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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: clarissa


that's not a bad idea! i like the story too! i mean, it's so simple. u know, not like those serial stories where one person is like god sacrificing evrythin nd the another is a demon thinking evil only!

yep..i totally agree....wow! great stories!!!!!😃...hmm...maybe u should write a book...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
thank u soo much for ur comment guyz

it means alot to both of us
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sallu_lover

thank u soo much for ur comment guyz

it means alot to both of us

Exactly. Thankyou so much guyz. 😃. We will try to meet your expectations. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Previously on Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee
Rishab comes to know about Tejali's pregnancy. Tejali leaves house. Abhimanyu calls pratap and tells him all about what happened with Tejali. And Pratap decides to come back.


PART 6

NEXT MORNING IN BUEARU


Pratap comes back ACP asks him why he's back so early and did he finish the work. And Pratap says he did and is back now.
Pratap goes to Abhi and asks him about teji. Abhi with sad face nods his head in and Pratap gets angry on him. Abhi gets confuse why Pratab is getting so angry on him without any reason. Pratap then goes to ACP he asks for leave for 1 day, ACP asks the reason but he says personal and then with lot of convincing ACP agrees, and gives Pratap leave. While Pratap is leaving ACP says from back
ACP: I know that u are going to look for Tejali.
Pratap gets shock that how ACP knows then without saying another word he leaves.

HOTEL KINGSTON "TEJALI'S ROOM

In hotel room Tejali is sitting she suddenly remembers something and turns her mobile phone on. When she turns it on and sees 10 messages from Abhi and 20 missed calls from Abhi and some from bureau. She then reads abhi's sms
T"eji, I'm sorry, for what I said I did I know I should've understood u, plz teji once talk to me. Plz tell me where r u? I remember my promise and I promise I'll support u in your decision. But please once talk to me meet me. Yours, Abhi" Those two words "YOURS ABHI"for a moment made for very restless. Butterflies starting flying in her stomach. But this happiness soon ended when she realised that this meant as a friend. He does not love her. Abhi€™s words started to spin in her head: Abhi: €œ I love Anu, and will only marry her.€
Teji could not control her tears and then she could not dare to read other sms€™. In rage she throws her mobile on couch. And thinks €œhow much I try to forget u you do not let me. Whenever I take two steps awy from you. You take two steps to come closer to me. But know I have to stay away from you.€ But she was not sure will she be able to or not.

TEJALI€™S HOUSE
Pratap goes to Tejali€™s house and Rishab opens it, and before Pratap could say anything or do Rsihab says Tejali is not here and you also get out of here. Rishab insults Teji and Pratap could not bear it and starts to tell Rishab truth but he remembers Tejali€™s kasam so stops. He leaves from there. Before leaving he says to Rishab.
Pratap: If something happens to Tejali u€™ll be responsible for it. You never even tried to understand her. You never even gave her father€™s love and never gave her your time. U r and only u r responsible for it.
And saying this he leaves leaving Rishab in totally shock.

PRATAP IN CAR
Pratap in his car not even have clue to where to find teji, in trying to figure how to find her. He calls Tejali and bingo her phone rings Teji picks up the phone.
Pratap: teji, where r u?
Teji: Pratap plz leave me alone.
Pratap: Ok, if u want it this way Ok, I€™m going to bureau and telling abhi and ur father also the truth.
Teji gets shocked
Pratap: I€™m breaking ur kasam because I cannot see u like this.
Before Teji could even say anything Pratap cuts to phone. Tejali panics and without thinking leaves for bureau.
Pratap calls Rishab and tells him come to bureau he€™ll tell him all truth.
Pratap (Thinking): €œTeji, I know what I€™m going to do has not anyone even you would€™ve not imagined. No one would€™ve imagined the truth I€™m going to tell today. I know you€™ll be so mad, but I don€™t have any option left except this. Please if possible forgive me. I€™ll try to give you all the happiness you deserve.€

BUREAU
Everyone is discussing about Tejali€™s issue and is trying to figure out where she is.
When Rishab enters the bureau are asks for Tejali and Pratap. Everyone gets shocked that why he's asking.
ACP: Tejali did not come to bureau since the truth€
He could not dare to complete his sentence and Rishab realises that everyone knows the truth.
Rishab: Where is Pratap?
Abhi: He'ss on leave today.
And then we see Tejali enters the bureau and notices every eye down on her. She tries to steal glances with abhi. Shocks to see Rishab and thinks that they might know the truth.
Tejali: sir, where is Pratap?
Everyone is now confused that why Rishab and teji are asking for Pratap.
Rishab then could not control his anger and starts shouting at teji of what she and Pratap are upto, Teji gets shocked and confuse of what Pratap is trying to do. Abhi tries to interferes but Rishab tells him off, and tries to insults him.
Rishab: In your company my daughter has become like this.
He also insults bureau and again asks her loudly who€™s child this is?
Voice: This is my child.
Everyone turns around and are shocked to see, especially Tejali. Its Pratap.
Pratap: This is my child.
Abhi shocked, Rishab shocked, Tejali shocked and everyone are shocked.

THE END

NEXT in Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

The battle between friendship and love begins.

Written by:

Sallu_Lover & Day_Dreamer

Hi. I edited some parts becuase of the weird symbols. If you can..can you also take those out! It will make it look better!

Uma

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Edited by umi82990 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
wow yaar u truly rock!! 👏 i m keen to know what will happen next . please post the next part as soon as possible 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: nisha5152

wow yaar u truly rock!! 👏 i m keen to know what will happen next . please post the next part as soon as possible 😳

Thankyou so much, next part will be up tommorrw. 😊😉 so wait till then.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Hi. This was really great! I really enjoyed it. Please read my note at the bottom of the post!

I can't wait for the next one to start!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
its goin gr8! 😃 👏 i can't wait for 2morow!
Edited by clarissa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
the next eposide will be posted soon guyzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

PART 7

BUREAU

Pratap: I'm the Father of Tejali's child.

Abhi shocked, teji shock and everyone else gets shocked as hell. Abhi hears the news n he is soo shocked n cant even express how he is feeling as pratab, tej n him r best friends n he is shocked that how come pratab didnt tell him. Teji is too shocked. Abhi is so angry he goes near Pratap and THADDDD Slaps him as hard as he can. Everyone are shocked esp. Teji and Pratap. Before he could say or anything another THADDD Rishab slaps Pratap. Teji tries to stop and tries to say

Teji: this is all a….

Before teji could say anything further, Pratap announces

Pratap: I'm going to marry Tejali.

Teji is now almost faint, she tries to butt in but Pratap stops her with eye signal.

Rishab is shocked to hear this,

Rishab: well, what made u think that I'll leave u like this, after doing all this with my daughter. You thought u'll escape. Even u would've not said it I'll make sure this happens.

Pratap: I'll marry teji, soon

Rishab is disgust leaves the bureau. Teji tries to behind him but felt like nail to the ground.

Pratap: I know everyone of you thinks why I disclose this truth here, coz I wanted all of you to know the truth and in future do not point finger at her. If you have anything to say, say to me not to pint finger at her.

Everyone is quite.

Abhi comes near Pratap and hold his collar,

Abhi: How dare you, where were u when people WERE pointing fingers at her. Haan? Where were u when she needed u the most? Where were u? and now all of sudden u care for her, oh its not for her, its for ur child na.

Teji shouts: ABHI!!!! How dare you, how could you say anything to him, leave him I said leave him!!!



Abhi: Teji u r saying this. Oh yea u'll na, he's ur love of life na, ur everything, we shared everything among us but u did not even thought of this sharing with me, why? WHY?

Teji is so shocked to see Abhi in this manner. Abhi tries to hit Pratap and both get into fight. Samar, Akshay breaks them up and teji leaves bureau crying. Everyone else goes and only Pratap and ACP left. ACP tries to talk to Pratap but he goes, and ACP cannot believe that Pratap and Teji cloud do something like this. He had a hint that teji liked Abhi.

Abhi is all shattered and heart-broken, he don't know why he did not liked Pratap-Teji's this relationship. He cannot believe his two best-friends can betray on him like this.


SEASIDE

Teji goes to seaside and sitting on stone is crying really hard. Pratap comes there and teji sees him and encounter him with questions.

Teji: how could u Pratap? How could u? What the hell you were talking about?

Pratap: teji, listen…

Teji: What should I listen? Do u know that now what will happen now? Why are you sacrificing your life? I can't let happen this with you.

Pratap: Do whatever you want I will never change my decision. I really want to give you all the happiness you deserve. I want to give your child my name. Only my decision will change when you'll tell abhi the truth.

Teji shocked, Pratap tries hard to convince to marry him. To give her child his name.

Pratap: whne your child come in this world how will you tell him and what will you tell him. That he's a…

Teji: STOP!!!!

She could not bear what Pratap was going to say.

Pratap: see, how hard it is even to imagine. This is why I'm saying to you. Teji I want to become your humsafar. I promise you I'll love your child as mine. Main tumhe aur es bacche ko Kabhi bhi kami mehsoos nahi hone donga. I'll never leave you. Main tumhara humsafar banna chahta hon. Es dosti ki khatir, Please I want to marry you. Kya tum mera haath thamugi?

He lead his hand out in order for teji to hold it.

Teji: I…I. I need time to think. I'll tell you later.

Without listening to another Pratap's word and she leaves from there.

Pratap sees her leaving and then watches the sunset and thinks "I'll give you every happiness, I will never let you cry. I'll never leave you alone, and will love your child as mine. I promise this to you."


THE END

Next Episode: will tejali marry pratab, wat happenes to abhi?


written by: Sallu_lover & Day_Dreamer

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago

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