Aditya Sir's B'day Investigative Story Rating Thread (Results on Pg 2)

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Himani

@.mOSAIc.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Investigative Story Contest

I received three entries and all the three participants., Kousar-Aditya, gadhadada and swathi17, deserve a pat on their back.
And with some votes, it's now time to present to you the results!

First up a big thank you to our participants! Feel free to use this siggy by AS-Rifi!

The runner up is swathi17.

And the winner is gadhadada. Here's your prize by AS-Rifi!

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Congrats Swathi & GD🥳

Will read the stories soon and post my reviews😳

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Congrats Swathi and GD...👏

I've read only one story till now. I'll read the rest later.😊

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Secret

@Twilight123

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Congratulations GD n Swati😛👏⭐️

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Kousar-Aditya

@Kousar-Aditya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Congo GD👏

Congo Swathi Guria🥳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Expected Result...😉😆

I am really Honored to Compete 2 Emerging Talented Writers...😳👏👏

Really feeling Pleasure to have another Bunch of Great Writers...👏👏

Thank You so much...😳😳

@SWATHI... Excellent Job Beta...👏👏

even U really Deserving Winning Position...😳👏👏

Great to have U as Runner Up...👏👏

@KAUSAR... another Good Writer...😳👏

Nicely narrated Entry...😃👏

Good to have U at 3rd Position...😳👏

@HIMANI... Very Good Plot...👏👏

Having Some Sparks of Innovative Shades...😃👏

Thank You so much...😳😳

@RIFFI... again Great Siggies as Gifts...👏👏

Thank You so much... 😳😳

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Swathi

@swathi17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Congratulations GD di...

I too expected the same result...

Kousar di please don't give up writing... You must write more stories like this...

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MysticMorning

@MysticMorning

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Congo songo Pallot 🤗
Congratz swathi 🥳

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Sorry for late feedback. One day was not sufficient to read all the stories, that too without even a weekend in between. I am posting my reviews here.

Story no 1:

It is a nice attempt but the condition of the story was that there is no mobile signal, however considering that Abhijeet is in a proper hospital, a question arises as to how come there's not even a landline phone there. Also, this Arjun knows Abhijeet and was an informer in the past. I am sure he would have tried to contact Mumbai CID and inform them that Abhijeet has met with an accident. I know it's very hard...that's why I didn't submit my story...at least you tried and that's commendable. 👏 Do write more stories.

Story 2:

The story and investigation were very good and fitting it into the given theme was very tough. But here, why didn't Abhijeet not inform his team that he met with an accident? He solves a case using internet only, but why isn't he allowed to call his own team. I am also surprised that the police can give a brand new laptop to someone in a matter of hours! 🤣 Govt organizations here still use desktops with Windows XP, you know. 🤣 Hi speed wifi in a hill station is 🤣 If you get 2G you can consider yourself lucky. 😆

The 2 cops names Daya and Freddie were a little unbelievable. 😈 You could have named them anything else. 😛

Anyway...the story was nice and enjoyable. 👏

Story 3:

This finished very fast...😔 I was just beginning to think that solid investigation will start but it ended before even it picked up. The explanation for not using the phone is acceptable...still I don't know why Abhijeet didn't send an email/facebook message to Daya about his accident.

The idea of posting the tattoo image on Facebook was very good. I think CID should start using social media on screen too...(recently they did that) I wish you had written a longer story...you should write more. Great attempt 👏

Edited by visrom - 9 years ago