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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Interesting story.👍🏼 the last part is really humorous👏

Edited by shreela - 15 years ago

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

@shreela, didobhav, drilabh, somu_05, tgodse, thanks to everyone for reading. But please specify area need to be improved. If don't want to criticise here PM me. I will appreciate.

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414
@shreela, didobhav, drilabh, somu_05, tgodse, thanks to everyone for reading. But please specify area need to be improved. If don't want to criticise here PM me. I will appreciate.

Hey sunny sorry for not replying!! i thought i will finish reading it and then i will let u know... i want to re-read again... i will surely gv u my feedback!! but ure writing is really gud as usual... no criticism frm my side👏

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

heya sunny jst re-read it!! it is really well written!! KEEP IT UP!!!👏⭐️ do continue writing!!

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

👏⭐️ loved both ur stories Sunny!! u r really good at writing stories...they are very closer to the real world..U keep less of Leap of faiths!!

From ur 2nd story, the follwing part is very good..i liked it a lot cos here again we see how good ABHI-DAYA are as detectives and the fact that their level of thinking is just soo similar!!

Freddy( to daya and abhijeet): Sir aap dono kyun chup khade ho.

Salunke: Ab aur koi wajah bacchi hi nahi. Tum logon ne in honhar officers ko mauka hi nahi diya. Kyun koi aur motive hai khun karne ka

Abhijeet and daya: Yes sir

i would just say keep up ur good work and continue writing such stories for us!!😃👏⭐️

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

STORY 3- Plan vs Plan shifted to page 1. It follows story 1 and 2.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Good job yet again!! U managed to keep up the suspense throughout!! And wvwryone reacted the way we would expect them to.Abhijeet rocked!! Actually everyone rocked..good to Abhi had given freddy an important role to play in the investigation part!! 😃
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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

👏 Very good....complicated plot....and yeah...I understand what you mean by writing in one go. 😊

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

nice one !!! you maintained the suspense till the end keep up the good work 👍🏼

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Thanks everyone. Its little complicated so gave description within stories at few intervals. Suspense sometimes becomes complicated. If someone still finds problem feel free to PM me or write in this thread about what part you could not understand

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