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Posted: 13 years ago
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I,l go mad of curiosity .. I'm going to sit and read this on mob. Tomorrow the 1st thing in the morning !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

I,l go mad of curiosity .. I'm going to sit and read this on mob. Tomorrow the 1st thing in the morning !!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavanab

I,l go mad of curiosity .. I'm going to sit and read this on mob. Tomorrow the 1st thing in the morning !!!

Bhav, did you finish the story? I want to see some smileys from you as well. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No I'm starting now :P .. poora vreakffast and all karke baithi hoon to read this .. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
I read the story and I am 😳

Isiye you were asking me about Abhijeet's habits and all !!! Ab samajh aaya ..

You know every action to which Maya was smsing and appreciating .. I would imagine them and go 😍 ❤️ 😳
Be it the strand of hhair on Daya forehead or Abhijeetbiting his lip ..
Your story is one which all female CIDians must read 😉 ..

And waah Daya singinng pyaar ki pungi ?? 😆

Nevertheless .. it was a short and sweet story .. not too much of investigation and details but was crisp and smooth .. the flow was nice and I liked the way duo tackled Maya ..
And surprisingly didn't miss the rest of the team .. it would be fun to see an epi dedicted to duo like this 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

I read the story and I am 😳

Isiye you were asking me about Abhijeet's habits and all !!! Ab samajh aaya ..

You know every action to which Maya was smsing and appreciating .. I would imagine them and go 😍 ❤️ 😳
Be it the strand of hhair on Daya forehead or Abhijeetbiting his lip ..
Your story is one which all female CIDians must read 😉 ..

And waah Daya singinng pyaar ki pungi ?? 😆

Nevertheless .. it was a short and sweet story .. not too much of investigation and details but was crisp and smooth .. the flow was nice and I liked the way duo tackled Maya ..
And surprisingly didn't miss the rest of the team .. it would be fun to see an epi dedicted to duo like this 😳


😛 😳 😃
Actually I had always wished to watch a Duo centric epi with not much melodrama and not much crowd.
So thought of writing it. Had to add the investigation as it was a cid case 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Wow! It waz very interesting n simple..no unwanted elements..in fact i found it very cute :)
1 req- nxt time i want daya 2 sing character dheela plzz..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: guglu-baby

1 req- nxt time i want daya 2 sing character dheela plzz..🤣


Oh God 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
oh oh that reminds .. something i forgot to say earlier ..

Story anywhere inspired from the movie bodyguard ?? 😆 ... I could find that element too 🤣 ... mainly when that gal suggests Daya to wear a yellow shirt instead !!

You a Hostel gal (as the caller claims in the movie) .. and calling up Daya sir 🤣 .. I wonder why I started connecting in this way !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavanab

oh oh that reminds .. something i forgot to say earlier ..

Story anywhere inspired from the movie bodyguard ?? 😆 ... I could find that element too 🤣 ... mainly when that gal suggests Daya to wear a yellow shirt instead !!

You a Hostel gal (as the caller claims in the movie) .. and calling up Daya sir 🤣 .. I wonder why I started connecting in this way !!



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No no. Not at all.
I noticed this similarity just now when you said about it.

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