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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: visrom

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I have posted up in this page....mine is no 4....tell me did you guess correctly?

hee hee i thought it was 4 but baad mein socha shayd nahin

anybody guessed mine ??

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Posted: 15 years ago

#152

Guessed the winning author too. 😃

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#153

Didobhav, i told u.. i had guessed urs !!! 😃

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: drilabh
my story was no. 10, and i wud say that even those uncomfortable wt hindihave written very well, better than me!

cngrats to puja, shagnika and sunny!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

everyone has written well!!

KUDOS TO ALL!

Drilabh....this is bad, ok....no one has EVER EVER commented on your Hindi being bad in this contest. Rest of you....I want to know this....was the Hindi ao bad in drilabh's story?????

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

thanx thanx visrom... 😳actually my hindi is too simple in my opinion.... i have loads to learn and improve.....and everyone's hindi has a flow that i still dont... am commenting on that, not hindi grammar (that part i somehow managed....)😳 its just that my difficulty arose wen i had to weave a plot around a gvn situation... i somehow got confused and my story has become really flat, unlike my story jaguar....

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

That's ok....at least you tried....that's what matters.

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

No way drilabhs Hindi was quite improved I can easily make out what you want to convey.

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: visrom
Rest of you....I want to know this....was the Hindi ao bad in drilabh's story?????

It wasn't bad, if a little attention is paid to the genders, it will make a world of a difference. Having said that I have read her first story, not fully but a couple of posts and if you compare that with this, there is a remarkable improvement. And when you are learning a language, simple is the way to go.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#159

Plot and the story development is what matters, I agree language matters but I think you can improve on that isnt it?

Edited by sneha_fighter - 15 years ago

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414
I learned a lot when you read on same plot so many stories. You always think oh it can be think this way also. Many scenes, dialogues set up were brilliant. and yes feddbacks for me provides to craete new suspense stories in future. Feedbacks told me how I killed suspense with my own hands. Oh God how I did this. I never imagined this way. Thanks to everyone

😲😲 Really?? I didnt feel so.. i mean, ur story was surely kept intact and had a nice twisted end also.. the logic why ACP actually trusted the lady and re-opend the case was very clear, thanx to the climax of the story! Suspense was there i felt! what do others feel??

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