What you mean to me!! (Page 112) New Poem - Page 47

Originally posted by: pappais

nice story di👍🏼

Originally posted by: gadhadada

SONALI, Story Finished na...

or still have any Concluding parts...

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Concluding bole toh last part boss... Bas itna hi hai 😛

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Thank You...👍🏼

Nice story Sonali but somehow I feel you lost the grip on the story in part 2. The story is overall good but part 1 is more thrilling.


one more thing. You have shown Rajat exploding a truck of gas cylinders...I was a bit surprised under those circumstances.. That is just to distract the goons. In 571E the petrol tank was shot at because the was already a bomb and it was in an empty helipad ..but a gas cylinder truck standing on the road.. Probably to distribute to public...will a cid cop destroy public property? I don't know. ..! 😆

But overall nice story. Please don't give such a big gap between different parts. From my own personal experience I know the story will take a different track. In my case I ended up abandoning it.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

SONALI, its really a Classy Attempt...👏👏

I Love the Topic, Handeling, Treatment...👏😳

U really Alert about Small Things especially taking Help from Police, Use Constables for Security purpose, Information Network and Media...👏👏

U excillentlly joint all and Knitted them Well...👏👏

Lovely Space to Every Officer and the Combine Work...

Cute Concern for DAYA Sir...😳😳

SUDHAKER entry was completely Unexpected..👏👏

Except the Length of part 2 as some parts feeling Dragged (in my opinion only)...😉

Its really a Fantastic Story...⭐️⭐️

A Big Thank You to You...🤗

Originally posted by: visrom

Nice story Sonali but somehow I feel you lost the grip on the story in part 2. The story is overall good but part 1 is more thrilling.


one more thing. You have shown Rajat exploding a truck of gas cylinders...I was a bit surprised under those circumstances.. That is just to distract the goons. In 571E the petrol tank was shot at because the was already a bomb and it was in an empty helipad ..but a gas cylinder truck standing on the road.. Probably to distribute to public...will a cid cop destroy public property? I don't know. ..! 😆

But overall nice story. Please don't give such a big gap between different parts. From my own personal experience I know the story will take a different track. .in case I ended up abandoning it.

Read the story finally.. Part 1 is really superb. The DUO in car..shootout..totally filled with suspence and thrill, action⭐️⭐️..
Part 2 is good too. Excellent team work⭐️👏.. I also feel at some points grip is loosened due to a long gap.. But overall the story is fantastic👏👏..