General Discussions #11 - Page 33

uff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! too many caps ... taking too many time... grrr... my net is so slow!😡

Koi comment toh karo na. Waiting.

Shruti good job...keep writing 👍🏼

Originally posted by: DemonStar

Sorry to hear about the conjunctivitis, visrom. Relax and try to avoid excess strain (and especially any contaminating particles around) and follow the doc's treatment; I'm sure you'll be fine very soon. All the best! 😊

wow... Shruti... u r excellent in poems! 👏

@shruti...
bhut emotional likha hai..
i want to suggest u one title YAADEIN...
who is 'HER'...
so many ppl came ng go away 4m our life...but always left behind their footprints impression on ourr heart soul..
does not matter we see them or not but their memories always remain with us...
kuch log hai jine main bhut MISS krti hu...but kya kre...its life...
who never stops...bus YAADEIN hai jo hamare pass hai OUR FOREVER PROPERITY..
bus or nhi likh sakti nhi to meri HEART BEAT ruk jayegi😊

i took few steps n had a high pinch
i pulled my foot up n saw a small wrench;

i had sum tears and felt a harsh pain
how much amount of emmotion moved to my brain;

i saw few blood drops comes out from the hole
my fingertip hold them suddenly a tear fall;

i want to move back but nobody knew
could that wound erased with the time jus go...

Shruti ... I don't know what to say ... it's a really touching poem ... You know life does give us many issues ... people enter our licves .. people leave ... it's at times very tough to bid goodbye to some very dear ones ... at the end of it what life gives us is experience ... meeting new people .. losing some ... making new friends .. bidding goodbye to some ,... all these are just a part of a long experience called 'LIFE' !!! Very sweet and touching poem re !!!