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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

This is ur first attempt....it's very good....nice start....I like some parts very much - forensie scenes & bank details...keep it up ....waiting for the next part
I want to say something...plz dnt mind....It is difficult to write hindi in english version...I also face this problem in the story which I write for the contest....but if u pronounce the hindi properly then it converts to english it may be helpful for u....actually I do it in this way....I just tell u becoz some of words in ur story are not understand easily for example , "musse" (MUJHE), "samas" (SAMAJH)...It's suggestion....

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

is it truely your first try?😳

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Soonaali

@Soonaali

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: debasree04
This is ur first attempt....it's very good....nice start....I like some parts very much - forensie scenes & bank details...keep it up ....waiting for the next part
I want to say something...plz dnt mind....It is difficult to write hindi in english version...I also face this problem in the story which I write for the contest....but if u pronounce the hindi properly then it converts to english it may be helpful for u....actually I do it in this way....I just tell u becoz some of words in ur story are not understand easily for example , "musse" (MUJHE), "samas" (SAMAJH)...It's suggestion....

First thanks for the reading my story....
Ya u r right i made some mistakes in spellings sorry for that but after reading ur suggestion i ll surely try to impove my self

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Soonaali

@Soonaali

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: shreela
is it truely your first try?

Ya dear its really my first try,.:) y u r confused on that....

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: loveDAYA

Ya dear its really my first try,.:) y u r confused on that....

😆 just kidding yaar! but truely, very good work! nice to see another writer in our forum. keep it up!👍🏼

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

You Are a Newbie.....And its Ur First Attempt.....Then A/C to that Its Nice Attempt.................

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anonymous7

@anonymous7

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

a short but really nice story! case & investigation simple, but properly executed. Properly Represented. 👏👏👏

The Forensic & Bank A/C details were the best part! U have presented them superbly.

Hoping to see ur next story soon.........😊

Next story connected with this! Wow......... 😊