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prettywomen22

@prettywomen22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter
Kudos to you Jiya, u have become an inspiration for the people. Waise @ angelfire_mr create your own poem thread and start creating poems more and mre you will enjoy yaar believe me and others too

thanks sneha,,, 😳 😳 😳 yes jiya just gave me that lead,

but if I create one thread of myself will anyone visit it at all 😕 😕 😕

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#932

Really nice..but need to work on rymings..Bt conncept is beautiful

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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prettywomen22

@prettywomen22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: jiya1

Really nice..but need to work on rymings..Bt conncept is beautiful

Sure, I will.... tnx again..... we are almost closing on Daya's 2nd fan club thread,,, was waiting for others and ended up writing these little poems...

Purni (Puri_2711) is opening the 3rd fan club shortly!!!! do drop by sometimes.. I will edit this post again and drop the link here

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: jiya1
hey kudos. to u👏 very nice...u have a potential to become poet...plz come with biger version..and start writing your own peoms...to muze lagega ki meine kuch kiya hein

hey jiya tumne to bahut kuch kar diya
maine 4 liner ek likha hai dekho na plz. n plz. tell whether its a good start or just.. avaiinnnnn sort of? but tell me truly ok 😊

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#935

Originally posted by: angelfire_mr

Sure, I will.... tnx again..... we are almost closing on Daya's 2nd fan club thread,,, was waiting for others and ended up writing these little poems...

Purni (Puri_2711) is opening the 3rd fan club shortly!!!! do drop by sometimes.. I will edit this post again and drop the link here

sunita eak kaam karo tum na 4 liner se start karo...aur sirf daya ke bare mein likhana..tum achha likha sakati hon

aise karake 5-6 stanza's likhana...u will get big poem...use simple words and lines....just try it...belive me u r gud..

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#936

Angel I suggest jus work on your poems fir post karna try on rhymes, you have the apt feelings. dekhna you will rock and will indeed have a overwhelming response

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#937

Originally posted by: monika21

hey jiya tumne to bahut kuch kar diya
maine 4 liner ek likha hai dekho na plz. n plz. tell whether its a good start or just.. avaiinnnnn sort of? but tell me truly ok 😊

pehele dikhao to shai...bad mein batati hun...sab true hi bataungi

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#938

Originally posted by: jiya1
pehele dikhao to shai...bad mein batati hun...sab true hi bataungi

aap sabhi ki kavitaon ne aisa jaadu kar diya
ki mujhe bhi kavita likhne ko majboor kar diya
jaldi hi linkhungi ek pyari kavita
agar waqt aur soch ne sath diya....

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prettywomen22

@prettywomen22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter
Angel I suggest jus work on your poems fir post karna try on rhymes, you have the apt feelings. dekhna you will rock and will indeed have a overwhelming response

sure Sneha,,, tnx dear for encouraging!!!!! I will try this out!!!!! I am feeling so happy!!!!!😆 😆 😆

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prettywomen22

@prettywomen22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#940

Originally posted by: jiya1
sunita eak kaam karo tum na 4 liner se start karo...aur sirf daya ke bare mein likhana..tum achha likha sakati hon
aise karake 5-6 stanza's likhana...u will get big poem...use simple words and lines....just try it...belive me u r gud..

thanks jiya,,,,,

likoongi tho sirf daya sir ke bhara mein hi.,,, uni ki yaad aati hai 😉 😉 😉

I am sure daya sir's wife will kill me one day 😆 😆 😆