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wonderful poem sonali di... agree with your each lines...

Originally posted by: binod.abhijeet

.@sonali nice creation..

Originally posted by: misha.as

wonderful poem sonali di... agree with your each lines...

Hi Sonali 😊

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Shared it on Adi sir's FC... So just sharing with all of you...

Aap ki Aankhein...

Bhoola naa pau main jo pehli baar huva tha aap se deedar

Seham gayi thi mai dekhkar aap ke aankhon me angaar

Yaad nahi thi woh konsi film ya tha woh konsa kirdaar

Agar kuch yaad hai toh bas aap ki aankhon ke angaar

Phir aap aaye bankar Sr. Insp. Abhijeet,

Ek aisa CID officer jiska dhundla tha ateet

Abhijeet ke aankhon mein nazar aate the dher saare sawal...

Aankhon se bayaan hota tha man mein jo macha that bawal

Guzarte waqt ke saath Abhijeet CID mein hone lage sthir

Shanti aur santosh ke bhav unke aankhon mein hone lage zaahir

Freddy sang jub kare mazak tab utre Shararat Aankhon mein

ACP sir sang jub ho roo ba roo toh izzat nazar aaye nigahon mein

Daya sang jo ho toh, aankhein bayaan kare khushiyon ke ehsaas

Aur cases suljhate waqt nazar aaye aankhon mein anokha aatmavishwas

Aap ki Yeh aankhein aneko bhavnao sang Athkheliyaan khelti Hain...

Koi Mane ya Naa Mane par aap ki aankhein kitna kuch bolti Hain...

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Hi Sonali 😊

Finally read "Raaz Anjaan Misaafiron Ka"...😃

Wonderfully written!! 👏

Loved the casual convo between Daya n Fredy at the beginning 😊

The message the four gave each other was very nicely shown 👏

Daya's suspision, the way Abhi lead the team, the very well organised effort to stop the plan of Sangvi and Tiger... very nicely portrayed!!

And bechaara Fredy... Abhi Sir aur Daya Sir ne phir phasa diya 😆

Very nice story... Enjoyed reading it!! 😃👏

Thanks again for appreciating the poem Neha...

I just read Kidnapped Girl story now Sonali and its really wonderfully written. The first part is really awesome. It seems so realistic officers solving case in the middle of night. I loved how all the members of the team had beautiful moments with each other especially the chai and tea scene to show them they also humans and not roberts. You written the first part beautifully with some nice natural diolgues. I simply loved it. Waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Shared it on Adi sir's FC... So just sharing with all of you...

Aap ki Aankhein...

Bhoola naa pau main jo pehli baar huva tha aap se deedar

Seham gayi thi mai dekhkar aap ke aankhon me angaar

Yaad nahi thi woh konsi film ya tha woh konsa kirdaar

Agar kuch yaad hai toh bas aap ki aankhon ke angaar

Phir aap aaye bankar Sr. Insp. Abhijeet,

Ek aisa CID officer jiska dhundla tha ateet

Abhijeet ke aankhon mein nazar aate the dher saare sawal...

Aankhon se bayaan hota tha man mein jo macha that bawal

Guzarte waqt ke saath Abhijeet CID mein hone lage sthir

Shanti aur santosh ke bhav unke aankhon mein hone lage zaahir

Freddy sang jub kare mazak tab utre Shararat Aankhon mein

ACP sir sang jub ho roo ba roo toh izzat nazar aaye nigahon mein

Daya sang jo ho toh, aankhein bayaan kare khushiyon ke ehsaas

Aur cases suljhate waqt nazar aaye aankhon mein anokha aatmavishwas

Aap ki Yeh aankhein aneko bhavnao sang Athkheliyaan khelti Hain...

Koi Mane ya Naa Mane par aap ki aankhein kitna kuch bolti Hain...

Originally posted by: Soni.

I just read Kidnapped Girl story now Sonali and its really wonderfully written. The first part is really awesome. It seems so realistic officers solving case in the middle of night. I loved how all the members of the team had beautiful moments with each other especially the chai and tea scene to show them they also humans and not roberts. You written the first part beautifully with some nice natural diolgues. I simply loved it. Waiting for the next part.