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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: Reshma.
Just read your "13 Saal Purana Case"
Extremely well done I should say. Transported me back to that golden era with classic investigation 👏👏 The convos, the dialogues and the team distribution was amazing 👏👏

Great job, Sonali! 👏

Thank you so much for reading dear...

I am glad you liked it...

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: GIRL_SHERLOCK
The Excerpt is really interesting.
I'll be waiting for the whole story 👍🏼

Thank you dear... I am glad you liked it... I will soon update the story...

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: kkkloveu
I am waiting for the story...
very nice and griping Excerpt..👍🏼

Thanks Riya... Will update soon...

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Jackles

@Jackles

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: Sonali.
Really upset with Friday episode so scribbled something...
Nirasha...

Kisi kirdaar se judne kya hai gunah?
Kya galat hai unhe dena apne dil me panah?
Saloon se jis kirdaar ko aapne seencha tha khoon pasine se
Hum sub ne bhi toh usse jiya tha apne dil ke haar ek kone se
Uss chabi ko gavane ke liye par bas ek hi pal tha kaafi
Aur humare dilon ke tukde hone mei koi kasar naa rahi baaki
Kis se ho naraz aur kise de dosh?
Samaj nahi paa rahe kis par nikale rosh?
Unn se ho khafa jis ne iss kirdaar ko banaya
Ya uss kalakaar se ho naraz jis ne isse sajaya?
Ek anokhi nirasha ne hume hai ghera...
Anjaana sa lagne laga woh apna sa chehra...
Galat hai Aaj ki galti ke liye kal hassen palo ko bhulna
Jaanta hai dimaag par mushkil hai dil ko samjhana...
Jaane kyun uthta mere man mei bawal
Dil poochta hai bas yehi sawal
Kisi kirdaar se judne kya hai gunah?
Kya galat hai unhe dena apne dil me panah?

Each word shows agony😳😭

I can feel the feeling of annoyance that umbrages acrimony by time

Brilliantly portrayed a stolid episode👏

Thanks and sorry for last minute reply😳

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Amaazing...waiting😛 hayee what an excerpt haan.? sharing sprite and all😆

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: saman0

Each word shows agony😳😭
I can feel the feeling of annoyance that umbrages acrimony by time
Brilliantly portrayed a stolid episode👏
Thanks and sorry for last minute reply😳

Thanks sweetheart... I am glad you liked it...

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: nsapo
Amaazing...waiting😛 hayee what an excerpt haan.? sharing sprite and all😆

Heee heee hope you will like the story as well...

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: pappais
waiting...waiting...waiting

Will post soon dear...

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

😲😲😲 Sonali, its Done...😉😉😉

OML..! koi Bachao...😉

CID ko bulao...😉

I m haging in Middle...😆😆

SONALI is the Culprit to bring Me in that Hanging position...😈

Baray Bhai ko Buht Shuaq hay, Ladies say Sprite share karnay ka...😆😉

kabhi Popat say tou nahi ki... huh...😡

and Bhai went to Console Her...😉

wah wah, CID kay Officers...😆😆

Zabardast...👏👏

Waiting waiting Boss...😛😛

Jaldi Karo...👏👏

Main Gir kay mar gaya na...🤢🤢

tou POPAT ki Maut ka karan Sonali ki Incomplete Story hogi...😉😉

Bhayun aur Behnun, Yaad rakhna...😛😛

Thank You so much...😳😳

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Sick... I was writing the story I almost finished the story reached the climax and damn my cell hanged and now the doc shows blank there is nothing I am damn irritated... 😡 😡 😡 😡