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Originally posted by: dayakhtar

hey dada...

me totally speechless😲... abt this tremendous attempt⭐️...

letme think... what 2 say...😕

let me gather some words... 2 praise this masterpiece...

as an individual effort "CLOSED CHAPTER: THE EXTINCTION BATTLE" is a REMARKABLE ATTEMPT of a GENIOUS WRITER😊

u deserve a lods of...

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and what sfud i say abt d series "CLOSED CHAPTER"...

d suspense elment (CULPRIT's name n motive)... has been mentained, XILENTLY... till d end...

ON D WHOLE... its juz...

GUD LUK😊

yaar pata nahi... magar tum log buhat zyada hee tareef ker rahay ho...
bus theek hay... NOT LIKE GAME OVER...
i'll try to ended up quite well...
n i think i did it...
thanx alot buddy...

Originally posted by: Shruti_HR

Wow! this is just amazing Dada, read it even before checking my PM. Great. Hats off.

bacchy its NOT WOW... jus THEEK THAAK...

Originally posted by: capradnya1986

DADA u done a fantastic job as I get lots of pinches... In betwean I am 😭

and in some sceans 🤢

But this is what a true writer wants... U did a fantastic JOB DADA...

For ur this serious

⭐️ (7 stars )

And for Ur efforts

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for U

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pata nahi... bus THEEK hay...
NOT XTRA GOOD...
itnay HUGS...
arry meray RIBS bhi kahein BHAI ki tarah na toot jyein...
n i dunt hv any ABHI Sir jesa frnd tou nahi hay...😛
jo kum az kum meray liyey CULPRIT pr GUN nikaal lay...😉

Originally posted by: Padmpriya

Wow dada it was just a wonder. Realy lvd it n n every heart beat was heard. Just superb!

thanx PADY... really good to hear UR feedback...😊

Originally posted by: gadhadada

yaar pata nahi... magar tum log buhat zyada hee tareef ker rahay ho...
bus theek hay... NOT LIKE GAME OVER...
i'll try to ended up quite well...
n i think i did it...
thanx alot buddy...

Hi dada my name is padma! N u r superb. I liked how u hv interest in diff books n al stuff.

ufff...
APUN tou GAYA🤢

Originally posted by: gadhadada

ufff...
APUN tou GAYA🤢

my FANS...
wohi tou mujhay carha rahay hain... DARAKHT per...
ohhh buddy itni QASR-e-NAFSII say kaam na lo...
meri Q LIST barh jayeygi...

gud afternoon dada
how r u??
yet did not read story..
i need sum mor time..