Between the lines-My Story (Chapter five)

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Rose

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Oo Come on guys please comment... SEE THE FIRST PAGE... Its really interesting...

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Rose

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

SEE FIRST PAGE ALL 5 PARTS ARE THERE... Do comments ..

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Hasini

@Hasini_smile

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

@max3.. u r doing a gr8 job.. the story so far is good...

ull get comments frm everyone once u complete the story...

many ppl here will read the story only after the complete story is posted...

complete it soon if possible...

keep up the good work...

do participate in our story contest...

all d best...

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

@max3, First of all..i really like ur writing style..while reading i imagin all these in my mind...Great...But One thing ur chapters are so short..Plz write more in one chapter...Dont make ur story like series...Its going too long..Now Complete Ur Story

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Parul

@..Candy..

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

@Max03,
Ur Story is really AWESOME!!
Nice Narration,i can imagine everything in front of my eyes!
Just Gr8!
But plz plz plz post the remaining story ASAP!
it making me anxious!
Plz complete it fast!

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Your story is really one of the awesome stories on this forum.. Do continue soon..

I know you might be waiting for comments from all the members here.. but as you know in CID every episode comes wid anew story and hence people here are not used to read the things in parts.. Complete the story soon.. It has a really great suspense element.. 👍🏼

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cid_duo

@cid_duo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

lovely story..

do complete it ASAP...

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

@ max :
nice story👏👏, plz update soon..1st wen i was reading Bhola's scenes, i felt he was Abhijeet in disguise & now u r making us feel dat SI Ajay is Abhijeet in disguise 😕!! so plz update soon to clear our confusions !!😃

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halfbloodprince

@WindsOfHeaven

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

You are a very good writer and your narration is really impressive. I too suggest you to complete your story and post a bit long parts. Great job! [:P:]