A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105)

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Roopal Gupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

wow di...the yaade one was very heart-touching...main to senti ho gayi😳

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Thanks for all of ur comments! Thank u for appreciating my poems! Will try to post more!

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

@ padma:
fantastic job yar, just a suggestion, dont use d light blue color as u did in d 1st post, it gets difficult to read den .

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Ya polly dear i wil keep in mind.

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cid_duo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

@yaddein..
full of emotions..yup remind me empty days...
@barush..
hilarious poem...try to right long poem..

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Roopal Gupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

hello di...eagerly waiting for next of urs...plz make it soon...

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Frndz just a mixed poem of wat i hv in mind.
Cid
suno gaur se jurm karne walon,
buri nazar na mere desh pe dalo!
Chahe kitna bhi dimag chalao,
tumko pakdke rahenge hum CID wale.
Jurm karne walon
jurm karke chaho, asman mein chip jao.
Zamin mein ya badal nigal jao.
Dundke nikalenge hum.

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

That's good. Waiting for more.

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

For daya sir!!!
{Do chor ghar mein chori karne gausse hai}
jaldi se sara saman utalo
sone, chandi, hera utalo, phir sare saboot mitalo
chupke chupke se sab utalo.
'Jarasi awaz na aye' cID TEAM peeche hai.. Ye shabdh dhyaan me rakhlo.
Gudam gadam, gudum gadam
Arre arrre ohh ahh!(awaz kyun kiya?) daya aa jayega!! Bhago daudo!! Darwaza tod ayega! Shhhu daya aa jayega phir bahut dhulayega!!!
mar mar ke hadiyan bhi todega!!!
Shhu uuu!! Daya aa jayega!!!

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

For freddie sir
lekhak baita hai khidki ke pas,
yah sochta hua ki kya likhu mein aj...
Uthate hue kalam sochta hai kaash...
Syahi(ink) hoti to kuch likh deta aj.

Lekhak baita hai ek aisi kahani likne,
ek aisi kahani jise sunke sab lage tarif karne!!
Wo soch raha hai daya, abhi, sachin, vivek, kajal,
inme se kise fasaoo apne jaal mein aj...
Dukh hai use na lagne par dhyan kisi topic mein..!

Kuch dukh nahi ki aj yaad na ata koi naam!
Lagaonga sochne me pura dhyan!
Karke rahunga ek bada kaam
yahi vishwas man mein rakhunga tham!!!!!