What you mean to me!! (Page 112) New Poem - Page 82

Originally posted by: suhani.cipamisa

A case right out of 2005-06 era in terms of the investigation, plot, cop distribution, teamwork etc. loved the duo here. I could imagine abhi's emotions and expressions and daya's palpable concern for him. Asha's presence was so fresh! Acp was missed surely but somehow was present even in his absence! Vasudev and abhi's past connection was so asha-era-like! It seemed you twinnies have worked wt raghavan the erstwhile writer of cid! 👏

Wonderful, fast paced, well connected dots, hardly any loopholes, thrilling and unexpected! Use of media like whatsapp was just so original creative innovative and kind of why-didnt-i-predict or think-of this surprising!!! ⭐️

The only thing that i felt bad abt was the gloom surrounding cid whenever abhi's past was brought up... Of course its obvious but i felt sorry for abhi! Thank god daya was by his side...!!

Kudos to u sonsne or sneson 😛 or twinnies, snehal-sonali! Fabulous effort and do continue ure combo 😃

Originally posted by: gadhadada

SONALI and SNEHAL... a Big round of Applause to come with a Combine Project...👏👏👏

its really Nice to See another DUO in that Forum in Writing Field after GD and NEEME...😉😉

DUO aur Hum Naah!! Duo toh ek hi hai humare liye!! Aur bas wahi Humare liye... Duo the hain aur rahenge... Kayamat aane tak 😆 Hum toh Twins hai 😛

khair, dekho bhae, Paisun ka Hisab barabar rakhna...👍🏼

Tum Dono ka Share ...40/40...😃😃

aur baaqi ak 20% Mera as U Both Inspired with Me so 10% is Mine and 10% is of NEEME...😈

Well share toh kaafi logon ka banta hai... Including Mishu, Soni, Angel... List lambi hai boss!! 😉

Ok Now Back to Story,...😆

First I wanted to Give U a Critical Review but I think its Better that I Skip some Critical points and get back to Normal Review...😃😃

Ohh Really?? Dhanya Bhaag Humare 😆

I Loved that U brought Back the ATEET of ABHIJEET Sir and this time trying to Nab that Culprit...👏👏

Thank you for appreciating 😃

Boss Some Confusing points are there as mostly Characters name started from "V" or "W" and both sounds Similar tou Buht Jagah Garbar hui...😆

Bhai Wilcox ka spelling W se hi shuru hota hai V se nahi... Chaahee toh Google kar lo...

Dusri, ASHA Appearance was a Surprise but U did not give any Strong Professional Reason to bring Her here, just say kay Staff Kum tha toyu Mujhy Bheja gaya yahan, kuch Maza Nahi aaya...😉😉

Well according to me the reason was strong enough to bring her in... She had a good rapport with the team... In my earlier stories I have mentioned she was posted in Delhi... Since ACP and team was in Delhi She was a strong reason to be there and help the team!!

Poori Story mein DAYA Sir Becharay Chai maangty rahy 🤣 aur Baray Bhai Unhein Green Tea ka Jhansa hee Dety rahy...😉😉

Haan Yeh Baat toh hai 😆 Case ke baad pila denge Boss... Chinta naa Karo!! 😉

I am Agreeing with ANJILI as its Quite Weird that case mein Kuch aisa Similar nahi tha magar ABHIJEET Sir Initially told kay Ye ek Purany Case say Milta hay... jo more than 10 Saal Purana hay...😕😕

There is something called as intuition... Police walon me hota hai... Some call it gut feeling... Bas ab aap maana nahi chahate toh theek hai... Jaisi aap ki marzi!!

haan DAYA Sir nay kaha kay STOLEN DYNAMITE ka Culprit Pakra Nahi gaya pr Wo tou RISHI tha na aur already Wo CID ki Custody mein tha...😕😕😕

We are not considering Stolen Dynamite... We are considering a case where Abhijeet got kidnapped... ACP mentioned Golwadi blast in Stolen Dynamite while referring to the old photographs hanging on Abhijeet's house wall to help him recollect... You can rewatch the scene where Abhijeet is taken to his house and he fails to recollect his mother.

I Loved that ABHIJEET Sir Attitude during revealing of Those Chits He showed...👏👏

Typical ABHIJEET Sir Style...😎

Thank You... We just wanted to show, Abhijeet is happy now and moved on... 😃

The Bridge where VASUDEV brought them and after that ABHIJEET Sir Memory Back was an Awesome Idea...⭐️⭐️⭐️

The Extremelly Wowest Part That Was...⭐️⭐️

Thanks Boss!! Yeh Twinuu ka idea tha 😛

The Dart Idea also Confusing, as I think VASUDEV must Used Bullet or anything but Dart...😕😕

Okay I take this blame, We jyst wanted to show Abhi managing singlehandedly... Daya hosh me hote toh chup nahi baithte.. So Dart... But Sorry about that!!!

Baaqi sub kuch Theek tha...😃👏👏

Thank you Boss 😃

A Good Combine Effort Yaar...😳👏👏

Thanks Again 😊

A Big Thank you to YOU and SNEHAL...😳🤗😳

Writing was our pleasure hope you enjoyed reading too!! Thanks again for Reading and Reviewing...

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

and congratulations to u both...
for ur combo story..
and thank you tooo

Originally posted by: suhani.cipamisa

A case right out of 2005-06 era in terms of the investigation, plot, cop distribution, teamwork etc. loved the duo here. I could imagine abhi's emotions and expressions and daya's palpable concern for him. Asha's presence was so fresh! Acp was missed surely but somehow was present even in his absence! Vasudev and abhi's past connection was so asha-era-like! It seemed you twinnies have worked wt raghavan the erstwhile writer of cid! 👏

Wonderful, fast paced, well connected dots, hardly any loopholes, thrilling and unexpected! Use of media like whatsapp was just so original creative innovative and kind of why-didnt-i-predict or think-of this surprising!!! ⭐️

The only thing that i felt bad abt was the gloom surrounding cid whenever abhi's past was brought up... Of course its obvious but i felt sorry for abhi! Thank god daya was by his side...!!

Kudos to u sonsne or sneson 😛 or twinnies, snehal-sonali! Fabulous effort and do continue ure combo 😃

Originally posted by: gadhadada

SONALI and SNEHAL, I think I re Read Ur Story again cz after watching VANISHING LADY last Night, I'll much Enjoying this Story as well Understand Some Points More than Earlier...😃😃

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

SneSon!! Nice name😛..
Jo kuch mujhe kahena tha plus and minus points wo sab former reviewers ne kahe diya. So am not retyping😛. Kudos to you Di^2.. Fantastic effort put forward by both of you⭐️⭐️⭐️. Like Suhani di I too enjoyed the touch of classic era throughout story specially the DUO whom I missed a lot these days. Refreshing, fabulous story over all. Btw Daya sir saying 'CID ko wo chunauti de raha hai' was a FWish dialogue😛.. I feel its an odd one out among the nice dialogues.

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

A lovely thrilling experience for me...👏

Loved reading whole...⭐️

a really nice investigative story with easy to understand narration...👏

I will not repeat the points said by early reviewers...😳

Because i agree with almost all of them...

though i felt disconnected at some point as i was not able to remember cases and stuff though i somehow remembered vasudev, right? so not that hard too...

Abhijeet's calm behavior was nice..👏

though i expected something more if you were bringing such a thing up...

khair that's my prob..

A lovely investigative story...

Thank you so much both the di's for writing such an awesome stuff...🤗

Originally posted by: suhani.cipamisa

Btw. Just to add- the story has touches of almost all the eras of the golden period! Especially 2003, 2006 and 2007!!! 👏

Originally posted by: misha.as

First of all A big thank you so much for this story Snehal Di and Sonali Di... you both reminds me GD and Neeme Di's combined story... too good...
Investigation, teamwork, plot, cop distribution and all was just awesome... ⭐️ ⭐️ I like Asha Mam's entry and her support... ⭐️ and most important Daya's support... it was amazing ⭐️ ⭐️and excepted too... 😛 Abhijeet Sir's clam behavior was too good... ⭐️ ⭐️
Wonderful story... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 plzzz continue it in future too... 😛 👍🏼
Once again thank you so much... 🤗 🤗