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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya
OMG Sonali that was definitely an awesome story!

Everything was so lovely. Investigation, casual conversation, team distribution!

A classic and epic story!

Shreya... thank you so much for reading it in one go... 😃 I am so happy you liked, You appreciation actually made my day 😃

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ControlledChaos

@ControlledChaos

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Greatly written Sonali di.. seriously your story reminded me of the golden era.
Loved every bit of it.
I am astonished as to why you didn't write earlier.. Anyways keep writing more. 😊

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: DUOlover123
Greatly written Sonali di.. seriously your story reminded me of the golden era.
Loved every bit of it.
I am astonished as to why you didn't write earlier.. Anyways keep writing more. 😊

Oh really it reminded you of Golden era... 😃 I am so happy that I could make you happy 😃 Thank you so much for appreciation 😳

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Soni.

@Soni.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Read the promo just now
Looks like an interesting story
Will read the full story soon

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

First of all, CONGRATULATIONS on your first story 🤗

I know it feels great... 😃

I read the promo...

Wow...!! Really interesting...!!! 😃

Will read the story soon...😊

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Soni.
Read the promo just now
Looks like an interesting story
Will read the full story soon

Okay Soni. Take your time. but not really long haan 😉 I am waiting for your feedback 😃

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: neha_dna
First of all, CONGRATULATIONS on your first story 🤗
I know it feels great... 😃

I read the promo...
Wow...!! Really interesting...!!! 😃

Will read the story soon...😊

Thank You so much Neha... Please read the story soon... i am eagerly waiting for your feedback 😊

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Just started...I must say...it's so nice to see how you took the story to a flashback. 😃

Frankly if the story were completely Asha era, it would have been a bit toughto digest. So, I love it this way. Will continue now...😊

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Woow!! Really nice story sonali.. 👏 👍🏼 You mixed current era with golden era so nicely.. Loved to read this unique style of story telling. Daya's concern towards his car, team and all; abhi's concern towards asha and the whole team which is really a family and A class CID officers all is really lovely to read.. The short moments with complete invistigation made me remind all those lovely cases.. Keep it up. I will be waiting for more stories from you now 😃

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Finished it! 😃

this was lovely...dil khush ho gaya padhke...never read an Asha story before. 😊

When Freddie and Sudhakar were talking about Ramsay's stories, for a second I imagined him shouting 'kahiiinnn usss bbbunnggaalllooowww mmmeeeiinnn AAATTMMMAAA tohh nahiin' and receiving a reprimand from ACP! 🤣 But this was Asha era Freddie...who wasn't into tomfoolery.

All the while I could see Asha in black jeans and a loose shirt and a short plait...ring on index finger...she was awesome. 😊

Lovely story...do keep writing. 👍🏼