YUMMY MISTAKE...!!! (Gift for ADI Sir BD @ 144) - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rosepink.

nice story,popat ka happy to to..so cute😊
daya made popat wear half shirt(khud k paas full size nhi h use kya dega😉)

oye mjhe ab pata chala linda is a small girl, i ws thnkng shez a pretty young lady in her 20s living alone vd popat😛..khair


Abhi-abe teri bday me kya national holiday kr dein
P-smart boy
(koi shaq😉
btw star dialog👏 ⭐️
boy???😲😲😉)


GUY, I really enjoyed Ur Humor and Its really Refreshes My Bheja...😳😳😳
Thank you so much for this HARI GHASS for my Pait...😛😉🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neeme

Nice Story...HAPPY To To 😆


Thank You so much Boss...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: misha.as

Happy To To GD😊


Vivek and misha😉😉😊




Again a very Nice story GD...
and I like these lines so much...

ABHIJEET: tou LINDA say baat kr kay
Tum ko Khushi hui na.?😊

Parrot (weep): haan pr wo LINDA Nahi thi'

ABHIJEET: Tum ye batao Tum ko
Khushi zyada hui ya Nahi'😊

Parrot : pr DAYA ko Jhoot Nahi bolna
tha na' (coming out from ABHIJEET
back with) Achy Dost tou kabhi Jhoot Nhai boltay'

ABHIJEET: haan Bilkul' pr Baat agar
Dost ki Khushi ki ho tou kabhi kabhi
Thora Jhoot chal bhi jata hay'

Parrot (coming out from ABHIJEET
back and in sad tone): pr Jhoot bolna tou Gandi Baat hoti hay'

ABHIJEET: haan, pr jis Jhoot say Khushi milay Usy ACHA JHOOT kehtay hain'

Parrot (looking DAYA silently and ask): tou DAYA nay ACHA JHOOT bola'😊
and some others lines


Awww...😳😳😳
Thank You for MISHA and VIVEK Visit in GD parrot Birthday...🤗😳😳
Thank you MISHA that You like My Story...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

HAPPY BIRTHDAY(TO TO) GD
FABULOUS STORY, LOVED IT😉



Thank You POO...😉🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: awesum_life

simply Awesum...🤗
Happy to to GD parrot 😊
love u GD parrot.. 😳


Ufff...😳😳😳
Lug raha hay Parrot ko jaldi apna SWAMYAR karwana pa jayey ga...😉😆😆
Thank you Baccha...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Awesome Story GD...!!!

Too good!! 👏👏👏
Parrot: VIVEK Sir, kal Mera Happy To To hay'.
Parrot: arry Wohi jis meinTopi pehan kr Cake kaattay hain' Phoo Phoo kartay hain'
So sweet!!!!
Parrot: haan haan Mujhy pata hay LINDA Mujhy zarur Hello karay gi
Hope...huh(sigh)...!!

DAYA: haan haan' pr Boss' kya ye Saheh hoga'?

ABHIJEET (press his palm): Saheh nahi bhi hoga tou bhi DAYA Saheh karna hay'

👏

DAYA: GD ye Dr. TAREEKA hain.?

Parrot: TAREEKA Jee

'😆

ABHIJEET: aby Teray Birthday mein kya National Holiday kr dein'

Parrot: Smart boy'

👏👏👏 Loved it...!!!
hitting his Beak and wings on DAYA in Continous Speed' DAYA Quietly Beat by Him in Slow movement towards Backward direction'
👏👏 Very nicely expressed...!!!
ABHIJEET: haan, pr jis Jhoot say Khushi milay Usy ACHA JHOOT kehtay hain'
👏👏 That's so nicely told !!

Parrot: lao' katti wapis' (again) pr LINDA ka Gift tou Acha hay na.?

DAYA wanted to Clear that Thing too but ABHIJEET sat in Jerk and pressed DAYA's Plam which was on Bed

👏👏

DAYA: Tumhein Hamesha Meri wajah say buht Pareshani hoti hay ABHI'

ABHIJEET (hugs him n say): aur Ye Pareshani Mujhy sub say zyada Pyari hay DAYA'

👏👏 Long live Their FRIENDSHIP...!!!
Very nice GD!! Loved the entire work very much...😊 GD Parrot is so CUTE n INNOCENT!!! I loved the way he expressed his anger on DAYA...and his "katti" was so cute!!! the part I loved the most was ABHI's explanation about ACHHA JHOOT!!!
Great work...!!
HAPPY TO TO GD...!!😃


🤗🤗🤗🤗
Long Live Our Friendship too...😳😳😳
Thank you My Ghumshuda pr abhi Mil gayii Behan...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Soni.

This was such a cute story GD. Totally superb. Happy 'To To' to you and the parrot once again. Loved GD parrot's explanation about 'To To' to everyone, it was too sweet. I felt sad to when Linda didn't call the parrot lekin Daya ka idea kaam kargaye but utse galti hogye humari pyari GD parrot to bahut smart nikli. The kutti thing with Daya was too innocent and i also loved the way Abhijeet explained about Acha jhoot to GD. My favourite line from the whole story ABHIJEET: haan, pr jis Jhoot say Khushi milay Usy ACHA JHOOT kehtay hain' once again a wonderful story GD. Keep writing more.


Thank You very much SONI...🤗
in My Next Update I m trying to Explain abt LINDA character...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snehal.

Kya GD.. Hug milne keliye itna drama? 😉 😆 But i must say you gotta a hell ability to write cool stories!! and you r lucky as though in stories you got hug from them..


huh... Jealous...😉😉😉
yes I know I m so much Lucky...😳😳😳
Thank you so much ACP Maam...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IF_FRIENDS

sorty for late 🤢 as i want to give fb via pc
ist happy belated to to To GD (parrot)
hope gd enjoyed a lot his phoo phoo wid duo n cid team 😉
chooo chwt...kash mujhe ye toota mil jata
gd patrot ki har swt baat pr bdhi bdhi smilee aa jati hai
kuuch lines...
tumare pass paise to hai na??
une gift lane ko khu...
heehehehem...sso so cute

acp..agar gift na lau to
p..apko khana topi cap nhi milega..
so inocent gd...lovely

linda choti bachi haii 😛

n last ache vala jhut...luvd it

again happy to to dada
khush rho


Thank You so much DEEP for this Lovely Feedback...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mano86


GD
🥳
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😃a LOVELY Acha Jhoot😃


👏





Originally posted by: mano86

@GD n Nemme

1st of all

for being sooo late
😳

phewww... thanks GOD.. dint have to go through the nail biting suspense
😛😉😆

now coming to the feed back !
😊

D
ream Catcher
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.
Part - I

loved the way Abhjeet Sir said "baad mein baat kareinge" even after Daya Sir tried a lot to distract him.. Daya Sir's reaction must'v been like..

😛😉😆

⭐️

Part - II

Daya: "aynda apne lafzo pr control rakhna warna mein khud pr nahi rakh paunga"

⭐️

Part - III
Daya Sir's aar ya paar strategy was really

n
tere bina zindagi se koi.. shikwa.. toh nahi.. shikwa nahi..

⭐️

lovely wrap up..
could see all of it happening actually !
⭐️
overall a

by both of u
👏




Originally posted by: mano86


Go Away !
😆
🤣 truly hilarious 🤣

😆
Abhijeet: "tum Daya k gal se apna sar q ragarty ho?"
Parrot: "wo mere sar mein khujli hoti he na !"


😊
GD takes FULL advantage of being a PARROT
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.
by hugging (wrapping DUO by his wings) every now n then
😛😉😆


👏


meray pass na Lafz hain na Images aur na Main kuch likh kr MANO BILLI kay In Haseen Ihsaas ko apnay Dil aur Zehn say Dhundla karna chahun ga...🤗
siwayey SHUKRIYA aur DUAon kay Meray pass kuch Khas nahi hay...🤗

adhori baat kehni thi
usy aawaz deni thi
magr wo ja chuka tha jub
mujhy tab yaad aaya sub;
guzarty mausamun ki daastaa'n
us ko sunani thi
badalty waaqiyun ki kaarwaa'n
us ko bati thi;
abhi tou ye batana tha
k beety rat jagy kesy;
abhi tou ye sunana tha
k jub wo raah thi waadi
mera kesa nazara tha;
k jub wo aas thi baqi
mujhy kitna sahara tha;
k jub wo sans thi jaari
mera kesa guzara tha;
k jub wo yaad thi aati
hr ek lamha humara tha;
magr wo ja chuka tha jub
mujhy tab yaad aaya sub...

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