SS: a fun or a fear

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in evening all team reached in a hotel to solve a case.🥱

ABHIjeet: dekho ye log kisi bhi room me rah sakte hai hume inhe chupchap pakdana hai, kisi ko shak nahi hona chahiye hum pe kyuki hotel ka koi 1 aadmi bhi unse mila hua hai to hume 3 room allot karke phir nazar rakhni hai.

Sachin😳: sir ye bat aap purvi ko jarur samjha dena nahi to is bar bhi...

PUrvi stared sachin. Daya: sachin tum ho na is bar uske sath to usse galti kese hogi

Sachin: matlab

Abhijeet: matlab me, nikhil or shreya 1st floor pe nazar rakhege sab logo pe, 2 nd pe daya, fready, jaywanti, and 3rd par tum, pankaj or purvi

Sachin: sir aap in dono ke sath mujhe allot mat kijiye, in dono ka bato se pet nahi bharta😒

Daya: SAchin purvi apne kam ko leke dedicate hai to please chinta mat karo. PURVI smiled and ask pankaj to call lift.

After 2 hour... all eyes were find culprits. At 11 pm,

purvi: sir room no 314 ka ye aadmi bar bar andar bahar ja raha hai mujhe lag raha hai kahi is room me to deal nahi hone wali. Vese bhi vo room corner turn pe hai to vaha pe jyada logo ka aana jana nahi hai.

Sachin: dekhte hai, pankaj aisa karo tum udher jate hue dekho tumhare hisab se room me kitne aadmi hai

PAnkaj😕: me akela.

Sachin: kyu tumhe akele dar lagta hai

PAnkaj : nahi me dekhta hu.

After some time pankaj ran.. sir mujhe to us room me kuch gadbad lag rahi... darwaje ki gap se mujhe bus kuch briefcase dikhi bus... but aisa lag raha us room me kuch aadmi hai

Sachin tried to inform abhijeet but signal was broke. Sachin: is network ko bhi abhi jana tha.

Purvi: sir, mere bhi phone me network nahi aa raha.

Sachin: pankaj aisa karo tum neeche jake inform karo hum log idher dekhte hai

Purvi and sachin pick guns in hand and and move toward room.⭐️

That time two man came from backside room and injecting purvi and sachin. And sachvi were half-unconscious

They take them inside room no 314.

1st man: boss ye log bahar humpe nazar rakhe hue the.

Boss: iska matlab baki k log bhi yahi par hoge.

2nd man: phir to hum sab ko yaha se bhag jana chahiye usi me bhalayi hai

BOSS: me apni deal kabhi bhi half nahi chodta... bus 10 min me dealer aata hi hoga... vese mene tumhe 3 room extra book karne ko bole the. He ask a waiter.

Waiter: yes sir vo sab hai...

BOSs: aisa karte hai is room ko khali kar dete hai... taki baki team aaye to bhi unhe yaha kuch na mile and 2 log inko leke samne wale room me chale jao... and 3rd room me khali boxes rakh dete hai. (From waiter) tum trolly laye ho na to ye kam tum karoge. Vo log jab tak in 3no room me uljhege tab tak hamara kam bhi ho jayega. Or in dono ki acche se talashi le lena koi camra or na rah gaya ho inke pas. Nahi to hamare khilaf sabot apne aap aa jayege

Other man: boss phir deal kaha hogi.

BOSs: deal store room me hogi... or iska arrangement bhi mene karwa diya hai is hotel k hi ek or aadmi ne madad ki hai, backup plan bana ke rakhne padte hai... all laughed.

After that 2 man took sachvi in other room. They remove sachin's cloth and checked but they didn't find anything. Now it's turn to purvi who is regain consciousness because they didn't injected purvi properly. she saw and she scared cause both men look each other and give a evil smile... purvi tried to wake up but she can't

There team reached in room 314 but they didn't find any thing... abhijeet tried to call sachvi but there is no network. Abhijeet: lagta hai ab manager se puchtach karni hi padegi

Daya: par hum aisa karke kahi sachin purvi ki jan ko khatre me na dal de hume pahle unhe dundna chahiye

Jaywanti: pata nahi vo log kaha pe chale gaye

PAnkaj: par sir last to mene in logo ko yahi aate hue dekha tha

SHreya: kuch bhi ho sir par ab inquires karne ke siwa hamare pas koi rasta nahi hai

Daya: isi floor se shuru karte hai 1-1 ke room search karke dekhte hai

Fready: sir abhi yaha se 1 waiter trolly leke jar aha tha to kahi vo log us trolly me to nahi the.

Abhijeet: are haan, aisa bhi ho sakta hai pahle hume us trolly wale waiter ko dundna chahiye. Chalo jaldi.

There A man touched purvi, purvi want to wake up but she still can't properly. she hit from her leg that man. 2nd man tried again. But purvi hit them also.. they were angerd and attacked together they torn purvi's cloth luckily purvi hold a vase from side and hit forcefully a head. That man hold his head and moved away from purvi then she hit another and remove his gun from his jacket and scold him. Both man scared and ran outside from the room.

Purvi closed her eyes and start sobbing😭. She sat on the bed and tried to think about all goons conversation. In this time sachin also gain consciousness and look a side of purvi who is sobbing and then he look himself.

SAchin (in mind)😒: o god kahi mene purvi ke sath kuch... nahi me aisa kese kar sakta hu... mujhe to aisa kuch yad nahi but uske kapde or vo ro kyu rahi hai phir. Sachin suddenly stood from bed... and he is still in dilemma. He wear his clothes. Purvi jerked and hold again gun then look toward sachin

sachin: purvi... kya...

PURVI suddenly remind all conversation and stood from there and ran toward outside...

Sachin: kahi mene sach me uske sath kuch... vo mujhse bat kyu nahi ki... he sat on bed and hold his head : god di ya ma ko malum pada to... me aisa kese kar sakta hu...

Purvi find all team and tell about the store room. They all ran toward store room and caught all gang who is ready for leaving hotel after deal.

Abhijeet: purvi, aaj tumhare karan ye sab log pakde gaye nahi to ye sab ab tak to farar ho gaye hote.

Shreya: par tumhari ye halat ... and give her jacket to purvi

Purvi (in cry tone): kuch nahi, bus kuch kamino ke karan...

DAya: matlab in logo ne tumhare sath

Purvi (control herself): sir me thik hu, kuch nahi hua mujhe

Fready: sachin sir kaha hai

Purvi: vo shayad room me hi hai...

ABhijeet: use kya ho gaya purvi aa gayi, vo kyu nahi aaya. Fready use bulake lao and ab hum log bhi chalte hai

After some time sachin and fready came and sit in car.. sachin: purvi kaha hai

Daya: vo shreya abhijeet jaywanti ke sath nikal gayi hai.

Sachin: vo thik... to

Pankaj: bahut pareshan thi vo, phir bhi usne sab logo ko pakdwa diya.

SAchin want to speak but he can't utter a word.. and feel guilt again... O god, I can't do this...

...

2 part remain... (its also from its a life)

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Sachin can't sleep all night. At morning Sachin reached late in bureau. He saw purvi silently doing her work...

Abhijeet: aaj late ho gaye

Sachin: ha vo neend thodi der se khuli aaj

ACP (entered bureau): sachin tum aa gaye ho, ek kam karo ye case ki report devki tak pahuchani hai to tum purvi vaha pe chale jao or vapas aate hue us saluke se sabhi criminals ke finger prints ki report collect karke aana.

Sachin: purvi ke sath.. kyu...

ACP: kyu koi pareshani hai.

Sachin : nahi sir

ACP: to jao phir... ACP called purvi and they leaved

In car sachin tried to speak with purvi. But he couldn't dare. PURVI confused why is sachin is not talk with her.

PURVI (in mind): kahi kar rat mere sath jo hua uske karan to ye sab...

They reached devki office. Sachvi entered lift. They stood silently in lift...

After few sec, sachin: purvi, kal rat ko mene tumhare sath ... PURVI looking with confusion...

Sachin: purvi, Iam really very sorry, actual me mujhe khud ko hosh nahi tha, mujhe nahi malum ye sab kese ho gaya.

PURVI: sir sorry kis karan...

Sachin: i knew mene tumhe hurt kiya, mujhe nahi malum tha but me ye sab nahi karna chahta tha, pata nahi kese ho gaya, please di ke samne kuch mat kahna.

PURVI: aap nahi karna chahte the matlab...Sachin confused and he misunderstood that purvi is angry on him...

Sachin: purvi dekho me hosh me nahi tha aise me kal mere or tumhare beech jo kuch bhi hua room me...

PURVI (with wide eyes): kya hua?

Sachin: hum logo ke beech me kuch... i mean mujhe lag raha ki mene tumhare sath... vo tumhare clothes... hum log ke beech kuch hua tha ?

Purvi (with shocked): sir aap.. Suddenly lift jerked the lift stuck due to electricity...

SAchin: ye lift kyu band ho gayi...

PUrvi: pata nahi But til then sachin became restless and knocked lift gate... he suffered from claustrophobia...

Sachin: anyone there... please lift ko on karo PURVI confused...

Sachin shout: please koi hai..

PURvi (in mind): sir ko kya ho gaya, abhi to kuch or bol rahe the or abhi achanak se... 1 min sir ko kahi par band jagho ka dar to nahi.. suddnally she clicked something... and then...

PURvi : aapko kitni der bad realise hua ki aapse galti ho gayi...

Sachin opened her sleeves button. He turned: matlab...

Purvi (with fake crying tone): kal rat ko to aapke muh se ek shabd bhi nahi nikla or aapko ab realise ho raha hai kyuki devki di ke pas aana ho raha hai

Sachin: aisa nahi hai purvi... me sach kah raha hu mene kal jan bhujh ke ye sab nahi kiya.

PUrvi: kese man lu me...jabki aapne

Sachin: purvi try to understand, mujhe khud ko accha nahi lag raha

Purvi: ye bat aap kal rat ko bhi bol sakte the.. jab me room me thi

Sachin: purvi me khud samajh nahi paya tha please sorry... di ko malum pada to vo mujhe kabhi maf nahi karegi please me aage se aisa kuch bhi nahi karuga.

Purvi: sir aap ke liye ye sab kahna kitna easy hai na suddenly lift started again and they reached on the floor.

Sachin looking purvi who is move toward outside, she hide her smile and open devki cabin

Sachin with head down and follow purvi... Devki: kya bat hai aaj subah subah..

Sachin: di vo... he look toward purvi... vo sir ne files bhijwayi thi...

DEVKi: ok... to kam se aaye ho aaj bhi

PUrvi: bureau ke timing me kam se hi aana hota hai...

Devki: ya vo bhi hai... vese chay ya nashta kuch leke jao... me abhi mangwa deti hu

PURvi: no thanks di. Hum log phir kabhi sath me karege abhi hum logo ko lab bhi jana hai to hum log jaye..

Devki: work time hai to me bhi jyada force nahi kar sakti.. but ya phir kabhi dekhte, vese sachin tumhara muh kyu latka hua hai

Sachin: me vo...

PURvi: vo abhi lift atak gayi thi to shayad is karan... sachin look toward purvi

Devki: oh haan... ise claustrophobia hai . to ye halat to honi hi hai kya kare iska koi ilaaz bhi nahi

Sachin: di hum log chalte hai

Outside the cabin, sachin: thanks purvi, tumne di ko kuch nahi bataya

PURvi:me hmmm hum log chale... me bus unka dil nahi dukhana chahti... and she called lift: vese aap lift se chal rahe hai na

Sachin didn't reply and follow her

In bureau canteen, lunch time...

Sachin think again and again.. he feel guilt again.

Daya: kya hua sachin, abhi tak chay bhi nahi pi tumne, thandi ho gayi hai

Sachin: sir vo iccha nahi ho rahi pine ki..

Daya: sab thik to hai na, kahi tum dono ne phir se jhagde to nahi kiye..

Sachin: nahi sir, me aaya abhi and he move toward bureau

IN bureau

Shreya purvi talking with each other. Remain All team in canteen..

PUrvi: you know aaj ki bat pe mujhe abhi tak itni hansi aa rahi hai

Shreya: kyu aisa kya ho gaya.. Purvi told about all incident..

Shreya: tu pagal hai. Sir ko kitna gult feel ho raha hoga..

Purvi: to hone do, itna chillate hai hamesha thode din chup to rahege... and vese bhi unka lift k dar se dhyan to hata diya na mene...

SHreya: purvi sach me tera kuch nahi ho sakta...

Sachin heard from behind and shocked: isne jhoot bola or me paglo jese yahi soch soch ke pareshan ho raha tha ki mene kya kar diya... purvi tumhe to me choduga nahi.. and he leaved

Purvi: vese lab me tarika ne mujhse pucha aaj sham ko movie dekhne chalna kya.. mene use ha kah di tumhare behalf bhi, pahle khana khayege phir chalege movie. Me tumhare ghar pahuchti hu sham ko, phir vahi se mall chalege, tarika ko abhijeet sir drop kar dege...

Shreya: to abhijeet sir or sachin sir nahi chalege..

Purvi: o hello, ye deal to humne tarika ki shadi se pahle hi kar li thi, ki month me 1 day to hum teeno ka separate hoga so please tum kisi ko involve mat karna isme..

Shreya: ok baba sorry, tum aa jana me ready rahugi...

SO friends now you can wait for sachin's prank in next chappy... hope you like my all chapters.. We saw sachin's fear in this chapter, next chappy show us what is purvi's fear...

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Well...if it's having so many parts it can't be called 'OS'..it means 'One shot', you know.
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Originally posted by: visrom

Well...if it's having so many parts it can't be called 'OS'..it means 'One shot', you know.


ya sorry...😃 actually i posted first OS on ek ajnabi... which one posted twice time ... so i renamed with this SS (short story)😆... but by mistake... i forgot to add SS in the place of OS..🤢


Thanks to told me about this mistake ... i re-correct it😛

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At Purvi home,

8 pm purvi's family had gone outside to attend someone's marriage and purvi was also getting ready to go for movie. her younger brother ronit (her cousin) was just at home. When the Doorbell rang, he opened the door. Its sachin...

ronit: jiju, aap yaha pe...

Sachin: ha bus purvi se milne aaya hu

Ronit, wow jiju, aap office me to mile hi the na,

Sachin: ha but waha pe duty ki taraf jyada focus rahta hai so socha aaj yaha pe mil lu, vese ghar me koi dikhayi nahi de raha.

Ronit: sab shadi me gaye hue hai, n di bhi abhi movie jane wali hai par usne to kaha tha aapke sath nahi ja rahi

Sachin: ya, mujhe nahi malum tha vo movie ja rahi hai (he think): chalo ye accha hai ghar pe koi nahi, nahi to madam ko bahar le jana padta, ab ghar pe hi sahi... purvi get ready.. ab tumhari bari hai...

Ronit: jiju kaha kho gaye,

Sachin: actually, me soch raha tha agar me thodi der purvi se akele me bat karu to tumhe koi problem to nahi hogi

Ronit: kesi bate kar rahe ho vese bhi 15 din bad to aapki shadi hai to me bhala kon hota hu aap logo ko milne se rokne wala.. di upper room me hai

Sachin: thanks. Milte hai phir..

In Purvi's room

Purvi: chalo ready to ho gayi hu, ab shreya ko call kar deti hu vo bhi ready rahe,

Sachin: kahi jane ki taiyari chal rahi hai.

Purvi (with jerked): aap yaha pe

Sachin: kyu nahi aa sakta me

Purvi: aa sakte but vo abhi me bahar ja rahi hu

Sachin: hmmm bataya mujhe tumhare bhai ne

Purvi: to hum bad me milte hai

Sachin: purvi mene bahut socha kal rat ke bare me...

Purvi: sir aap us bat ko rahne dijiye,

Sachin: ya me bhi yahi soch raha hu purvi, actual me itna guilt kyu feel kar raha hu, afterall 15 din bad to ye sab comman rahega na hamare liye,

Purvi (with jerked voice): matlab...

SAchin: actual me purvi yar hum log itna hesitate kyu ho rahe hai. Even ye sab agar hamare beech hota hai to bhi bura kya hai,

Purvi: sir aap aisa kyu... Sachin came close to purvi and touch her cheek, purvi shivered.

sachin: purvi, vese bhi hamare beech sab kuch ho chuka hai, and aaj yaha pe koi hai bhi nahi, to kyu na aaj..

Purvi: sir dur rahiye mujhse,,

Sachin: ab jab sab ho gaya hai to hum us lamhe ko acche se jiye na, kal to hum drugs ke nashe me the, aaj to ekdum hosh me hai...

Purvi move backside (with embarrassed tone): sir, ye sab abhi nahi please

Sachin: par kyu purvi, ab to sab kuch ho gaya hai to us lamhe ko phir se jeene me kesa dar... purvi stopped now because of the bed

Sachin pushed her on the bed. Now Purvi was more terrified

Purvi: sir aap ... aisa kuch nahi ... karege.

Sachin: tum dar kyu rahi ho purvi... agar hum logo ke beech kuch nahi hua hota to ya hum log ye sab first night tak pending rakhte par ab jab ye sab ho chuka hai to phir...

Purvi: sir please... aap ki bahan, aap ki ma unke bare me to...

Sachin: o ha unke bare me... unhe aaj mene sab bata diya

Purvi (with wide eyes): kya...

Sachin: or unhone kaha agar hum log 1 dusre se shadi karne wale hai to usme itna afsos karne ki need nahi hai

Purvi: aisa kaha un logo ne

Sachin: yes, and ab mujhe bhi usme kuch burai nah lag rahi and he came more closed to her

Purvi: sir, mujhe bahar jana hai... tarika, shreya mera wait kar rahe hai

Sachin: ya, iske bad tumhe me khud drop kar duga and he touched her hairs and act like he is ready for kiss...

Purvi: sir pleaseee... mujhe ye sab nahi karna, . She was in shocked and she was badly scared from sachin..

Sachin: purvi, 1 bar ho chuka hai na phir kyu... (and he touched her neck)

Purvi (pushed sachin) : kya ho chukka hai, ho chukka hai ki dhun laga rakhi hai aapne, kuch nahi hua tha hum dono ke beech... aapko to bilkul bhi hosh nahi tha and me un gundo ki harkat ke karan ro rahi thi... na ki ...

Sachin: janta hu, mene tumhari or shreya ki sari bate sun li thi or phir pankaj ne mujhe sab bata diya, bus ab tumhare muh se sunna chahta tha..

Purvi: matlab..

Sachin: jyada oversmart ban rahi ho... matlab... mujhe galatfhmi me dala tha tumne ...

Purvi: galatfahmi aapko hui thi mene nahi dala tha aapko,

Sachin: uspe sach ki mohar to tumne hi lagayi thi, or 1 bat aage se dhyan rakhna agar ab aisi harkate dubara ki to yad rakhna patni banke to aane hi wali ho tab pura hisab kar luga... and he leaved

Purvi scared and closed the room's door with thud voice.. : o god, ye sab kya tha... her mobile rang, its sachin, she picked phone with shivered hands:

Sachin: good night, enjoy the movie... and he cut the phone...

Again her phone rang, she picked and say: aap bar bar phone karke kya jatana chahte hai

Shreya: kon... kiski bat kar rahi hai tu

Purvi: shreya tum...

Shreya: ha me, phone uthane se pahle dekh to le kiska phone hai, or kya hua, kisko kah rahi thi tu

Purvi: kuch nahi vo bus wrong no. Hai

Shreya: tu aa rahi hai ya nahi, me ready hu kabse wait kar rahi tera

Purvi:ha aa rahi hu...and she leaved with a fear of marrige..

...

end of this SS

want to read more.. then visit...

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12123439/1/Its-a-life

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