STORY- AC Last part Paris version by Sunny - Page 2

Excellent story sunny. U almost explained all loose ends, except that how did they survive the blast. blast injuries are really severe, and if a bomb is that close to the body as was shown in the end of part8, they result in tearing of body viscera into pieces. u have modified part8 ending according to ur plot for part 9. it would have been better if u had explained abt this too. just a suggestion. other then that it was absolutely Well written with no unnecessary dragging parts. I loved how ACP sir kept on warning duo"tum se to main bad me pochon ga".. Phone call code was just superb. It feels good to see friedy sir dominating sachin, and ACP sir admitting the fact that only friedy can understand the msg he wanted to convey. Wish FW had given us something like this in finale. Well done sunny👏👏👏

Super work👏, sunny. You really write awesome detective stories. The idea of Daya arriving before Acp was too good. The hints were excellent and mode of investigation simply superb. It was nice to see Freddy using his brains and cracking the message. But tell me one thing, who is the Gaddar? The facts seem to point towardst Sachin.

@ visrom no problem. I am desperately waiting for your story and I want you should complete it first.😃 although my story won't effect yours but still if you consider it will then please don't read.

@ Shaggy I know and yes thanks for it.

@m_kal2011, @d_c_b_a, @ Andromeda @ DJ_ Aporva, @ chinnu, @ CAHAT320, @aparakshitij, @ suveenaster thanks for liking it.

@ dr.fahmi they showed timer quite badly in AC 8. OK yes timer too need modifications here. Time was few seconds more than that they showed. Because timer they showed it was almost impossible to save officers most importantly all officers.

@abhijeetdaya your questions answer is in story. Thanks for liking it

Nice story sunny,👍🏼👍🏼

sunny loved reading ur story
well written
sunny u have made the part complete where fire works missed
but some points u kept it suspense aur woh code sac main mujhe samj hi nahi aar raha hai pls if can pls clarify it once pls

ACP (on Phone):- Freddy sari team ko kaho ki whan se nikal jaye. Jo main keh raha hoon bas vohi karo jab tak agla phone na aye. Mujhe koi gadbad nahi chahiye. Mujhe tum us main ('Main' English word) jagah ke 30 KM ke dayare mein bhi nahi chahiye. Whan se seethe bureau pahuncho tum sab.

from starting--

Acp says Freddy that tell whole team to leave from there. and next line do whatever I am saying till next phone. He says " jab tak agla phone na aye" ACP doesn't says jab tak mera agla phone na aye. First of all why would ACP say them to back Freddy knew straight away someone(HD) is standing on ACP's head and till next phone doesn't come means some men of HD doesn't call HD don't take any action.

Then he give hint about his location in Paris. From Main pace he in 30 KM away. by this message "Mujhe tum us main ('Main' English word) jagah ke 30 KM ke dayare mein bhi nahi chahiye".

but in which direction 30 KM from Eiffel Tower? this ACP gave hint by

"Whan se seethe bureau pahuncho tum sab."

means place from where they(Freddy and team) are standing right now go to bureau. Bureau is in West direction from there

Whole line means-- 30 KM away from Eiffel tower in West direction.

still any confusion do ask.

looks interesting Sunny👍🏼, will read it soon as I find time 😊

👏wow sunny good story..werry well written..

It was a very good story. I liked the way you took the story to Paris and casinos and involved the France police in this.