Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 77

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww... such a sweet story it was!! everything was there...tears, pain, emotions, hurt.. i don't think i would have ever cried this much reading any story... aahhh.. it was just tooo good !!! LAST n HAPPY ending was really like a cherry on cake !!! 👏👏👏🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
dada mein abhi FB de rhi hoon
gift ke baare meiin baad mein sochenge

ok jokes apart
u both done a fab job
really lyk always was a great one
but bhut suspense thi
words kam padenge agar mein FB dene lgi to

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Edited by gwentlend - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...like madhuri says in jalak, this is perfect. The way you portrayed abhijeet and daya's friendship is just great
I am looking forward in reading more stories about abhijeet and daya friendship so plz start writing more
Keep rocking...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This in one of ur best creations. hats off to both of u.👏👏👏 I completed the story with some tears in my eyes, and a smile on my lips. magicians, dhoop aur baarish eksaath le aaya tum dono ne!😊🤗
GD, u said that all credit goes to neeme, and rotten eggs to u!😆 ab eggs ka sawal hi nehi uthta, so,
this is for Neeme:-


this is for u:-

this is for both of u, share karke khana!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreela

this is for both of u, share karke khana!😆


ye Sharing kya cheez hoti hay Boss...😉😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Finally Story Complete 😃 First of All a Big Big Thank You to GD 🤗 She accepted my Plot and then start working on itt..Thanks Alot... She bears me too much 😆😆 many Times I encouged her..Guide her thats True as she says but DHAMKI omg.. Wo b dien kab GD??😆😆 yah but danta b😳😳😆 may be she is saying DHAMKI to that attitude...
She did a fabouls work... Many times i asked her this is not Good..Yun nae yun karo..etc.etc Bht changes karien after Every Part.. aur kabi jana b dyea 😳😳 Many time she says U r not satisfied.. But I really want to move onn.. Bcz Already GD na Bht bardast kyea muja 😳😳😆
PLOT Was quite different... Our Most Forum members want and like investigation style Story only.. No emotions.. But I like GD emotion Style.. and More than this PLOT needed it very much.. I always Says that Team bond with each other..Emotional Sharment is missing in CID..and i want to see that in CID.. I asked GD to use same Style.Characters in this Story as well which she is Normally using in her stories...
Thanks to all those Wo read this and commented us..Thats Really mean alot for me..🤗🤗 Plot was just mine.but GD words makes the story..so Big Credit goes to her only.. wasa We both are same in this matter.. wo kaha ge main and main kahon ge Wo..🤣 But I want to Thank This Story..yah its mine..but i really want to say THANKS to story..bcz of this i got a Sweet Frend named GD.. we really comes closer..and Now very frank with each other 😃 and spending nice and memoriable time at fc and on IF with each other..that alll bcz of itt...
GD the 60 seconds...thats really touchy..i loved this sentence and words... Emotions are not easy to describe..And if someone can describe itt then Its really a big big deal.. if reading we are feeling that pain while reading then its really a Big Deal..and GD u did that as always 👏👏👏
and abt reading..I don't knw who read itt and who not.. i was jst expecting that GD readers will read itt and thats Enough for me..i don't have frends belongs to this forum..except one or two..i never asked to anyone to read itt... and thats not my prospective too..i jst want a story on ths..so i shared ths idea with GD..and then we both started work on itt..U all liked itt..thats ALL...
THANKS ONCE AGAIN TO GD AND ALL READERS...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neeme

So Finally Story Complete 😃 First of All a Big Big Thank You to GD 🤗 She accepted my Plot and then start working on itt..Thanks Alot... She bears me too much 😆😆 many Times I encouged her..Guide her thats True as she says but DHAMKI omg.. Wo b dien kab GD??😆😆 yah but danta b😳😳😆 may be she is saying DHAMKI to that attitude...

She did a fabouls work... Many times i asked her this is not Good..Yun nae yun karo..etc.etc Bht changes karien after Every Part.. aur kabi jana b dyea 😳😳 Many time she says U r not satisfied.. But I really want to move onn.. Bcz Already GD na Bht bardast kyea muja 😳😳😆
PLOT Was quite different... Our Most Forum members want and like investigation style Story only.. No emotions.. But I like GD emotion Style.. and More than this PLOT needed it very much.. I always Says that Team bond with each other..Emotional Sharment is missing in CID..and i want to see that in CID.. I asked GD to use same Style.Characters in this Story as well which she is Normally using in her stories...
Thanks to all those Wo read this and commented us..Thats Really mean alot for me..🤗🤗 Plot was just mine.but GD words makes the story..so Big Credit goes to her only.. wasa We both are same in this matter.. wo kaha ge main and main kahon ge Wo..🤣 But I want to Thank This Story..yah its mine..but i really want to say THANKS to story..bcz of this i got a Sweet Frend named GD.. we really comes closer..and Now very frank with each other 😃 and spending nice and memoriable time at fc and on IF with each other..that alll bcz of itt...
GD the 60 seconds...thats really touchy..i loved this sentence and words... Emotions are not easy to describe..And if someone can describe itt then Its really a big big deal.. if reading we are feeling that pain while reading then its really a Big Deal..and GD u did that as always 👏👏👏
and abt reading..I don't knw who read itt and who not.. i was jst expecting that GD readers will read itt and thats Enough for me..i don't have frends belongs to this forum..except one or two..i never asked to anyone to read itt... and thats not my prospective too..i jst want a story on ths..so i shared ths idea with GD..and then we both started work on itt..U all liked itt..thats ALL...
THANKS ONCE AGAIN TO GD AND ALL READERS...😃


WOW😉... SHUKRIYANAMA...🤣
yes U are Intelligent as I wrapped UR DANTS in DHAMKI word...😉😆
haan yaar pata nahi😕... kub say Is lafzun kay kheel say dosti ho gayii...😭😳
Yes the Best part which came out from this Combine production is this FRIENDSHIP/COMPANIANSHIP...🤗🤗🤗
Thank You for this...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Shreela for this Cake🤗...I love choclate cake ..My fav.
GD this is Celebration Cake ..Hun.. Tu katen ga tu aik dosra ko kilyen ga he Boss.. Kye boss..tora he shara karna ha..Dikawa ka 😆 baki tum he kah lana 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
realy very good story yaar
i think this was the gretest story i ever read

👏


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Posted: 12 years ago
GD and Neeme i have said this so many times and will repeat it again - you both are wonderful writers. i read this story all over again and i got tears in my eyes, such a awesome story line. the emotional bits the investigation bits, the dialogues everything was perfect. they way abhijeet was explaining everything back to the team. Nobody recognized daya except my abhijeet that's the sign of true friendship, the way daya was with misha awesome scene. i am speechless i don't know what else to say, what i said above is not enough for what an amazing story you have written. i just love this piece of story.



Edited by Crystalx - 12 years ago

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