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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: khushi.gupta123
sorry @GD i am late because of my exams...about your new story...its fantastic...you are a marvelous story writer...concept was really interesting...👏👍🏼

Exam ya kisi bhi Karan Jo Sorry bolay ga usy Saza kay tour pr Mujhy ek Bottle Orange Juice pilana paray ga...😛😛😛

Thank you so much KHUSHI...🤗😳

Hope Exam kay results Behtareen hon gay...😃😃😃

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: shreela
sorry for being late GD. actually after reading the story twice, it was hard to decide that what should I write for the review.
how can u do this GD? the investigative part is good, but right now I am focussing on the emotional scenes. the conversation between duo and Rajat is just... words are not enough to describe. it actually brought tears in my eyes! zindegi ki itni badi seekh, itni asani se samjha diya? how can u be so good??

love u and your story.🤗

Awww😳😳, What Should I say Now...🤗

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Rishika

@..Brokenheart..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Hey GD.
I am new here and i lIke your stories very much⭐️
This one is also very nice.
I liked the way you highlighted Rajat⭐️.Daya-Abhijeet part was good as usual.
You conveyed A very good messege through your story in very noce way.

Keep coming with stories😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: ..Brokenheart..
Hey GD.
I am new here and i lIke your stories very much⭐️
This one is also very nice.
I liked the way you highlighted Rajat⭐️.Daya-Abhijeet part was good as usual.
You conveyed A very good messege through your story in very noce way.

Keep coming with stories😃

first its always a big big Pleasure to have New members Posts as a feedback in my stories... U all are really My Assets...👏👏👏

if the Message conveyed Correctly to Some Hearts, I really feels Satisfactory...😳😳

Thank You so much BROKENHEART...😳

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anjaan_anjaani

@anjaan_anjaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: anjaan_anjaani
hi, i am a new member here, what can i call you dada or GD?? But to the main point...wow, amazing, fantastic...I have read many of your stories and i think you are the best cid writer i have even seen. I have one small request, can you wite more emotional stories based on duo please as you write them so wonderfully and nobody can write them in your style. And also love reading them...

Hello I m Very OLD member😆... Ohh U can Call Me anything from DADA or GD... Choice is URS Baccha...😳

itnay Baray Barya KHITAAB...😳😳

Baccha I think check My PH (this Story Thread) First Page... U will find So Many Stories and Most of them are Emotional... Check First Page 2nd Post... U got 4 Stories LINK and all of them are Emotional...😛😛😛

Thank You so much ANJAAN_ANJANI...😳😳😳

Thanks for that...i have started to read them in my free time...but OMG dada they are amazing, where do you get such amazing ideas from. I especially like truth behind scene and silent promise and I was literally crying all the way through it. The way you show abhi-daya bonding is outstanding. If fw use your stories them I am sure cid would be the most popular show... I also like the way that your stories have a message which is conveyed to the reader. Thank you for your time and effort as I know it takes a lot to write them...I love your writing style and I hope to read lots more from you.

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Hope I am not too late...

Once again an AWESOME Story GD...👏👏👏

First of all, I liked that you included RAJAT this time with the DUO...😊

The beginning was very nice...totally different one...

The three playing with Society Kids in RAIN was very sweet!!

Loved all the DISGUISE Parts👏 The chemistry between DUO,the CASUAL MOMENTS the way they exchange information was very nicely shown!! I just loved the plot very much!!!😃

Liked the work distribution too...

The SIDE-STORY was also very nicely written...The way ABHI and DAYA make RAJAT realize the TRUTH OF LIFE was REMARKABLE...Hats off to you👏👏👏

The "COMPROMISE" split up was 👏👏👏

ABHI was OUTSTANDING throughout the STORY with a very STRONG SUPPORT from DAYA...!!!😃

Thank you so much for giving us another AWESOME STORY to read...😊

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myaamir

@myaamir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

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aastha94

@aastha94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

hi gd

jab bi mein upset hote hui toh mein app ki story parh leti hui or mei khush hojati hui. App ka bohut bari shukriya...😳😳

App apni next story kab post karenge

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: anjaan_anjaani

Thanks for that...i have started to read them in my free time...but OMG dada they are amazing, where do you get such amazing ideas from. I especially like truth behind scene and silent promise and I was literally crying all the way through it. The way you show abhi-daya bonding is outstanding. If fw use your stories them I am sure cid would be the most popular show... I also like the way that your stories have a message which is conveyed to the reader. Thank you for your time and effort as I know it takes a lot to write them...I love your writing style and I hope to read lots more from you.

Baccha TRUTH BEHIND THE SCENE and SILENT PROMISE were NEEME Effort, I just Organised them in Story Format, Otherwise She is the Mastermind of Both Stories...👏⭐️👏

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Hope I am not too late...
Once again an AWESOME Story GD...👏👏👏
First of all, I liked that you included RAJAT this time with the DUO...😊
The beginning was very nice...totally different one...
The three playing with Society Kids in RAIN was very sweet!!
Loved all the DISGUISE Parts👏 The chemistry between DUO,the CASUAL MOMENTS the way they exchange information was very nicely shown!! I just loved the plot very much!!!😃
Liked the work distribution too...

The SIDE-STORY was also very nicely written...The way ABHI and DAYA make RAJAT realize the TRUTH OF LIFE was REMARKABLE...Hats off to you👏👏👏
The "COMPROMISE" split up was 👏👏👏
ABHI was OUTSTANDING throughout the STORY with a very STRONG SUPPORT from DAYA...!!!😃
Thank you so much for giving us another AWESOME STORY to read...😊

NEHA Gudda, this is One of Those Stories which I enjoyed while working😳, I have Plot with all pros and cons in My Bheja well👏... I also Love tha COM-PROMISE Split as it was My Own Theory and to be Honest, I missed My Father and Bro (who is outside from country) alot and I just Wrote it for Expelling Some Tears stored in My Small Heart...🤗

Thank you so much as U like it... if any Daughter/Son tells Her/His Father One time I LOVE YOU after reading this means I tells My Father and m sure He heard this...😳