Radhikas journey to Dev

I am back with another of my poems.........this time it is regarding Radhikas journey to Dev. The stream stands for Radhika and the sea for Dev. Hope you all will like it.

Journey

The stream trickled down the hills,

Slowly, singing to herself,

In her search for the sea,

Like a hermit in search of deliverance,

To find peace and salvation.

Acquaintances she had many,

But friends few she knew,

To lend a hand,

To understand,

To break the shackles that bind.

Alone she travelled,

Not feeling any emotion,

Like a lake in the desert,

Everything was a mirage,

Fleeting in existence.

The sea called her,

Waiting to quench her thirst,

To ease her pain,

To sever the chains,

To unbind her forever.

Very beautiful..thank you for sharing!👏

Perfect and to the point

Very beautiful ... and perfect for Rads journey to Dev

That was very beautiful.. loved it.. Thanks a lot

it was very beautiful....thank you

Nice one.. Thanks for sharing..

Thanks everyone for liking it.

Did you actually write this poem? Its beautiful!

Misti, this was beautiful! You are indeed very talented. The sentiments expressed are very pure. To those of us who know your wit, this was quite a surprise. Thanks for sharing!