Story: Target - Senior Inspector Abhijeet - Page 2

Originally posted by: debasree04

xactly too much scary title 😆
I have no time now...will read all the pending stories next week 😛

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

di nice story...i never knew you are a writer too👏 keep it up...i liked the smooth transitions,charechter flow and the focus shifts!!

you know what whenever you are free can you write another FF with CID and HC??😳...sorry am very greedy person😆...just joking..i loved your writing style di

Wow Shreya Di Awesome story 🤗

Originally posted by: fairy1

Wow Shreya Di Awesome story 🤗

I am in short of words to express how beautifully it has been written and edited !!!!👏👍🏼

Good job 😎

Waiting for more such great stories from you😳

I started reading this after a tiring day. The second scene has raised my tension level...these days I don't get tensed if i see something like this in a promo but if any IF member writes it like this I start getting worried because I know it'll be better than what they show on TV. 😆

Originally posted by: visrom

I started reading this after a tiring day. The second scene has raised my tension level...these days I don't get tensed if i see something like this in a promo but if any IF member writes it like this I start getting worried because I know it'll be better than what they show on TV. 😆

How come IF's NK has turned into a full-fledged Santosh Shetty now? 😃

Originally posted by: visrom

How come IF's NK has turned into a full-fledged Santosh Shetty now? 😃

Ok, just one clarification needed...the guy said that there's limited oxygen in the room, but it's not necessary that the oxygen has to come from somewhere...it could just mean that only the oxygen that was already present in the room is available. Once Abhijeet breathes it all, he'll not get any more...why pump in oxygen through a pipe from outside?

Hey...this is very sweet 😊 'FW this is the real CID. The real CID has ACP, Daya, Abhijeet, Freddy, Vivek, and Dr. Salunkhe. The real CID is a family where if one officer is hurt or kidnapped, no one else sleeps until that officer is better or found. The real CID does not sideline old officers for new ones. The real CID does not destroy relationships that are bigger than brotherhood and family. That is CID and that is the CID we all miss.'Nice tribute to Vivek...😊. Loved how Abhijeet escaped on his own...but this was not what was given in the contest rules...you didn't post it in the contest so it's ok. No tears...no superman stuff, no loud dosti proclamations...lovely. 😊 It has a feel-good factor in the end which has been missing for so long.