Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 66

Originally posted by: snehal.

Try as you may GD, i will always say

bechara mera abhi!! kitni pitai ho gayi 😉

🤣

Originally posted by: misha.as

Rise of a New Begining...

Bechare mere Daya sir..😲💔😭
Iss DCP ko toh sacchi marne ka man kar raha hai.😡😡 Uff ye panishment.😲😡
Everyone was ready with their resignations..👏⭐️ 👏 So sweet.👏 I like it...⭐️⭐️
Whole Instances in Shaitan Chouki and that Goan or wo Inspector QAMAT.😲 wardi wala chor...😡 😡
I really loved Misha and her little
efforts..👏👏. ⭐️ Awww.. How she made Abhi sir have his dinner⭐️.👏. so cute... 👏👏⭐️
I loved the care and concern
of everyone in the team.⭐️👏
Chotey... he's so cute.. 👏⭐️
👏Loved his character too...👏 And his care abt Daya sir...👏⭐️⭐️

Neeme di , GD Super...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

and GD next time PM jarur send karna... ok ...

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

So sorry for being late..😛

last part was completely fantastic...
N that Qamat n DCP...huh...Zalim hay dono..
Bechare mere Daya sir...[:'(]
Acha mara uss Qamat ko..😡😡

Bechare Abhi sir..pit gye iss baar toh😔😆
Rahul,ACP,misha,Veer,Team...all were awesome...

The last scene was really very very sweet...
Lovved it too much❤️❤️
An emotional end to a thriller story...Fantastic...⭐️⭐️

Keep coming with more guys...!!!!!

Originally posted by: misha.as

THE DARKEST HOURS...


It is
so emotional part...
Love it ...

GD and Neeme di you both are awesome...




Waiting for next story...
All the best...

Originally posted by: Soni.

Reviewing the 7th chapter GD and Neeme...What shall i say? Meine apne ap ko repeat nahi karna chahti lekin kya karu story hai itni kaamal ke...I simply hate that DCP aur kuch kaam nahi hai kya ussa mera Daya ke peecha para hai...The whole plan was superbly described as well as greatly penned down. I don't know how to appreciate your writing skills GD but you have this power of making me make every expression while reading your work. You along with Neeme are simply amazing. The whole plan of Daya was really well executed you made everything clear to your level best. I really liked Rahul in this whole story and aww I liked him even more in this part. Resignation scene was simply superb everyone had theirs ready lol. I loved the doctors last line 'Acha hua me doctor bana' bechare uljan mein paasa tha lol. Inspecter Qamat...I hate him inspecter he hai ya fir kuch aur. Mujhe tho bahut baara daku lag raha hai. Mera Daya ke cheesa chura le how dare he...I really loved Misha and her little efforts... aww how she made Abhi have his dinner.. so cute... asically I loved the care and concern of everyone in the team to make Abhijeet feel comfortable and not guilty to make sure that he's taking his good care. That Chotey. he's so cute.. loved his character too...maybe Daya resembled him wehn he was small isliya thora se time mein he was so close to him. atleast now Daya has got someone with whom he can talk and someone who can talk with him respectfully. Superb part GD and Neeme will be reading next part soon.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Beta agar aisa hota tou Buht Baray baray Naamun ko Saza mil jati... Normally aisa in Real Life Nhai hota Baccha...😭😭

abt Villegers, could U think for a Moment that any Person gives any Statement against their MAI BAAP either after knowing everything...

Edited by ANGELICEYES - 11 years ago