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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#721

First of all hows your health.

what you want to convey idea was very great. Loved your poem, very well written Anyways take rest I know you are not well still wrote for us. Loved your this effort but take rest first.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#722

"lekin ye jodi hein thodisi ajeeb"

exactly....nice work di

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#723

Jiya di this is BAD! Y u stressing urself when u r unwell... first get well completely the get back to all this.

Btw, poem is superb!!!! Lovely duo actually...a little different from others..but one can feel their relationship only when one sees them at a strech! ....But sach mein a very cute pair...👏 very well written di..superb!👏👏

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#724

Di again late reply sorry !! waise di please don't stress yourself,take rest first and get well properly tab likhna aap waise creation wise lovely poem di 👏 👏 sach mein even they are a duo par thoda hatke !!!

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#725

muze pata hein last ki poem etani achhi nahi huvi thi lekin agali poem behetar karane ki koshih meine kiyi hein.

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#726

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#727

hey thanks for liking my creation but kuch to comments karo..sirf like karake chalye ja ra rahein hein...plz do comments yaar

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vibhavari

@vibhavari

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#728

Jiya di pehle bataye,

nayi cid team ki sachmuch taarif kar rahe hain ya taane maar rahe hain.

Agar taane maare hain toh👏👏👏

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koi lauta de cid ke beete huye din

beete huye din woh pyare palchin!!!!

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: vibhavari
Jiya di pehle bataye,
nayi cid team ki sachmuch taarif kar rahe hain ya taane maar rahe hain.

Agar taane maare hain toh👏👏👏

_____________________________________________________

koi lauta de cid ke beete huye din

beete huye din woh pyare palchin!!!!

Dear es forums pe kuch bhi negative nahi likh sakate....rules ke khilaf hein...aur nayi team to🤢 hain...aab samjh gayi muze kya kehena hein....samjdhar ko esahara kafi hein...

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago