mY dEfleCtiVE ShaDe GamE oVEr (level THREE)!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
WOW!! wat a thriller yaar..
very nice as your previous ones..
I felt vivek part was very scary (bcoz iam very much scared of snakes)
I liked DAYA's attitude this time especially when he says "khoon bahut thunda tha, aaindha aur khayal rakhna", tht was superb!!
Your writing style is very good.. i can see the scenes infront of my eyes while reading..
great going.. all the best for your next part..👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
AWESOME!! it is a real thriller this time!👏👏👏👏 dunno, after reading the first part of your story, I dreamt about it at night. and this one, oh, what to say, it's the best part ever.⭐️⭐️ I really felt pain on my wrist and throat while reading duo's experience. 😭 superb work done this time.⭐️ keep it up.👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmmmm.... this time i m really STUNNED and SPEECHLESS..... in a core of my heart.... there was a FEAR that may be i was NOT up to the MARK... this time..... i felt... i dragged the level and exaggerated it..... and may be MY READERS did not digest it..... that why at the FIRST para... i APPOLOGIZE to all in ADVANCE..... BUT...... GALS/GUYS..... wat a FANTABULOUS feedback and response from U all.....
i have NO words to say my HEARTIEST and HUMBLE THANK YOU to ALL of U.....
and the best part.... that every reader gave its own perception about the level... the gripped and lose point both.... thats really helped me alot...
i m really thankful.... really really....

NEEME DII..... NOTEPAD (ur double ovation).... CHICK..... RASHIDA champ.... MOONLIGHT5.... SHREELA.... POOJA.... AANDROMEDA DII and all.... who PERSONALLY and PROFESSIONALLY both pat on my shoulder..... and really appreciate my work.....

tons..... bundlez.... loads... bunches... buckets.... stacks.... cartons of
TTTTTTTTHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNKKKKKK
YYYYYYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU
VVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYY
MMMMMMMMUUUUUCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHH
to AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

hey where r U.............. SHIVANI n ASTONISH n MALLIKABALU too??????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
waiting for your next level..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

sure MOONLIGHT..... i m workin on it...... if U want to share any of UR idea.... feel free to PM me............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
hmm me too late😊

dear ur dis level outstanding, marvellous, awesome, superb, great 😍
u truly completed ur promise👏👏👏
dis level greatst compared 2 previous levels⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
hats off to uuu👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

while reading i really imagine all things happened in front of my eyes.........

ur SERIES r the best comparison 2 AC and AKAKR............

nd m also sure its would be best than CHASE SERIES....

u truly deserve for standing ovations 4m my side.....






best of luck 4 next level👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

arry yaar...... tum nay tou mujhay buhat saara OVATION day diya.......
zabardast!!!!!!!!
main kya kahun!!!!!!!
totally stunned ans speechless.....
ab tou lug raha hay.... VOCABS khatam ho gayey hain😉

haan..... abt comparasion..... nahi yaar chalo mera CULPRIT.... HD say better n sharp hay..... but yaar cmon.... wat a terrific eye n face expression of ABHI Sir at AKRKAR..... main tou mar ker bhi wo story mein daalun... impossible hay.....
and abt CHASE..... dunt say anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
I am badly waiting for the next level..... when are you going to upload it Gadhadada????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
I must say gadhadada u r a Genious!!!!
What was that..

I just read all three levels..
Cant have words to express.. Still shivering and having goosebumps

Offf...
But seriously great effort.. Hats off to u..👏
Waiting for next level 😃

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