CID - Adaalat crossover story : Salunkhe suspended! (COMPLETE) - Page 2

Salunkhe ke liye jo gussa tha use itne creative rup mey dekh khushi hui!

Hehe
too good

acha ek out of cntxt quo hey

i have an adalat uninvstigative stry nearly ready, usmey cid ki part boleto bas abhijeet ka ek do scene hey
to wo kaha post kiya jaye?
Bcz i found adalat forum is locked

Lovellyy!!! 👏 Ye kya, Doctor saab phir se Abhi sir ke piche 😆 .. Waiting eagerly for next part 😉 ..

Originally posted by: dreamfanatic

although i feel that Daya knowing about that incident has less chances than I honestly really liked that you presented whole in GIRAFTAAR as backdrop...👏

that's a pin point attracted me towards story most...😳

Thanks, and picture abhi baaki hai. 😉

It's first time i guess i am reading something related to that series here on IF...🤔

Good to see new opinions and more mature and practically handled conversations...👏

although i feel that Daya knowing about that incident has less chances than Abhijeet sir knowing about it...😛

Daya came to know through Nik. He can't hide anything from his guru.😛

Anyways really good going...

no comments on investigation as i haven't paid much attention still...sorry about that...😛

😔 Itna mehnat karke case bayaaya. 😒 Don't we miss investigation on the show?

waiting eagerly for next...😃👍🏼

Hmmm...ok. 😊

And never mind more ADAALAT...😳

i have loved both shows so no problem for me atleast...😃

just too much shudh hindi becomes difficult...😆

For me too...it was so tough. I was sitting with Google translate for many words. 😉 But that's KD's style isn't it?

Viz whiz. Am going to give you my review after you update the story. But for now, the master bowler has bowled me out! Kya dimaag hai tumhari. Am again requesting u to join fw as a writer.

Awesome story.⭐️

OK...while reading I came across some points which weren't clear to me..I hope you'll clarify them...😛

ACP: Hmm...kuch zyada hi confident la raha hai. Humare sare saboot pakke hain na?

here,la refers to what?😕

Main Rajesh - dono aur Ravi ko jaanta hoon.

Who's dono?

Finally finished reading it...😳

Awesome work,vis di!⭐️ Just that 11.45 is not clarified,otherwise everything is just amazing.😛..the suspense is well built...I like KD's style a lot and you have well used it in this...😃

Waiting for the next part...

9 or 11:45 ke beech mein sirf do aur visitors aaye the jo flat no 305 aur no 111 mein gaye the. Lekin Ravi flat no 807 mein rehta tha. Aur 807 mein sirf ek visitor aaya tha - Rajesh. Iska matlab hai ki. Jab Ravi ki maut hui thi, uske flat mein yeh Rajesh hi tha, aur Rajesh ne hi Ravi ka khoon kiya hai.

Again,

KD: Your honour, ho sakta hai hatyara register mein flat no 111 likh diya ho aur building mein ghusne ke baad flat no 807 mein jakar Ravi ki hatya kar diya ho. CID team ne iss case ko samapt karne ki jaldbaazi dikhayi hai.

OK,so a person named rajesh entered ravi's room and came out at 11.45. Afterwards, KD doubts someone else also going into his room and coming out. So, didn't that Rajesh see him killing Ravi? Or the watchman did not notice the facial expressions?

I know I'm vexing you too much.😆 Sorry. 😳

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

i have an adalat uninvstigative stry nearly ready, usmey cid ki part boleto bas abhijeet ka ek do scene hey
to wo kaha post kiya jaye?
Bcz i found adalat forum is locked

You can post it in Fan Fiction Forum. Every writing piece can be posted there. 😛

Originally posted by: visrom

For me too...it was so tough. I was sitting with Google translate for many words. 😉 But that's KD's style isn't it?

Lol. I really liked that Paristithijanya word...🤣🤣 Everytime I read it, I found it really funny! 😆