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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: jiya1

<div></div>muze malum hein bhavana lekin kuch logo ko mere crations childish lagate hein...😉nways thanks for appriciation

Di jinko childish lagte hain I expect them to write one for us and tell us ki poems kaise likhte hai,waiting for ur creations hopefully aap aise nahi likhenge ki hume 7/10 dena pade

anyways di appreciate toh karna hi tha it was very good indeed

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: didobhav

Di jinko childish lagte hain I expect them to write one for us and tell us ki poems kaise likhte hai,waiting for ur creations hopefully aap aise nahi likhenge ki hume 7/10 dena pade

anyways di appreciate toh karna hi tha it was very good indeed

Bhavana vaise marks achhe hein bure nahi 7/10 means 70 % yaane above average hein..I have to improve only 30%...then I will become gr8 poet.😉

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raji_1000

@raji_1000

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#113

hey jiya tum kisis pe dhyam mat do..bolane waale to kuch bhi bolate hein..just aage bhi aisi hi creations banana😊

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

Jiya di its really nice!!!!! And plss dont think its childish!! Every line is just so appropriate!! Aur jisne 70 percent diye hain, i am glad for it!! I didnt exoect si much from our acp!!! 😆

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Shagnika
Jiya di its really nice!!!!! And plss dont think its childish!! Every line is just so appropriate!! Aur jisne 70 percent diye hain, i am glad for it!! I didnt exoect si much from our acp!!! 😆

ha yaar ACP ka kya bura manana😉 but thank ou sweety...eak baat hein ACP ne poem ko beautiful kaha hein...achha hein😉

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: shreela
it's really nice jiya!👏

Thank u very meuch sweety...😃

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Thank ou sneha for liking it😊thanks sweety pie😉

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#118

Jiya Koshish karna mukshil hota hain? comments karna bahut simple... Jo apne aap ko Judge samajte hain unse kaho pehle apne aap ko judgement dene k kabil toh banaye. Waise bhi If u really wanna appreciate4 some one or even enhance some1 u can nyways use PM u hav no right to insult ny1 like dis. Jiya atleast tried it here Can you even try???????????? Jiya I liked it dear keep making much more and care a damn about those who dont who dont even understand the P of Poetry