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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly i give you a warm welcome 🤗
Re OS_How intelligibly you putted evocative emotions in words 👏
And the fact that how someone is pinned to his past for aye 😃
After passing your prime, and being engaged in metier yet one ne'er lays aside those sweet memories. A sip of tea, a quick tittle tattle and some old things can send you on trip to memory lane 😉
Brilliant OS 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one Apoorva...very sweet. 😃
And yeah...welcome back. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

A Beautiful Picture with Definite Colors U Portrayed in Our Mind Caves...👏⭐️👏
just bring back that GUZRA HUA ZAMANA...😳🤗
A Big Thank You so much...😳😳

Ye daulat bhi le lo ye shohrat bhi le lo
Bhale chhin mujhse meri jawani
Magar mujhko lota de bachpan ka sawan
Woh kagaz ki kashti wo barish ka pani

Muhalle ki sabse purani shaan
Woh bhudhiya jise bache kehte the naani
Woh naani ki bato me pariyo ka dera
Woh chehre ki jhuriyo me sadiyo ka khera
Bhulaye nahi bhul sakta hai koi
Bhulaye nahi bhul sakta hai koi
Woh chhoti si raat wo lambi kahani

Kadi dhup me mai ghar se na niklna
Woh chidiya wo bulabul wo titliyo ka ghar
Woh gudiya ki shadi pe ladna jhagdana
Woh jhulo se girna wo girke sambhalna
Woh pipal ke chhalo ke pyare se kante
Woh tuti huyi churiyo ki nishani
Woh kagaz ki kashti wo barish ka pani

Kabhi ret ke unche tiilon pe jana
Gharounde banana banake mitana
Woh masum chahat ki tasvir apani
Woh khawabo khilono ki jagir apani
Na duniya ka gam tha na rishton ke bandhan
Badi khubasurat thi woh zindgani
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely OS Apoorva!!😃
Welcome back chhori!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice OS Apoorva! Welcome back! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written Apporva.Nice one. 👏 👏

Thank you so much.😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

Whoah look who's the first to review...😉

Title is heart touching...simple sweet and absolutely perfect considering the OS.👏
And from the first para I fell in love with it...beautiful narration yaar...simple yet gripping and soothing.
The scene moved smoothly with slow pace yet in the best way it should have...
Words indeed are a writers sword and you proved it...
The os is too short but it satisfies the reader who sat for reading something new with excitement...
You didn't dissapoint me apporva...the concept was unique and amazing to read...I felt like reading and enjoying all together after a long time in such a story...
Ahmed was a good inclusion...
Last para said so many things... The highlight of the whole os indeed. Especially the first line of it...
Yes its true we can't imagine to part ways from cid and it would be difficult for anybody actually...even for the non watchers because somewhere everyone is addicted to acp pradyuman abhijeet daya salunkhe and freddy...
Again appoorva I will say the same thing...
BEAUTIFUL OS...
Unique concept...
Amazing narration...
Thank you so much yaar...
P.S. by the way being the first reviewer I need a gift..😉


Thanks Riya for being first 😳 and a wonderful review 🤗
heres ur gift 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uhs313

beautiful os...loved everything about it!! specially the last para about the actors emotions how they remember their past think about the present and want to stick together in future... loved it!!!! fantastic piece of work! 👏 👏 👏


thanks @uhs313😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

awesome👏

some nstalagia..i felt like some old song is being played far away im getting only the melody...
remembered the small stall near school every crner of it i still remmbered..
sudenly got a realisation yes we all changs with time but we all want to go back somewhere..where our peace lies
fantastic


Thanks Krittika😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -SAMAN-

Firstly i give you a warm welcome 🤗

Re OS_How intelligibly you putted evocative emotions in words 👏
And the fact that how someone is pinned to his past for aye 😃
After passing your prime, and being engaged in metier yet one ne'er lays aside those sweet memories. A sip of tea, a quick tittle tattle and some old things can send you on trip to memory lane 😉
Brilliant OS 👏👏👏


thanks 😳😃 And btw ur review is better composed than my entire os😛

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