Story No. 5 Trapped by sunny

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414
I want to share with you but don't want to open new thread.

Ok guys Today I am toooooooooo Happy. I just got news that my elder sister gave birth to a baby girl. I am not present there she is far away from me. when will I reach. soon I will receive photographs.

OOOOOOOOOOHHHH CHOOO chweet Sunny MAMA!!!! Congrats and thanks for sharing it with us.

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hey nice twist and turns though some concepts were confusing but really liked the twists yaar you really know to twist the story keep it up dude really looking forward for the next story 👏

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shivpalp

@shivpalp

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Congrats. Nice story. Keep it up.

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

really gud!!👏 👏 loved d part in d end wen d real abhijeet appeared and d way he revealed his identity to d kidnappers was awesome!! 😳 reminded me of abhi-in-disguise!😛