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nsapo

@nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Thanks shreya di :") I'm glad you liked it ;) :P

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: nsapo
God Of Acting and Queen Of Blankness
Once long time ago lived
A charming man, a talented one
His face a magical world widespread
His eyes depth of an ocean
His words like sweeping breeze
Before the rain, unfailing brought
A bright blush to me

He remain unwed, but i a minor
But some marriage broker entered
Nothing but a villian ; matched him with
A lady so long she was
But her face as blank, like an exam answer paper
Like the cloudy skies, like a toy wooden
He tried with his charm to bring her alive
But god save the god of acting and his blank queen
Cause I roam in apprehension, it is not contagious is it!

This is a first among many...enjoy😛

😆 inspiration from BANDIT QUEEN...😉

Very Well Done...👏

Thank you so much...😳

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Thanks a lot GD😳 but no not bandit queen😉😛

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: nsapo
Thanks a lot GD😳 but no not bandit queen😉😛

Ok then Bandit King...😉😆😆

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

First I Appologize APOORVA as I did not fulfill My Promise due to My Badtameez Net and read Ur Story Lately...

I read the Updated Part, WOW it was Really Fantabulous...⭐️⭐️

I cant believe that the Culprit was a Woman at end...😲

I really Enjoyed Her Calm and Coolness...👏👏

Somehow I really cant believe that Her Father did such thing, its really Weird thinking that just to Stopping Her Daughter from Dancing, He was going such beyond to Kill Her...

I really Admired and Honored to such group of People who Never toold the Bad Deed of Father to a Daughter after almost 12 Years, what a Great People they are especially SASHI RAJ...👏👏

Somehow as SAKSHI was a Dr, how did She got such a Rare Chemical of Purple Gel...😕

The Capillary Tube, Big Yellow Pipes, U must Clear it na Baccha...😕

But all and all, really Classical Attempt... 👏⭐️👏

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: gadhadada

First I Appologize APOORVA as I did not fulfill My Promise due to My Badtameez Net and read Ur Story Lately...

I read the Updated Part, WOW it was Really Fantabulous...⭐️⭐️
I cant believe that the Culprit was a Woman at end...😲
I really Enjoyed Her Calm and Coolness...👏👏
Somehow I really cant believe that Her Father did such thing, its really Weird thinking that just to Stopping Her Daughter from Dancing, He was going such beyond to Kill Her...
I really Admired and Honored to such group of People who Never toold the Bad Deed of Father to a Daughter after almost 12 Years, what a Great People they are especially SASHI RAJ...👏👏
Somehow as SAKSHI was a Dr, how did She got such a Rare Chemical of Purple Gel...😕
The Capillary Tube, Big Yellow Pipes, U must Clear it na Baccha...😕
But all and all, really Classical Attempt... 👏⭐️👏

Asho GD its completely okkay...you were busy na😃Now you read and your review is somthing I always look forward cause it covers everything...

and ya father he just wanted to scare her na😳those things yeah i should have told...anyway thanks a lot...im feeling privileiged😃😳

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

God of Acting & Queen of Blankness- PART 2

When the sun shines bright

The flowers smile right?

How is that when the great God smiles..

You show not a trace of smile beguile?

And now in wedding attire you dare to stand?

Do you think we will after this let the band...

Save you? I believe our God a man of power

From a threatening letter he need not fear

He stands in red, dashing , complete

No need to stand beside and with me compete

What lies within you that you couldnt express

Please do enjoy your married bliss

See you soon this Friday

Dare you not Do any antics I pray

For your own safety I saw stay away

I have myself and an army who'll bring gay

Into the life of MY man I say...

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Madhu

@cutie006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Hi apoorva😛

read ur story.dat was too good👏👏

well written⭐️loved d way of investigation👏

keep writing dear😃

sorry 4 late reply😳😳

@wonderful poem apoorva👏

each n every lines were true n meaningful😉

loved 1st para most😳👏

dat was 4 adi sir na😉

m not a fan of queen😡

anyways, thanks 4sharing it😛

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: cutie006
Hi apoorva😛
read ur story.dat was too good👏👏

well written⭐️loved d way of investigation👏

keep writing dear😃

sorry 4 late reply😳😳

@wonderful poem apoorva👏

each n every lines were true n meaningful😉

loved 1st para most😳👏

dat was 4 adi sir na😉

m not a fan of queen😡

anyways, thanks 4sharing it😛