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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#881

sure... tu saari zindagi lay lay... LAZY😛

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: Padmpriya
Hi dada my name is padma! N u r superb. I liked how u hv interest in diff books n al stuff.

thanx PADMA... rakhna parta hay buddy... READERS are well aware now... tou thora HOME WORK karna parta hay...

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cid_duo

@cid_duo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#883

dada i have to go after 10 min..
vha v dimag main story ghumti rhegi😉
better i read when i back😛

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#884

haan haan... aur DIMAG mein kuch aur bhi ghuma liya ker
meri STORIES chor ker😉

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gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#885

chalo take care
have a nice day
bye

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cid_duo

@cid_duo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#886

abey logo ki VOTE bnane jana hai..
agar koi mistake ho gyi to..

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neeme

@neeme

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Posted: 14 years ago

#887

This time what i say about ur Story..i dont knw...If i say somthng about ur last part only then It was good..enjoyable...Many things was clear...

But, The whole story was very much like ur previous series...

The Culprit thinking was different..But the whole scenrio was very much similar...That I Feel...

U need to think totally differnt story..Also the Investigation Style...

in ur both series, The CID Team was not in Action...in the whole story the team was trying to save themselves...Nothng Else!

Otherwise, ur writing style was good...i really like ur Effort.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#888

XCILLENT FEEDBACK DII...
i knew MOSTLY ppl feel that...
and sum point me also...
hope to GIVE sum DIFFERENT in FUTURE (may be)
thanx alot...

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421445

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Posted: 14 years ago

#889

Dada mere uppar gun koi nahi tan sakata... I think u knw why? Hahaha

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#890

Finally i read the whole story...ur last part is good...but this story is much similar to ur Game Over...actually i expect something different when i read the first part of ur story...anyway apart from this it is good...
But u must think a different plot...& I know u can do it soon...