Which would u prefer -Reincarnation or these plots

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 13 years ago

Frnds I feel, even now the story can be revived very nicely, as there is huge scope, that too without any re-incarnation.

Radhika is confused about to tell the truth of Barkha to Dev or not, but they can show that as Dev has got a clue, he would pester Radhika till he finds out the truth, can use BB very nicely in letting Dev to know of truth, this would also help her gain trust in Dev, which she is screaming for currently.

Rohan to help Radhika initially and act all goody-goody at start but later on when he comes to know of how things r developing, can join hands with Barkha and hence the major clash begins between RaDev, BB-Viraat and Rohan-Barkha, with the truth finally coming out.

The third person should be revealed and his past association with Purohit family could also be shown, in fact it could be related to the third son of RP or Daima.

They could also show the harsh punishment which the society as well as the law would garner on RaDev and Purohit family for playing with the most pure institution - MARRIAGE and the law for doing FRAUD and taking the wealth. This would help the show to pass on a SOCIAL MESSAGE also to the audience to not commit FRAUD or play in the name of MARRIAGE.

Even Mansaram can be used for this PLOT where he realizes that in his blind LOVE for Radhika, he did not see what MISTAKES his daughter was doing due to her immaturity and rectify them earlier, so that the HARM would not have been so BAD. How all this effected his family could also be shown.

How RaDev works and gets everything back - TRUST, MONEY, FAME should be the next track. Along with it, how Dev finds his mother and how the inner battle starts to give his mother the long awaited position of hers in the PB, could also be shown. How Dev gets caught between 2 mothers - PADMA and CHAYYA and how he tries to impart justice to both of them could also be integrated beautifully.

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harianjana

@harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ur track analysis was superb but i wnder if ever they will give trps so i think reincarcination of radev is better

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harianjana
Ur track analysis was superb but i wnder if ever they will give trps so i think reincarcination of radev is better

haianjana, don't worry they will give TRP's, if ur screenplay is good rather than hurrying off everything. U require to buikd up good screenplay and emotional closures for any track to garner TRp's, which CB is lacking currently.

Re-incarnation means starting the story all over and leaving all the loop-holes here in the mid-air itslef, this can destroy the story completely, if not handled with care. This is what happened with CB 1 where Abhay was introduced, when things got messy and as the track was not developed properly, CB 1 lost all the charm, it was carrying b4 this track started. I just don't want history to repeat itself

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sia

@sia_lovely

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Posted: 13 years ago

Yes, Abhilasha, you're right. Even without re-incarnation and all, we can have great tracks as you mentioned. These sort of logical tracks is what the audience are expecting and with good presentation/ great acting/ tight script, the show still stands a chance to get back its position.

Recently was reading in the rival show's forum how the leads' chemistry wasn't up to mark, plus their acting isn't great... and channel is trying to bring in the love story of the parallel lead.

Here AviNa have immensely great chemistry/ are greatly gifted actors and are very much popular among the indian/abroad based audience. All the need is a good script/ logical and they can weave their magic in to the same :))

Alas, the logical tracks you can think, which seems interesting to me, and would seem interesting to majority of the populations, cannot be penned by the writers! Why? Why can't they come up with logical tracks like these and keep trying to introduce shock factor by making one or the other character negative...or by introducing weird plots? Why? If CBians, who aren't writers by profession can think of such lovely, sensible tracks, why can't those people who earn their bread out of this job?

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Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

In all my years of TV serials, the #1 TRP gatherer is suspense and drama. Any track that has this guarantees TRPs.

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harianjana

@harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

haianjana, don't worry they will give TRP's, if ur screenplay is good rather than hurrying off everything. U require to buikd up good screenplay and emotional closures for any track to garner TRp's, which CB is lacking currently.

Re-incarnation means starting the story all over and leaving all the loop-holes here in the mid-air itslef, this can destroy the story completely, if not handled with care. This is what happened with CB 1 where Abhay was introduced, when things got messy and as the track was not developed properly, CB 1 lost all the charm, it was carrying b4 this track started. I just don't want history to repeat itself

abhilasha indee u are right and if handled properly they will give out trps but these cv's who failed all these days in handling these things will handle it properly, thats what my doubt was/

and i agree with sia too a normal person who wasn't writer by his/her job was getting great ideas but those people who earn their livehood by writing and them self calling creatives why can't they get these good ideas

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

Yes, Abhilasha, you're right. Even without re-incarnation and all, we can have great tracks as you mentioned. These sort of logical tracks is what the audience are expecting and with good presentation/ great acting/ tight script, the show still stands a chance to get back its position.

Recently was reading in the rival show's forum how the leads' chemistry wasn't up to mark, plus their acting isn't great... and channel is trying to bring in the love story of the parallel lead.

Here AviNa have immensely great chemistry/ are greatly gifted actors and are very much popular among the indian/abroad based audience. All the need is a good script/ logical and they can weave their magic in to the same :))

Alas, the logical tracks you can think, which seems interesting to me, and would seem interesting to majority of the populations, cannot be penned by the writers! Why? Why can't they come up with logical tracks like these and keep trying to introduce shock factor by making one or the other character negative...or by introducing weird plots? Why? If CBians, who aren't writers by profession can think of such lovely, sensible tracks, why can't those people who earn their bread out of this job?

sia, I can give u the apt reason, y they r unable to put these sensible tracks, the CB writers feel that these tracks are already guesses by the viewers and so they want to giv us something which is out of the box, which unfortunately they don't know how to build, and in the process leaves many loop holes. They forget that the serials r nothing but a family drama, and so should be linked with normal human feeling to deep connect them with the audience.

If the audience is able to feel and connect to a character and to the story, then only the TRP's come, CB CV's in their zeal to give something out of the box with a shock treatment to the audience, in turn gives out something, which we audience find absurd and not able to connect due to poor screenplay.

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fatssrilanka

@fatssrilanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

Abhilasha,loved your analysis on new tracks.The CVs can use these tracks & I'm sure they would garner good TRPs.Noneed for the reincarnation.Even without this the other tracks that you mentioned would work wonders for the show.

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Smriti

@bholabear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Abhilasha, really liked your ideas. Unfortunately, the writers of CB seem to be stuck in a road block and are unable to think logically. If only they hired any one of us on the Forum here, we would have a mindblowing storyline. So frustrating that all we can do is post on the forum, unable to reach these so-called Creative writers.

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filmyprincess

@filmyprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: bholabear
Abhilasha, really liked your ideas. Unfortunately, the writers of CB seem to be stuck in a road block and are unable to think logically. If only they hired any one of us on the Forum here, we would have a mindblowing storyline. So frustrating that all we can do is post on the forum, unable to reach these so-called Creative writers.

I agree with u

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