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Posted: 11 years ago

God of Acting & Queen of Blankness:Part 3


A big haveli they showed in decoration spree
With a few flowers and a huge tree
And a prince in red with all elegance
And also a killer electric fence
Also a supposed queen in red too
Who gave this idea to the crew?
All in festive mood, dressed up in glory
But one twist can afford to spoil the whole story
First she recieves a threatening letter
To do an ugly deed they found no one better
She tries to act a worrisome look
And all her dialogues delivered from a book
She holds the prince hands, how dare she touch?
She pulls him aside away from a trusted lady,
and he tries to escape the clutch
He scorns in contempt at the wild threat
Nobody can harm a single hair on him I bet
But the board collapses and he stands suspended
The queen screeches all senses suspended
She runs to and fro with certain imbalance on foot
She calls the prince's best friend, dressed in a traditional suit
He comes and yes the rest of the story no better
And the future's glimpses scare me...
The prince bleeding and his best friend attacking
Oh please FW please do some brain racking
He hits the prince with a rod and he collapses
But I feel the pain, my heartbeat elapses
Who did recommend friends to become fiends?
And please fast make your amends
The clock strikes ten and I stand to think
Should I or should I not? And I turn pink
With Anger at the queen and the story
But also for the Hero , while the rest is gory
Oh please oh Prince marry me
I shall be a better queen than she can be😈
Edited by nsapo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2 of God of acting..lovely Apoorva di😳😳.. This time I want to concentrate only on the God😳😳.
Letter to FW..you spoke our mind di⭐️⭐️.. Put it on FB😛.. FW should know what their loyal fans feel..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read part 3 now😛
Thanks a lot angel😳...Ya i think i will...but you know some of the actors and writers are my friends so the might feel bad..its not their fault na😊So i wont😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nicely written Apoorva, totally agreed. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DemonStar

Very nicely written Apoorva, totally agreed. 👍🏼

Thanks Ravi da😳😃 Awaiting your WU😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arey waah Apporva.. A really wonderful poem... Uff this speaks my mind...

She tries to act a worrisome look
And all her dialogues delivered from a book
oh girl l... these are ny fvrt lines.. 🤣 so true...
enjoyed a lot Apoorva.. and the last lines...😆 Yeah I am agreeing with that.. hmmm. .😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Arey waah Apporva.. A really wonderful poem... Uff this speaks my mind...

She tries to act a worrisome look
And all her dialogues delivered from a book
oh girl l... these are ny fvrt lines.. 🤣 so true...
enjoyed a lot Apoorva.. and the last lines...😆 Yeah I am agreeing with that.. hmmm. .😉


Thanks a lot Jerry😳😃 that last two lines are by me and for me...good if you agree😉😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderfully written Apoorva 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: debasree04

wonderfully written Apoorva 👏

Thank you Deba di😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nicely written Apoorva.Why do I have a tiny feeling that you didn't like Tarika ji??🤣😉

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