everyone actually remembered his birthday.

Abhi is driving and while he is driving he sees anu, abhi forces anu to sit in his car n he drives soo fast as he is soo angry at anu for wat she did. Suddenly abhi stops the car in the middle of the road n asks anu why did she do this to him? WHY? Anu gets scared but anu shouts n says that because u love TEJALI abhi is shocked.

THE END

Part 24

By: Sallu_lover & Day_Dreamer

Sunday's Part

Pratab is really happy n surprised that everyone actually remembered his birthday. Everyone is enjoying the party, some of them are dancing "wheres the party tonite", everyone is having blast.

Meanwhile abhi is shocked of wat anu said to him, she said that he is in love with tejali, abhi shouts at anu and saying that he doesn't love tejali. Anu says that abhi were always with me but everytime you were only talking about tejali wat she was doing, remembering old days how you guyz were good friends and everything. Anu cries and said that i couldn't handle this anymore we were together but in your heart was tejali not me.

Anu cries and tells abhi sorry but this is the truth your in love with tejali and you don't even know, anu cries and walks away from abhi, where abhi is standing n not moving as he is surprised, then suddenly a tear comes out of his eyes and then goes down and sits on his knees and remember tejali, all the moments that they were together. Abhi remembers their friendship, wat a good friends they were and the remembers tejali n pratab together. He gets jealous and wipes his tears off.

Abhi is still not conviced about him loving tejali so his heart is saying he loves tejali but his mind is saying something else. Somehow he is starting to fall in love with tejali and thinking that the love of his life is tejali his true love his tejali and no one else. Abhi breaksdown and cries as tejali is about to marry his best friend pratab. Abhi is all heart broken.(sooo sad L)

Here in the party everyone is having a great time here priya and tejali talking to each when pratab comes and askes tejali to dance with him while dancing with tejali pratab asks tejali where is abhi, tejali says that she doesn't know its looks like that he is not coming. Pratab got upset coz its his birthday and his best friend is not there.

Abhi decides that he wanna go to the party, he is driving and while he is driving he remembers his

friendship with pratab wat a close friends they are. He then remembers

tejali, he turns his radio on so he can take his mind off, song starts playing !!!!!

bheegi bheegi si hai raaten

bheegi bheegi yaaden

bheegi bheegi baaten

bheegi bheegi aankhon mein kaisi nami hai

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha

sapnon ka saya palkon pe aya

pal mein hasaya pal mein rulaya

phir bhi yeh kaisi kami hai

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani

He reaches the party and pratab and tejali is surprised to see him there. Pratab goes to him and says he is soo happy too see him tonite. Abhi is just looking at tejali and pratab is asking him are u alright abhi. Abhi look at pratab with angry look and says im fine. Pratab asks him to come and enjoy the party. Priya comes and asks pratab and tejali to dance DJ plays wheres the party tonite and pratab and tejali are dancing here abhi is getting real jealous.

While in pratab's house party going, here in anu's house she is crying and holding abhi's pic and how much she loves him but she cant be with him because he loves tejali , and she cant be with him because she loves him alot but there is not point being with him when his heart is with someone else. Anu continue crying.

In the party Tejali stops dancing and stands in the corner of the room pratab says i will go and get you a drink, so pratab is getting a drink for her while abhi comes to tejali, tejali is asking him if he is alright as he told her that he didn't want to come to the party. Abhi says im fine, so tejali looks around and abhi is still looking at her in strange way, tejali is feeling abit uncomfortable she tries to go somewhere, but abhi holds her and says to her "I LOVE YOU TEJALI", tejali is shocked? Here pratab heard it too, he is in shock?

The eposide ends on showing Abhi-Prata-Tejali's faces.

~~~KOI APNA YAAN KOI AJNABEE~~~

Recap: Abhi realises he loves teji and goes to Pratap's party and says I LOVE U.

PART 25

Abhi holds her and says to her "I LOVE YOU TEJALI", tejali is shocked before Abhi could continue BAMMM Teji slaps him really hard on face. Abhi put has hand on cheeks and realises it was only a dream. (so sorry guyz to crush ur hopes but it was only a dream😳)

Abhi is really crying and regretting of losing his love. He thinks "Kyon mere saath aisa hua hai? Kyoun? Woh har pal mere paas thi aur es baat ka ehsaas bhi nahi howa mujhe. Par ab toh woh aur paratap…Par aisa kaise ho sakta hai? I know ke woh Pratap se pyaar nahi karti par phir ussey shaadi? Aur Yeh baacha? Agar yeh kya horaha hai? Kyon ho raha hai? I need to see Tejali, coz only she has all the answers to my questions. I have to see her". Abhi without thinking (his senses of thinking stops working for while from this shock, He doesn't know what he's doing, plz dont ask me how😳)

Pratap's house

It now 11 pm. Party is now finished and everyone is gone. Pratap, teji and priya are sitting and chatting Pratap is happy that teji and priya did this for him. After a while teji goes to room for rest and priya too goes. Pratap ready to go too but he hears a doorbell hie opens the door and shocked to see Abhi.

Abhi (not his senses): Mujhe teji se baat karni hai.

Pratap little hurt that Abhi forgot his bday.

Pratap: its very late and she's resting, talk to her in morning.

Abhi sohuts: noo..I want o see her and now. Now means NOW

Pratap tries to control Abhi, tries to stop him from shouting but Abhi is not listening.

Abhi: coz of u, I lost Tejali, She changed so much coz of u, u r not a friend but a worst enemy. My and teji's friendship broke coz of u, she's gone far from me coz of u. Tum jaise dost ke hote howe dushmano ki kya zarorat?

Pratap gets shocked and shouts: Abhi. Get out before I lose my temper and forget my limits and foget u r my friend.

Abhi holds pratap's collar and days: not leaving till I meet teji. Both are now struggling.

Someone shouts: STOP IT…..STOP IT….

Both turns around and are shocked to see teji. Teji comes there and see Abhi holding pratap's collar and she angrillry comes near them and holds Abhi's hands in order to free Pratap's collar. Teji is trying to free pratap's collar, while Abhi just stand there like statue staring at teji and feeling the effect he's having by the touch of teji's hands. Teji finally manages to free Pratap's collar and jolts and push abhi really hard. Abhi is now coming back in his senses realising what he's doing..

Teji is really furios and starts to gice both of them piece of mind

Teji (shouting): ENOUGH…ENOUGH…ABHI GET OUT rite NOW. Abhi shocked.

Teji (continuing): What has happened to u huh? Teji goes to abhi and starts pushing him backwards Pratap tries to stop her but she stops him.

Teji: tumne pratap ko kaha ke us jaise dost hote howe dushmanon ki zarooraat nahi, main kehti hon tumnhare jaise dost hote howe dushmanon ki zarooraat nahi. (abhi, pratap shocked), sincewhen he's ur enemy? KYA HOGAYA HAI TUMHE? Yeh wohi pratap jo tumhara bada bhai tha kabhi, itna badal gaye tum ke ajj es insaan ko dushman keh rahe ho woh bhi ajj jab uska bday hai.

Abhi gets shocked and remembers and pratap is trying to control his tears back.

Teji: for what u r so angry huh? Is that all for coz I didn't told u about me and pratap?

Abhi is looking down could not meet teji's eyes.

Teji: Well, Listen to me very carefully MR. ABHIMANYU. This is my life and I and only I have the right to take decisions about my life. This is my and Pratap's life and no on has right to interfere.

Abhi is now totallt shocked to hear all this from teji.

Teji: Tumhe main kyon batati, muhje kya tumse permission lekar pyaar karna chahiya tha? Tumne mujhse poocha tha yaan bataya tha jab ANU se pyaar kiya tha? MUJHSE POCHA THHA KE TEJI MAIN ANU SE PYAAR KARLON?

Abhi is now so close to breakdown but trying to hold himself, while pratap us also shocked to see teji behaving this way with abhi.

Teji: maine toh apne baap tak se nahi pocha yan bataya toh tumhe kyon batati?

Abhi: BAS…Plzz TEJI STOP.

Teji: get out abhi, tumne jis tarhan se pratap se behave kiya hai, main tumhe maaf nahi karongi, aur aj ke baad humari life mein interfere mat karna.

And She storms out from there, paratap goes from there and abhi totally heart broken leaves from there.

Song playing:

Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka

Mere Pyaar Wale Sabhi Phool Murjhaaye
Kaante Hi Khizaon Wale Mere Hisse Aa gaye
Mere Pyaar Wale Sabhi Phool Murjhaaye
Kaante Hi Khizaon Wale Mere Hisse Aa Gaye
Raas Na Aaya Mujhe Sapna Bahaar Ka
Raas Na Aaya Mujhe Sapna Bahaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka

Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka

Ashqon Ki maala Mere Gale Pehna Ke
Khush Hai Woh Ghar Kisi Aur Ka Basa Ke
Ashqon Ki Maala Mere Gale Pehna Ke
Khush Hai Woh Ghar Kisi Aur Ka Basa Ke
Kar Diya Khoon Dekho Mere Aitbaar Ka
Kar Diya Khoon Dekho Mere Aitbaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka

Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka

Naaz Tere Marke Bhi Uthaye Hain
Ashqon Ke Moti Teri Yaad Mein Bahaaye Hain
Naaz Tere Marke Bhi Uthaye Hain
Ashqon Ke Moti Teri Yaad Mein Bahaaye Hain
Sun Kabhi Shor Meri Dil Ki Pukaar Ka
Sun Kabhi Shor Mere Dil Ki Pukaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka

Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka

Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka

Accha Sila Diya Tune Mere Pyaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka
Yaar Ne Hi Loot Liya Ghar Yaar Ka

Screen splits in three and show 3 of them crying. (just imagine its on tv lol, but this song totally suits them dont u think?😉)

Teji in room is crying and talking to abhi's pic.

TEJI: plzz forgive, for my behaviour abhi, but things are not the same now. I did all this so u can understand the situation. Tumhe samajhna hoga ke ab sab bada lgaya hai. Aur shayad tum muhe bhula do aur shayad main tumhe". And she cries pratap comes there and teji hugs him tightly and cries.

Teji says to pratap while crying: plzz mujhe yahan se door le chalo, ab mujhse yeh sab bardashat nahi hota. Plzz pratap. And Pratap consoling her tells ok and thinks.

THE END

Written by: Day_Dreamer & Sallu_Lover

PART 26

KOI APNA YAAN KOI AJNABEE

~~Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee~~

Part 28

Abhi and ashiwini goes for investigation and come back and give acp update. Abhi asks for leave ACP have no choice but to say yes, coz he now don't have any excuse. Abhi now decides to go by car. Before he leaves he goes to ashwini and say sorry to her again and leaves.

Its getting dark now and abhi is on his way for a confratation from tejali.

Abhi (thinking): ajj chahe jo bhi hojaye main sach jan kar hi rahonga. Agar tejali mujhse pyaar karti hai toh usay muhjse kehna toh chahiye tha. Aur yeh sab jo kuch howa hai yeh kaise howa kya howa, kyon howa? I've to know the truth." he turns his face to passenger seat and is shocked to see teji there.

Abhi: Tejali tum yahan?

Tej: toh tum arahe ho mere pass

Abhi: haan, aur main tumhe apna banakar lekar jaonga

Tej: main intiezaar kar rahi hon. and teji's image vanishes, abhi is left looking and happy too.

(Background song)

Dill karta hai nadaniyaan sehta hai lakhon sitam

Dill karta hai nadaniyaan sehta hai lakhon sitam

Rahi.....chalna hai ab tere sang yonhiiii

Tujhe main dhoonta phiron meri har chahat hai tu

Tujhe main dhoonta phiron meri har chahat hai tu

Tujhe main dhoonta phiron meri har chahat hai tuuuuu…. (OMG...love this song😳😳)

Goa -

Pratap's room

its now 9 pm. Pratap and teji had a fine day except pratap's encounter with that girl in mandir. They both are sitting and chitting teji is still thinknig about that girl but doesn't say anything. Teji then wants to eat Choco cip Ice Cream and pratap says its now late and shops are closed teji tells him there's a resturant where they sell this ice cream but resturant is like 20 mins far but pratap says he'll get het that ice cream. Teji asks him to leave it but pratap says no he'll get her that ice cream.

Abhi reaches hotel sunshine, while pratap is waiting for escolator to come. Abhi enters the hotel pratap enters the lift and push ground floor bottun. Abhi goes to receptionist and asks her about tejali and pratap. receptionist tells him thier room no. He goes to escolator and puches the bottun, he's waiting outside while pratap is inside the lift. Ting...lift opens when suddenly abhi's keys fall from his hands he bend dwon to pick them up and pratap gets out from life and goes other way and abhi enters the lift.

Abhi reaches the floor and goes to teji's room after 2-3 knocknig he realises she's not in her room so he decides to check pratap's room, he knocks the door and teji opens the door thinkig its pratap.

Teji: Pratap..itni chaldi ag..

Teji gets so shcocked, could not beleive what her eyes were showing her. She wanted to scream to shout to say something but her voice refused to come out. While abhi was sooo happy to see her after 4 days btu these 4 days were like 4 janams for him. His eyes were constantly looknig at her, memorising her beautiful face😳. she was looknig more beautiful than usual. Teji tries so much not to look in his eyes, tires to steal glances from him. teji finally looks at him and find him staring at her and she mistakenly looks in his eyes and both share an eye contact, both's eyes are locked, both seemed to forgot about world around them. *faints*😳

(background song)

Naina ki mat maniya re naine ki mat suniyo re

Naina ki mat maniya re naine ki mat suniyo re

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

jag te jado phunke ge re jhag te jag te jadu

jag te jado phunke ge re neendein banjar karlienge

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

(Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳)

Finally teji breaks the silance and say: What r u doing here? why u came now? just leave ok.

Without waiting for abhi's answer she tries to close the doro but abhi put his hand in between so teji could not close the door. Abhi feels the pain and teji could see pain on his face so finally she lets him in.

Abhi: tejali..main

Teji turns around so she could not face abhi and says: just leave abhi, jsut go, mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.

Abhi: aur main yahan apne sawalon ka jawab lene aya hon aur woh leye baghar nahi joanga.

Teji: kaise sawal, kounse sawal? mere pass tumhare kissi sawal ka jawab nahi hai.

Abhi: hai sirf tumhare pass hi hai.

Teji: i don't want to answer ur any questions u just leave

Abhi gets angry and goes near her and hold from her arm and makes her turn around and look at him. Both are looking in each others eyes, abhi wants to hold her, kiss her soft lips. Teji is feelnig butterflies in her stomach

(background song)

Naina raat ko chalte chalte sawarga mein lejawein

Maigh malhar ke sapne bijaein haryani dekhlayein

Naina ko zabaan pe bharosa nahi ata

Likhad padhe na rasedh na khata

Naina ko zabaan pe bharosa nahi ata

Likhad padhe na rasedh na khata

Sari baat hawai re Sari baat hawai re

Teji tries to free herself but abhi is holding her tight.

Teji: abhi leave me, abhi its hurting

Abhi this instant release her arm, last thing he wants to do is to hurt her, give her pain. (awwwwww😳😳😳)

ABHI: i want the answers

Teji: which answers u talking about?

Abhi (shouts): YEHHH. and shows her that page from her own diary. teji is so shocked. Abhi shouts "READ THIS" and teji jolts and tries to read and is in totally shock, she doesn't know how to react. The truth she hid from him for her whoel life now is no longer hidden.

AbhI: i hope know u know which questions I'm talknig to u about?

Teji has tears rolling down her cheeks and she's standing life statue. Seeing her in this state abhi feels bad.

Abhi: teji plz speak, plz tell me the truth, I want to know the truth. Is it true?

Teji is still not reacting.

Abhi: plz react teji, plz do. kuch toh kaho kyayeh sach hai? kya tum mujhse?

Teji is still not looking at him

Abhi goes near her he then holds her face and teji gets shocked, wants him to stop but has no strength left in her. Abhi holds her face and makes her look at him. Teji feels an electric current flowing thorugh her body.

Abhi (looknig in her eyes): do u realyl loved me? always?

Teji did not dared to answer him he was still loonkgi in her eyes for an answer. teji lowers her eyes tears are fallnig like reain drops from her eyes and abhi could not see her like this. He uses him thumb and gently wipes her tears.

Abhi (wisphering and teji could feel abhi's breath on her face): bolo tejali kya yeh sach?

teji lowers her eyes, abhi sees this and is shocked.

Flashback

Abhi: teji, I really wanted to know anu if she loves me or not.

Teji: so did u confess ur feelings to her

Abhi nods his head as "YES" like a little boy

Teji: did u ask her if she loves u or not?

Abhi again nods his head in "YES"

teji: so

Abhi: So she just lowered her eyes and left

Teji: YESSS...

Abhi (in heartbroken voice): kya howa?

Teji hits him on head and says: arre budhu thats mean yes she do love u

Abhi: woh kaise?

Teji: arre baba when a guyz ask girl if she loves him or not and if girl lower her eyes that means yes

Abhi gets happy and jump in air

Flashback ends

Abhi feels on seventh sky, when suddenly teji moves away from him and turns away. Abhi become restless and then asks her

Abhi: teji I know u love me and now I want to tell you this too that I've realised that I too love you. U r my love teji, not anu. U were rite it was infatuation with anu but u r my true love. I love you.

Teji has so shocked and overwhelmed the 3 magic words she wanted to hear from him now she heard them. Teji turns around.

Abhi: teji but 1 thong is bothering me if u loved me for ur whoel life then how come u r with pratap? and how this Pratap's Baby? What happened?

Hearing this a thunder falls on teji's heart. Pratap's Baby teji could not bear this and now she knew what need to be done.

Teji with so much courage turns around looks at abhi and then speaks.

Teji: I think we need a correction Abhi. Main tumse Pyaar karti hon..

Abhi was on seventh sky

Teji: hon hani balke karti THI….

Abhi feels like someone has thorwn him down from seventh sky. His all dreams scattered ()

Teji: yea Abhi, I did loved u, but not anymore. Because you loved Anu na, remember Anu.

Abhi could not believe what he's hearing.

Teji: and now, when she dumped you and come to me and say that u love me? HUH…

Abhi trying to speak: teji..main

Teji (raising her voice): Main kya hah? Main kya? Ajj kehte ho ke anu se infatuation thi aur mujhse Pyaar hai kal kahoge ke muhjse infactuation hai aur tumhe kisi aur se Pyaar hai

Abhi shouts "Teji".

Teji: don't shout Abhi, I can shout too. Abhi the truth is I'm very happy with Pratap and we are going to begin our new life and I'm happy. Aur sach kahon mujhe tumhare es Pyaar par bharosa nahi hai.

Abhi goes totally red as someone has given him real tight slap, teji just shouts at him tells him to go away from there and from her life as sh'es happy with Pratap and she doesn't trust his love.

Teji: anu ke saath nahi nibha sakey mere saath kiya nibhaoge?

Teji pushes Abhi away and Abhi is totally scattered, his dreams were crushed. He just leaves in shocke teji closes the door and cries hard.

Car

Pratap has got the Ice Cream and is way back to hotel.

Pratap: mujhe Tejali se chupana nahi chahiye tha, mujhe usey batadena chahiye tha us ladki ke bare mein, pata nahi Tejali kya soch rahi hogi.

Hotel

Abhi goes out with his lost senses and Pratap comes in the hotel but both misses each other again. Abhi is completely scattered.

Pratap goes to room he knocks the door but hear teji's crying he then knocks but teji doesn't open so he the take out the keys and open the door. Pratap goes inside and is shocked to see teji sitting on floor and crying very bitterly and hard. He goes to her and asks her what happened teji just hugs him tightly and cries bitterly and loudly. Pratap could not bear to see teji in this state and asks her what happened? Teji still sobbing tells him all what happened between her and Abhi. Pratap is shocked to know all this and more shocked of what teji did.

Pratap asks her why she did this with Abhi as now he could've been hers as this is all she wanted in her life? Teji tells him: how Abhi still don't remember that night and how he thinks that I have relation with you and this baby is our, our MISTAKE, moreover if we tell him that then this baby will be burden on him remember he doesn't like the children much, I'll be burden on him which I don't want. And also I don't trust in Abhi's love rite now, I don't know why but I just don't. (😡, how dare she)

Pratap is heartbroken to know this, he really wants to tell truth to Abhi but can't. Pratap "maine wada kiya hai tumse aur main apna wada nibhaonga"

Pratap: lets go Tejali, lets go back. And teji just cries.

Abhi is walking on road shocked remembering Tejali's words and each word was breaking his heart each time in thousand pieces. Abhi breakdowns and fall on his knees in middle of road and cries really hard and looks at sky and shouts "WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY????" and cries really hard.😭 ( i can't see my abhi like this)

THE END

*Rishta*

Short Story (by: me)

Abhimanyu sitting in his office thinking about what happened eariler.
Falshback
Tejali and abhimanyu were fighting some goons when one of them attacks on tejali and her hand gets hurt realyl badly and it starts to bleed. abhi sees this and hits that person, he fights all of them and they run away.
Tejali is standing by the car and holding her hand which is bleeding and paining, she ignores it all and starts to walk off when abhimanyu sees this and is suprised.
Abhimanyu: Tejali u r hurt, haath se khoon beh raha hai.
Tejali turns around and says:
mujhe Aadat hogayi hai es sabki ab dard nahi hota, behne do khoon ko.
and walks off, abhimanyu is shocked to hear this. He walks upto her and start to say something but tejali turns to the car door and was about to open it. Abhi this time holds her by arm and turn her around and holds her hand but tejali frees her hand abhi again holds her hand tightly making her sigh in pain 😳 😳.
Abhimanyu with other hand takes out his handkerchief and styarts to tie on her hand, tejali feels her tears are forming in her eyes, but not because of the pain but due to abhi's affection 😳 😳 Abhimnayu ties handkerchief on her hand and sees that tears rolling down her cheeks. abhi moves his hand and is about to wipe her tears, but tejali with her hand wipes them off and looks away. Abhi feels a lil disappointment

Abihmanyu: jab dard bardasht nahi hota toh kyon itna bardasht karti ho? nikla do sab dard, sab ansooyon ko, dil ka sara gubaar nikla do bahar, takay dil mein kuch na rahe.

his words making her weak, making her cry but she thought to be strong and not break down. Tejali palying stong tries to move away but away put his both hands on both side of her blocking her way, he stands there with few incheces gap between them.

Abhimanyu: main janta hon tum bohut dukhi ho yeh natak mere samne mat karo, apne app ko kyon saza de rahi ho, en ansooyon ko ruk kar?

this time tears could not be held longer and they start to roll down or rather fall like rain. Tejali starts to cry uncontrolbly 😭 😭 😭, in sobs she tries to say something but couldn't and just cries, abhiamnyu's heart is aching listeing to her wails, seeing tears running from her eyes like rain. 😭
😭
abhimanyu put his hand on her cheek and moves his other hand down to her waist and slightly slips his hand behind her waist and holds her waist☺️. while pats her cheek with other hand, tejali could not bear longer and holds him tightly from his shirt and hugs him tightly 😳 😳 😉 and cries more. abhimanyu colud sense how much she is hurt by the way she was holding his shirt tightly and digging her nails into his chest 😳 😳.
after a while standing like this and crying tejali suddenly senses what was happeing, she quickly moves her face upto his nd looks at him in shock. Abhi is alos confused, tejali pushes him away hardly and runs from there, leaving abhimanyu in shock.
Flashback ends

Abhimanyu's face glew remembering what happened but was also lil confused of Tejali's reaction. Abhimanyu thinking "main janta hon tejali bohut upset hai abhi aur usay kisike saath ki zarooraat hai, par yeh ladki bhi na.... kuch dinon pehle main samajh nahi pah raha tha ke akhir kya rishta hai hum dono ka? ajj ehsaas howa ke jo bhi hai dosti se badh kar hai 😳 ajj ehsaas howa ke haan yeh dosti se badhkar pyaar hi hai😳. I love her....haan yehi pyaar hai, chot usko lagi toh dard mujhe howa, ajj tak woh mujhe janne ke bahene dhondti rahi aur ab main uske kareeb janne ke liye..😳😳😳" he remembers when he touched her, when he held her from waist, he blushes 😳😳😳.

Abhimanyu picks up the phone and dials tejali's no. then disconnects it, then again dial it and disconnects it. for the 3rd time he finally dials it and doesn't disconnets this time😆. bell is ringing but tejali is not picknig up the phone, here abhimanyu is getting anxiuos...finally tejali picks up the phone..

gotta go now will continue later😳 bye...and do comment

PART 2

Tejali: he..llo

Abhimanyu could sense the tiredness from her voice, hearing her voice he loses his voice. just holds the reciever and listens to her quiet, while she was queit her breaths were talking to abhimanyu☺️☺️☺️.☺️Tejali when hears no answer again says Hello...then 3rd time a lil loud making abhi come out from his dreamy world😆😉

Abhimayu: ermm..ehmm...tejali its me

Tejali holds the reciever tightly as feels her hands trembling😳

Tejali in trembling voice: ky..a hoo..wa? kuc..h kaam ha..i?

Abhimanyu sense that he's call made her uncomfortable he was about to hand up when tejali speaks up.

Tejali: yehi janna chahte thay na ke main theek hon yaan nahi😳😳

abhi gets stunned hearing this as how come she knows about it?😲😲😲

Abhi (after few secs): 🤔...woh main woh, actually...😆😆😆

Tejali: akhir kyon tumhe meri itni fikar hai? why do you care for me? akhir koun lagte ho tum mere?

abhimanyu feels😵😵 in heart a lump in his throat appears, he is shocked that how simply she said this

Tejali: bolo na....bolo na koun lagte ho tum mere?

Abhimanyu stays quiet for some time and his silence maknig tejali restless😳. finally he speaks.

Abhimanyu: main tumhara kuch na lagta...

Tejali's whole body trembles and her hands shake😭😭 tears are forimng in her eyes, abh stays quiet for few secs trying to catch her reaction. then finally speaks.

Abhi: sab ke liye main tumhare kuch nahi lagta, par main janta hon ke kuch na hokar bih main tumhara sab kcuh lagta hai☺️

Tejali is surprised and finds herself smiling widely😳 and abhimanyu could sense it😃😳 he too smiles.

Abhimanyu: humare beech koi rishta na hokar bhi koi rishta zaroor hai....yeh tum bhi manti hon na?😳

tejali colud not get word out of her mouth, totally numb,

Abhi (speaks or rather wispers) : manti hon na tejali?😳

Tejali closes her eyes could feel his soft, hot breathe in her ear when he wispered☺️

Tejali: hmmmm...☺️☺️

Abhimanyu (raises his voice a lil): toh kyon bhag gayi thi ajj es tarhan se?

Tejali instantly opens her eyes and remembers what happened, and what has happeing rite now. She without giving any hint bangs the phone and throws it away

Abhimanyu on the other hand is so shocked of what happened and looks at reciever strangely😆

Tejali on the other hand falls on bed and trying ot realises of what convo they acutally had...😳

WILL CONTINUE REST LATER😳 DO COMMENTS PLZ

LAST PART

Abhimanyu still confused that why is she doing this...."i know ke woh mujhse pyaar karti hai, mujhe maloom hai. par phir tejali aik dam se mujhse dor kyon ja rahi hai? jabke ab mujhe bhi ehsaas hogaya hai ke I love her😳 kyon kar rahi hai woh aisa? main ajj sach jan kar hi rahonga"

He decides to go to her house but when looks at clock sees its 12.30 am, but he doesn't care, he wants to talk to her now..😳😆

Tejali at home crying..

Tejali: yeh sab kya ho raha hai, kyun ho raha hai?

Abhimanyu reahces her house, with a hesitation rings the bell, tejali thinks "who can be at this time?"

Tejali opens the door and is shocked to see abhimanyu standing on the door. 😲

Tejali with shocked voice: tum....yahan kya...kar rahe ho?

Abhi: tejali main tumse...

before abihmanyu could finish his sentence tejali closes the door, abhi bangs on the door. Tejali on the other side of the door kneels down and pleads him to go. 😭😭 but abihmanyu is too ziddi.

Abhi: Nahi tejali, ajj jab tak mujhe jawab nahi milienge main yahan se nahi jaonga. Tumhe batana hoga tum aisa kyon kar rahi ho? kyon humhare es rishte se bhag rahi ho kyun?

Tejali on the other side of the door is crying silently 😭😭

Tejali: Please tum yahan se chale jao, just leave me alone.

Abhi: nahi ajj jo bhi hojaye main yahan se nahi jaonga jab tak tum mujhse nahi milogi😳

Tejali finally gets up and runs to her run she falls on the bed and cries, hoping that abhiamnyu will go.

after sometimes rain starts to pour and then suddenly its heavily rains weather gets worse. Tejali suddenly realises that abhimanyu might be outside, she runs to her window and sees abhimanyu sitting on his car bonnet all wet☺️ Tejali is shocked to see him in this state and runs all the way to door and opens it. She runs outside abhimanyu sees her and gets up from the bonnet tejali comes to him and stops (few inches distance) both are drenching in rain☺️☺️😉

Tejali: abihmanyu...yeh kya pagalpan hai, chalo andar chalo tum bemaar hojaonge😳

abihmanyu doesn't move so tejali holds him from his arm and drags him inside the house😆. once they are inside the house tejali sighs of relief and brings him the towel, abhimanyu just looks at her😳 she's wearing white shalwar kameez which is lil transparent😳 abhimanyu is his usual black😳 tejali colud not bear his stares and runs in her room. she stands there holding the bed pole lost in deep thoughts when abhimanyu enters her room quietly, he sees that she's lost in some thoughts. he secretly goes behind her so she cannot see him. she was dreanching like him water was dripping fromn her hairs her body was lil appearing from her clothes. 😉

Abihmanyu is now standing rite behind her, he slightly moves his hands foward and wrap around her waist☺️☺️☺️Tejali by his touch jumps out from her thoughts and is shocked to see herself in this situation, she turns around and looks at abhimanyu directly with angrily look.

Tejali: Chodo mujhe..

Abhimanyu: jab tak mujhe mere sawalon ka jawab nahi dogi, main nahi chodonga☺️

Tejali is shocked, she tries to move but abhi tightens his hold maknig her body totally toching his body. Tejali feels a chill running down her spines. ☺️☺️☺️

Abhimayu: kya huwa hai tumhe? kyon kar rahi ho aisa? kyon humare es rishte ko accept nahi kar rahi? kyun?

Tejali tries to move but cant abhi is holding her tightly from waist, suddenly she finds abihmanyu gently creasing her wet hairs😳 she feels gonig weak on her knees☺️☺️

Abihmanyu slightly brings his lips to her ears and wisphers: bolo na..

tejali holds her breathe, he's certainly maknig her weak😳 Tejli closes her eyes,and with her both hands puches his away and turns around abhimanyu from behind holds her from waist again andwith other hand pushes her hairs aside and kisses her neck😳😳 tejali is gonig weak, abhi slowly asks again same question and tejali finally answrrs it

Tejali finally speaks up

Tejali (lil loudly): kyonki, main nahi phirse hurt hona nahi chahti, zindagi mein jis par bharosa kiya usi ne mera bharosa toda😭 thak gayi hon...ab aur bardhast nahi hota..

she has tears in her eyes but she

s trying to stop them.

Abhimanyu: aur tumhe laga ke main tumhe dhkoa donga? how could u think like this? tum ho jisne mujhe pyaar kya matlab samjhaya, pyaar karna sikhaya aur tumhi ne yeh soch liya ke main tumhe....

tejali looks down abhimanyu with his finger keeps under her chin making her look up. tejali feels sad for hurting him

tejali: so..

Abhi: shhhhh...abih put finger on her lips maknig her quiet...

Abhi: dont hurt me by saying sorry

Tejali smiles, abhimanyu with his thumb traces her lips and then finally brings his face close to her...tejali closes her eyes, and both have a good passaionate kiss.😳😳

THE END

Another Short Story - by ME😊

Status: In Progress

"EVERYTHING IS FAIR IN LOVE & WAR"

"He's mine, kehte hain na ke everthing is fair in love and war sahi kehte hain. I beleive in this saying and I'll make sure ke I get my love. He is mine and mibe forever, I'll make sure of it😊. Chahe mujhe kuch bih kyon nahi karna padhe😈 akhir Everything is fair in love and war😈"

Tejali was sitting in her car and was looking across the street where abhimanyu and his girlfreind Sia was sitting in coffee shop and were happily chatting, unknown to what next gonig to strike them😈. tejali sees abhimanyu and smiles and then leaves in her car.

later in night,

Abihmanyu is still worknig in office on case while everyone is gone home excpet tejali. Abhimanyu was lost in file and doesn't notice tejali, she comes quietly and stand next to him, but he doesn't turn and look at her😆 she bends down a lil and notices that abih is sleeping😆😆😆 he was lookin so cute😳😳😳 tejali was like awww😳😳😳

Tejali kneels down on her knees and with a lil hesitation put her hands in his airs and start stroking his hairs😳😳😳she was about to touch his forehand whe nabhimanyu wakes up he looks up and finds tejali all smiling and her hand still in his think black hairs😳

Abhi is shocked to see all this he instantly gets up and tejali too gets up leaving his hairs😆. Tejali sees that he's feeling akward she the speaks.

Tejali: tum kitne mazaey se soh rahe thay na😆 maine awaz bhi di par nahi uthey toh socha ke....yunhi utha lon🤣

abhi looks at her stangely

Tejali: i mean ke...

Abihmnyu: woh...kab ankh lag gayi pata hai nahi chala, tum abhi tak gayi nahi~?😕

Tejali: 🤔🤔 woh main bhi yahin par ruk kar kaam kar rahi hon, woh kidnapping wale case ki file tayar karni hai na.

Abhi: usko dene mein oth abhi 3 din hain aur tum..

Tejiali: 🤔 woh bohut kaam hia es liye abih kar rahi hon, waise mujhe bohut bhook lag rahi hai chalo na canteen mein chal kar kuch khatey hain..

Abhi: 🤔🤔

tejali holds him by his arm: chalo na mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai aur akele khane ko maan nahi hai chalo.....

and stops in middle and looks at abhi who was looknig at his arm which was she holding😳 and then he looks upto her and she too looks at him, both gaze into each others eyes.😳 tejali takes a step towards him while looknig at him then another when she takes 3rd step she slips, was about to fall but abhi moves farword and instantly catches her from her waist and tejali was holding onto his arm but then also put other arm around his neck😳 both look in each other's eye😳

So Guyz!!!!Kaisa laga part 1? should I continue or not? 😳 please do comment

amazing work... 👏

seriously mind blowing...

u should mail this to BP Singh and I am sure he too will be delighted!

I think even I will write a lil fan fic and show..bt some other time 😉

Meanwhile..u do continue..u are superb 😉 😉

Kaun, Kab aur Kahaan (Part 2)

The next morning when the CID officers arrived at work, ACP gave them different tasks to to do. He sent Abhijeet to bring Payal's mother and brother into the office, told Muskaan to go to Mehta Industries to talk to Payal's coworkers, and took Daya with him to the hotel. He left Fredricks behind in order to find out more about Payal through the internet.

Rahul, the man who worked at the registration desk at Taj Hotel, had returned. Daya asked him whether he was fully confident that the girl who had reserved a room in Payal's name was actually not Payal. Rahul said that the girl's face was completely different from Payal's. He also told them that the girl had been carrying a heavy suitcase and struggling to drag it to the elevators. She refused assistance from all hotel staff. When ACP asked him to describe the girl, Rahul replied that she was very thin, very fair and had blue eyes. After writing all this information down, ACP and Daya left the hotel.

When they arrived at the office, Abhijeet was waiting there with Payal's griefstricken mother and brother. ACP was just about to ask them some questions when Muskaan came and began to inform them about a new development in the case. Payal had two good friends at work named Asha and Seema. They told Muskaan that two months ago, Payal had told them that she was in love with a man named Amit and they were planning to get married soon. They were both very happy for Payal, but upon Payal's request, they did not tell anyone else about this. Payal used to be very cheerful those days, so Asha and Seema were surprised that she left work without informing anyone.

After hearing this, Payal's mother exclaimed that it wasn't true. There was no man in Payal's life. However, just then, Payal's brother told them that it was all true. Sometimes at night, Payal used to go to Athena night club to meet Amit. One night, her brother caught her when she was leaving the house, so she told him the truth and requested that he not tell their mother about it yet. ACP immediately sent Abhijeet and Daya to Athena night club.

Some of employees of the night club were there. Abhijeet showed them Payal's picture and asked if they had seen her there. One of them said that Payal had come there several times with a man, and that man had been coming to the night club approximately every day with several different women. He suggested to Daya and Abhijeet that they return at midnight because it was likely that the man would be there. Daya explained to them not to let the man know that the CID was looking for him.

As they were returning to the office, they saw a crowd of people infront of a mansion. When they got out of their car and went into the crowd, they discovered that a girl about 18 years old had just fallen from her window and was lying dead on the ground. Daya called ACP and informed him about the incident while Abhijeet took a closer look at the body. Soon, a car stopped infront of the mansion and an elderly man got out. As soon as he saw the body, his face became white. He screamed and moved towards the body, but Daya stopped him. A few minutes later, when he calmed down a little, Abhijeet asked him his name and who the girl was. He told them that his name was Rakesh Malhotra and the girl was his daughter Mansi.

When ACP arrived at the scene, he told everyone to search the house. At that time there was no one else in the house. Mansi had been home alone. In her room, they found an empty bottle of poison and a half-drunk cup of tea. They asked Mansi's father for more information about her, but they only found out that she was a student in college and was generally a shy person.

When they took the body, the bottle of poison, and the cup of tea to Doctor Nayla, she was able to conclude within minutes that the tea had poison mixed in it, and this was the same poison that had killed Payal a day earlier. After the post mortem of Mansi's body, it was revealed that her veins also had the same poison. ACP called everyone into his office. There, he told them that the case was no longer about one murder. It was possible that someone was targetting young girls. That's why it had became very important that they find the killer as soon as possible and prevent the loss of more lives.

More soon…

hey..complete it soon! I am waiting for the next part..its pretty real!

I may be wrong...but I think it's okay to post comments here Daisy. This is where all the new fan fics will be posted and if you can't post comments on them here, I don't know where you would do it. So please go ahead. If I hear otherwise from the other members of the dev team, I'll let you know.

Kaun, Kab Aur Kahaan (Part 3)

At midnight Abhijeet, Daya and Muskaan went to Athena night club to find the man who Payal used to meet there. As soon as he saw them, one of the bartenders pointed out a man sitting at the bar. He was sitting alone and drinking a beer. Muskaan went and sat right next to him and smiled at him. In a few minutes, he had ordered a drink for Muskaan and began to talk to her. As soon as he mentioned that his name was Amit, Daya and Abhijeet came and surrounded him

When they showed him Payal's picture and told them that they are from CID, he became nervous. Immediately he began saying that he did not kill Payal. They asked him what his relationship was with Payal, and he said that Payal was his girlfriend, but he also had similar relations with several other girls. Abhijeet asked him whether he had promised Payal that he would marry her. Amit said definitely not. He was already married, and Payal knew this. The three of them thanked Amit for his cooperation and told him to come to their office the next morning. He agreed, but just to be safe, they decided to send an officer to his house to watch his movements.

The next day, when they arrived at the office, Doctor Naila was waiting for them. She had found out that the poision that had killed Payal & Mansi was produced at Mehta Industries, the same place where Payal used to work. They supplied it to only two other companies, who used it on animals for research purposes. Doctor Naila had called Mehta Industries and discovered that four days earlier, three bottles of the poison had disappeared from their inventory. This information suggested that the killer was an employee at Mehta Industries and had stolen the poison from there. ACP was thinking about this when Amit came into the office. ACP sent Daya and Fredricks to talk to Mehta Ji about this and stayed behind with Abhijeet to ask Amit some questions.

Daya asked Mehta Ji for the names of all the people who had the access to the room where the bottles of poison were kept. Mehta Ji called all those people into his office. Fredricks tried to ask them questions and figure out who stole the poison. They all claimed that they had not gone into the room the day the poison was stolen, and they began to support each other's claims as well. Mehta Ji told Daya that there was a girl who also had access to the room, but she had taken the day off so she was not currently in the office. Daya asked for her name and address. Mehta Ji said her name was Shalini Sinha and wrote her address down for him. One of the employees said that he had seen Shalini near the door of the inventory room the day the poison was stolen, but he was not sure whether or not she had entered the room.

While they were leaving the building, Daya noticed a picture and stopped in his tracks. On the wall it said "Employee of the Month" and there was a picture of a girl. Under it was the name Shalini Sinha. Fredricks asked Daya what happened, and Daya continued to look at the picture intently. Very thin, very fair, and blue eyes – exactly like the girl that Rahul had described. Was this the same girl who had resevered a hotel room in Payal's name?

In the car, Daya and Fredricks were discussing the possibility of Shalini being involed in this case. They were almost at the office when ACP called them and told them to come to Taj Hotel. When they arrived, ACP told them that a girl named Julie had been invited for a job interview at the hotel by a man named Anand Kapoor. When Julie arrived and Anand was introducing himself to her, Qureshi Sahib overheard him. He recognize the name as one that the CID had been asking about, and immediately informed ACP. Daya and Fredricks entered the hotel lobby and saw that a tall man wearing glasses was in handcuffs and Abhijeet was asking him questions.

Anand was crying and saying that he was not a murderer. He told them that a girl had given him money to do this job. His task was only to get Payal and Julie to the hotel, talk to them for a while, and use some excuse to take them to that girl's room. He had no idea what happened after that. Abhijeet asked him what the girl's name was. Anand said that he did not know her name, but she was a very thin, fair girl with blue eyes. Daya was shocked. Was it really Shalini Sinha who was behind all this?

Concluding part coming soon…