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Ultrachic

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi everyone.........i am writing a small ff contaning only 10 parts on RaDev........hope u all like it.

it begins like this................

it was evening time and dev was getting ready as he is gonna meet with a girl whom he used to chat in orkut daily.he was too excited to meet her as he has never seen her before as they both were orkut chat friends.dev has told her to meet with him on coffee house resturant at 6:30 p.m.her name was radhika and by talking only dev has understood about his nature as she was a too cool and funky girl and a short tempered too.so dev in his car goes straight to the resturant and sat to his respective table as he has booked a table for two.he was seeing that many girls were coming and going but he was not getting that funkey girl to whom he has came to meet.

suddenly,his eyes were just stuck to a girl and that was radhika as she was very beautiful in sporty black tight fitting jeans and cool red coloured top with a dark blue jacket and also wearing red sandels which were making her the most beautiful girl ever seen.she has weared red coloured round shaped earings and a black coloured braclet too.then she started finding dev and before she could call his name aloud to find him out dev shouted with her name.

dev-"radhika!!!!!".......

radhika in a confused expression she asked-"ya its me......r u dev?"

dev-"yes i am dev......nice to meet u..... come and sit radhika"

radhika-"how do u know that i am only radhika as we r metting first time?"

dev was just staring and staring her

radhika-"dev" i am talking to u.......r u listening?

dev stammering-"yes.... yes.....i....i have listened".

dev thinking to himself-hey man r u alright why r u staring her?u have met with many girls before then why r u looking her as u r liking her at first sight only!!"

radhika shooking his shoulder-"dev"wat happened? why r u not answering to my question? we r orkut friends from so many months and have chatted also so much then why r u not talking today as we r now face to face also??

dev to himself and shooking his head with disbeleif-"i think definately something has gone wrong with me today by seeing this girl!"

to be continued..............

i hope u all like it........please tell me if i continue or not.......give comments/compliments.......i shall be waiting......😊

Edited by happylite - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

other than spelling mistakes..it sounds good.....work on the mistake and it will be more interesting

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Innocent02

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Posted: 16 years ago

nice👍🏼
but as rushtrip said you need to work a lil bit on your mistake and then it'll be more interesting😊

Edited by Innocent02 - 16 years ago

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Ultrachic

@Ultrachic

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

actually i am in class 8th only so thats why a little bit mistakes.....hope u all understand......sorry for the inconvenience.

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Ultrachic

@Ultrachic

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

second part..............

radhika-'dev! now its too much..... i am leaving.....i don't know why have u called when u were not intrested only to talk to me!'

as she was leaving dev holds her hand tightly.

radhika tried to free her hand from his hold but he was not letting her go and was looking at her lovingely.

radhika-'dev stop it !everyone are looking at us'

dev then suddenly came back to his senses and saw that he is holding radhika's hand so he removes his hand as soon as possible and said to her-oh!i am sorry.....did i hurt u......please i am really very sorry please sit'

dev was in a very guilty state as he was not able to think that what he should say now.

radhika -'its ok.....it happens.....sometimes i also do like only thinking about something.....well it shows tree signs-first that u r mentally sick-well that u r not i am sure,second u have financial problems and third, u r in love.'

radhika in a teasing mood-'so mr. dev rajpurohit..i know it very well that u r not mentally sick nor u have any financial problem then their is only a last option left and that is u r in love with someone'

just then a waiter came and they ordered two black coffee without sugar as it was the most famous item on that resturant.

dev was making a very confused face and said-'no radhika i don't know that i am really in love or something but frakly telling that i like u'

radhika-'really! mujhe laga ki main is duniya ki sabse jyada bolne wali ladki ho toh koi mujhe pasand kaise kar sakta hai?'

dev-'asa nahi hai radhika...mujhe tum bohut pasand ho par mein janta nahi kyo main tumhe itna pasand kar raha hoon'

just then that waiter came and served them two black coffee.they drank it slowly as it was too hot

and then radhika said-'i thing i should leave now..... nau baj rahe hai bohut der ho chuki hai.pata nahi koi taxi milegi bhi ya nahi!'

dev-'koi baat nahi main tumhe chod deta hoon ise bahane tumahra ghar bhi dekh loonga'.

radhika-'nahi dev tumhe problem hogi main chali jaongi i will manage'.

dev-'mujhe koi problem nahi hai radhika....i will drop u....come on lets go its too late....u should reached at home by now agar hum yeh bahas na karte toh...now no more bahasvagi.lets move out'

radhika smiling at dev-ok ok....tum jite ab chale'

dev-'chalo'.

to be continued...........................

i hope this time their r less mistakes before the previous part.hope u all like it.....comments/compliments r needed.