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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dev is sleeping...But he doesnt seem to have a good sleep...he frowns his eyes, and head is moving from side to side, his frowns get deeper... suddenly he wakes up, looks blank at the ceiling and sit up nervously, he is breathing hard!!

Kaisa sapna tha!!! says nervously!! trying to catch his breath..

he tries to control his breaths...
He looks around...everything still dark...swtichs on the light and looks at the clock, its not early morning yet!!! it was around 4am...

the dream was still making him nervous inside!!!


He gets down from the bed...slowly walks to the Radh's room...he hesistantly stands outside and keeps thinking whether to knock on the door or not...He stood for sometime, going back and forth and finally thought to knock as anyway it was going to be the time for the 5am puja!!

He knocked the door!!!! he waited for Radh to open!, but she didnt open, He again knocked thinking Radh might be in sleep...still she didnt come!!, this time he was getting nervous, he frown his eyes...thinking why Radh is not opening the door, this time he knocked it harder, and found the door moved, it was opened already, he opened the door fully and called out Radhika's name...


Radhika!!!! but no response...
He went inside slowly but Radh was not there...he started getting more nervous!!!
wondering where she is!! he looked the whole room but she was not to found anywhere...His heart beats raised in fear, it started to get concerned why was she not here!!!
he stepped out of the room in hurried steps, thinking where she could have gone!! searches the house, first goes to the kitchen, and everywhere...but still he didnt find her!...

finally his feet stop at the Temple, Radh was standing in the temple...He stands there is trance looking at her for sometime...as if his life was infront of him, he had died those moments when he woke from his sleep, but he trailed the thoughts thinking it is not possible, how could it be!...and then he again got nervous when he didnt find her in the room, again doubted his dreams,were they true? No! it cant be!!!!...but when he saw Radh, it was like his life came back!!!
He felt very emotional seeing Radh standing before him after he had such a dreadful dream, he wanted to go and hug her and feel her presence that she was still close to him only!!!!

he stsrts walking with relief and joyfullness in his heart forgetting everything else beyond it!!!

suddenly he hears a voice saying..

App ithni jaldi utt gaye?!!!!
Dev's steps freeze there itself hearing Radh's voice!!!
Radh(Kahna) is having a mischievious smile!!!

Radh(Kahna) turns with smile!!! looking at him!!
Kahin Koi bura sapna tho nahi dekha Aapne!!!? asks him mischeiviously

Dev frowns thinking how she got to know this!
Dev walks forward to her, confused...

Tum...Tumhe...kaise...patha chala ki...!!!!

Radh(Kahna) smiles! looking at him
"waise bahut ghabaraye hue lag rahe hai"

He goes back to his thoughts, his fears...it wrenches him thinking of that dream!!
he looks at her, he wanted to share his dream, but he couldnt, he started stammering..

woh!!! mujhe... ... patha nahi yesa kyun ... !!! ... mujhe...
he felt hesistant, Radh's smile was stopping him to tell...He couldnt speak about it...
but slowly he takes her hand into his and says

" mujhse kabhi dur math jana Radhika!! mein ji nahi paoonga!!" feeling very emotional!

Radh(Kahna) says "Radhika tho har waqth appke paas hi hai!!!, Radhika aapko chode ke kahin nahi gayi hai"

"Kuch dooriya aisi hothi hai ki dur hoke bhi paas hothe hai, Aur kuch paas hoke bhi bahut dur hothe hai!!!!"

Dev stands there listening to her words trying to understand what she said!!!!, was she talking if he was distancing her from him??? ot it was something else!!!...He comes back to his reality! (but he still couldnt let it go of his demands)

He goes to Kahna's idol, stands in front of it...he closes his eyes, but his dream takes over! he gets so scared remembering the last part of his dream when their hands depart and Radh goes invisible calling his name "Dev" with fear and him searching for her, screaming her name!!...
He opens his eyes, sees the idol and with his whole heart( in his mind)

" Kahna meri Radhika ka khayal rakhyega kahna! agar usko kuch ho gaya tho mein jee nahi paunga Kahna" and tears fall from his eyes!!!!

Radh(Kahna) just smiles hearing his words!!

Dev wipes his tears before he turns back and looks at Radh blank and leaves from there!!!

Kahna smiles!

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Nihariikaa thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally finished it...😃

i tried my best to go with the flow!!
Hope u'll like it.😃

Plz leave ur comments.
i would really appreciate😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was beautifull and dev's words ,they make us so emotional as always .

waise if he sees such dreams more than once,may be it will take less time to realize for him.😉😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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really the os is superb could u able to pm the next parts
Edited by meenaluma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What sensitive is your Dev! Beautiful moment you described between RaDev!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice niha it is very emotional loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautifully written Niha :-) Loved reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice OS Niha...

on the other day,when rads/kanha was missing,he was restless until she came infront of him..He is fearing that she may leave him again..poor boy 😭 "Don't worry dev,rads is yours forever" 😉

Thanks for the post Niha.. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow super OS niha... thanks for sharing...
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