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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

my next poem😛

Aye mere khuda ye mujhko bata

Ye baat nahin hai chhupane ka

Kya shabab hai mere aane ka.

Na noor kisee ki aankhon ka

Na deep kisee ki rahon ka

Na mere liye koi tanha hai

Na justzo kisee ki bahon ka

Phir hai ye teri chaal koi

Ya galti hai anjane ka

Kya shabab ...

Sapne dekhe jo toot gaye

Jo apne the sab chhut gaye

Kya jurm tha mera mujhko bata

Ya dosh tha phir se zamane ka

Kya shabab ...

Na manjil koi nigahon me

Na sathi koi rahon me

Raste bhi hain anjane se

Kya dhundu es virane me

Ab jaon kahan ye tu hi bata

Ye kissa hai begane ka

Kya shabab...

Thodi si khushi ki chahat thi

Gum sare mujhpar toot gaye

Ek katra na mila sukh ka

Dukh ki dariya me dub gaye

Ye marzi thi teri shayad

Ya kismet thi dewane ka

Kya shabab...

Sub hansti hai kaliyan mujhpar

Bhawre bhi ankhe dikhate hain

Sawan ki baat to mat puchhoo

Kuchh bundon ki barsate hain

Rang badal gaye mausam ke kyun

Ye fidrat hai insano ka

Kya shabab ...

Aye zindgi ab zidd chhod de

Meri sanson se rishta tod de

Meri rooh ko rab se milne de

Ye sawal unse karne de

Ab waqt hai unke batane ka

Kya shabab tha mere aane ka.


Excellent poem👏...Thanks for sharing dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice poem both. Liked each line sooo much that i donot want stop reading them. Super fine job.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot🤗
bubly, shreya,sonali,neha,anji, saman, angel,ravi, reshma,soni & binod🤗
4 liking my poem😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
I want to share a poetry here. It is very close to my heart. Hope you all will like it. It's of my favorite and beloved poet Sir Mirza Ghalib...
Thousand desires

Thousands of desires, each worth dying for...
Many of them I have realized...yet I yearn for more...

Why should my killer (lover) be afraid? No one will hold her responsible
For the blood which will continuously flow through my eyes all my life

We have heard about the dismissal of Adam from Heaven,
With a more humiliation, I am leaving the street on which you live...

Oh tyrant, your true personality will be known to all
If the curls of my hair slip through my turban!

But if someone wants to write her a letter, they can ask me,
Every morning I leave my house with my pen on my ear.

In that age, I turned to drinking (alcohol)
And then the time came when my entire world was occupied by alcohol

From whom I expected justice/praise for my weakness
Turned out to be more injured with the same cruel sword

When in love, there is little difference between life and death
We live by looking at the infidel who we are willing to die for

Put some pressure on your heart to remove that cruel arrow,
For if the arrow comes out, so will your heart...and your life.

For god's sake, don't lift the cover off any secrets you tyrant
The infidel might turn out to be my lover!

The preacher and the bar's entrance are way apart
Yet I saw him entering the bar as I was leaving!

Thousands of desires, each worth dying for...
Many of them I have realized...yet I yearn for more

Sir Mirza Ghalib

Edited by saman0 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

my next poem😛

Aye mere khuda ye mujhko bata

Ye baat nahin hai chhupane ka

Kya shabab hai mere aane ka.

Na noor kisee ki aankhon ka

Na deep kisee ki rahon ka

Na mere liye koi tanha hai

Na justzo kisee ki bahon ka

Phir hai ye teri chaal koi

Ya galti hai anjane ka

Kya shabab ...

Sapne dekhe jo toot gaye

Jo apne the sab chhut gaye

Kya jurm tha mera mujhko bata

Ya dosh tha phir se zamane ka

Kya shabab ...

Na manjil koi nigahon me

Na sathi koi rahon me

Raste bhi hain anjane se

Kya dhundu es virane me

Ab jaon kahan ye tu hi bata

Ye kissa hai begane ka

Kya shabab...

Thodi si khushi ki chahat thi

Gum sare mujhpar toot gaye

Ek katra na mila sukh ka

Dukh ki dariya me dub gaye

Ye marzi thi teri shayad

Ya kismet thi dewane ka

Kya shabab...

Sub hansti hai kaliyan mujhpar

Bhawre bhi ankhe dikhate hain

Sawan ki baat to mat puchhoo

Kuchh bundon ki barsate hain

Rang badal gaye mausam ke kyun

Ye fidrat hai insano ka

Kya shabab ...

Aye zindgi ab zidd chhod de

Meri sanson se rishta tod de

Meri rooh ko rab se milne de

Ye sawal unse karne de

Ab waqt hai unke batane ka

Kya shabab tha mere aane ka.


CUTIE baccha...
ek achi Koshish hay ye...👏
but jo Do Lines Main nay BOLD ki hain...
Main Us say completely DISAGREE hun...😭😭
BTW, Thank You...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

I want to share a poetry here. It is very close to my heart. Hope you all will like it. It's of my favorite and beloved poet Sir Mirza Ghalib...

Thousand desires

Thousands of desires, each worth dying for...
Many of them I have realized...yet I yearn for more...

Why should my killer (lover) be afraid? No one will hold her responsible
For the blood which will continuously flow through my eyes all my life

We have heard about the dismissal of Adam from Heaven,
With a more humiliation, I am leaving the street on which you live...

Oh tyrant, your true personality will be known to all
If the curls of my hair slip through my turban!

But if someone wants to write her a letter, they can ask me,
Every morning I leave my house with my pen on my ear.

In that age, I turned to drinking (alcohol)
And then the time came when my entire world was occupied by alcohol

From whom I expected justice/praise for my weakness
Turned out to be more injured with the same cruel sword

When in love, there is little difference between life and death
We live by looking at the infidel who we are willing to die for

Put some pressure on your heart to remove that cruel arrow,
For if the arrow comes out, so will your heart...and your life.

For god's sake, don't lift the cover off any secrets you tyrant
The infidel might turn out to be my lover!

The preacher and the bar's entrance are way apart
Yet I saw him entering the bar as I was leaving!

Thousands of desires, each worth dying for...
Many of them I have realized...yet I yearn for more

Sir Mirza Ghalib


Buht Buht SHUKRIYA SAMAN...😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

I want to share a poetry here. It is very close to my heart. Hope you all will like it. It's of my favorite and beloved poet Sir Mirza Ghalib...

<font size="4">Thousand desires</font>
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</font>

Thousands of desires, each worth dying for...
Many of them I have realized...yet I yearn for more...

Why should my killer (lover) be afraid? No one will hold her responsible
For the blood which will continuously flow through my eyes all my life

We have heard about the dismissal of Adam from Heaven,
With a more humiliation, I am leaving the street on which you live...

Oh tyrant, your true personality will be known to all
If the curls of my hair slip through my turban!

But if someone wants to write her a letter, they can ask me,
Every morning I leave my house with my pen on my ear.

In that age, I turned to drinking (alcohol)
And then the time came when my entire world was occupied by alcohol

From whom I expected justice/praise for my weakness
Turned out to be more injured with the same cruel sword

When in love, there is little difference between life and death
We live by looking at the infidel who we are willing to die for

Put some pressure on your heart to remove that cruel arrow,
For if the arrow comes out, so will your heart...and your life.

For god's sake, don't lift the cover off any secrets you tyrant
The infidel might turn out to be my lover!

The preacher and the bar's entrance are way apart
Yet I saw him entering the bar as I was leaving!

Thousands of desires, each worth dying for...
Many of them I have realized...yet I yearn for more

Sir Mirza Ghalib




Hazaron kwahishen esi, ke hr kwahish pe dm nikle.. 😊
Tfs Saman.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saman a very big thank you. Itni achi shayari shayad hi pari ho. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Poem thanks for sharing Sanam 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the appreciation GD, DUOlover, Shreya di and Sonali di. Credit goes to our poet Sr Ghalib. Love him 😳

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