OS: DevRadhika's confrontation :)(2parts-pg1) Done

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Posted: 14 years ago
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i dont know if we'll get this scene in CB, because seeing the situation i doubt if they'll give some lonely confrontation between RaDev. Maybe Dev will confront publicly, but i would want to see with just DevRadhika's scene...hope we get to see it...

but meanwhile,
this is from my side😳
hope u'll like it.



Dev confronts the truth infront of the society and announces Radhika as his wife...Radhika who is bending her head down, trying to look away from Dev raises her head in shock and with unbelievable and stunned look, looks at him...She sees Dev who is looking straight into her, they share a stare...Radh heart beats go faster with fear, gets nervous thinking how can he say it...
everybody is shocked to hear Dev, Mahanth's is tough struck, not a word escape for a while from his mouth, He stares at Dev Stunned who is having the determined look...He look aside but it feels empty, (maybe he wanted to ask RPji what was going on) but RPji was not there...
and finally he asks it out
" Yeh aap kya keh rahe hai RPji"
Dev with determined but humble voice " Mahanthji yeh sach hai!!!...Yeh sach hai ki Radhika meri pathni hai!...uss din shaadi Hamari hui thi"
Mahanth with surprised voice " Magar nimantran mein tho...aapki shaadi Barkhaji ke saath likha hua tha...!!!!"
Dev bends his head with frown when he hears Mahanth asking that...He gets puzzled as how to explain him... He stands silent in his thoughts ... ...
Mahanth's impatient voice speaks " RPji!! magar yeh sab kaise hua"
everybody waits for the answer...


Barkha comes forward folding her hands...in an appealing voice says " mujhe skhama ki jiye mahanthji, ... ... ... mujhe nahi patha mera yeh nirnay sahi tha ya galath... ... ... magar meine sirf yeh socha ki yeh pyar karne wali jodi ke saath koi anyay nahi hona chahiye... ... issliye meine yeh sab sahi soch kar hi kiya ... ... "
She explain what happened at the marriage...

Everybody hears of what happened and after hearing the reasons, everybody is astonished, and starts talking in ears. Mahanth is confused and in dilema as how this could happen ... PF is standing with fear heart what will happen now and what would be the decision of the mahanths...

Dev comes forward and speaks to Mahanth,
" Mahanthji!!! hamari shaadi hui tho thi magar sanaj nahi jantha hai ki woh Dulhan Radhika thi, issiliye aaj Mein yeh elaan karna chahtha hun ki Radhika hi meri pathni hai" " Aur mein yeh RPhithi jhoot mein aaramb nahi karna chahtha" " Aur mein yeh chalhta hun ki samaj Radhika ko meri pathni ke roop mein sweekarein"

Mahanth is speechless, He is in dilemma, how can he accept Radhika as RP's wife when once it was opposed...But he was speechless to say anything...

Dev continues in his humble voice


Dev: "Mahanthji mein Dadaji ki bahut izzat kartha hun, aur Dadaji ne mere hatho mein jho Zimmedari rakhi hai mein poore dil se nibhana chaltha hun. Aur Dadaji ne ithne saalon se jho RP ka padh sambhala hai mein use poori nishta ke saath nibhana chahtha hun." " Magar mein apne astitva par ungali uthe hue bhi nahi dekh saktha"
"meine Radhika ko poore reethi riwaz ke saath apna ardhangani banaya hai...mera pehla kartavya banta hai ki mein mere dharam ka palan karoon"
"Aur agar samaj mujhe RP ke roop mein sweekar karna chahtha hai tho unhe meri pathni Radhika ko bhi sweekarna hoga."


Mahanth listerns to him and is speechless ... He is more of in shock to what to do... He then calls some other mahanth and asks them to annouce to the crowd that this matter will be soon discussed and will be concluded in the dharam sabha...

after sometime people leave, and PF too takes the leave ... but Dev remains at the mutt for a while...and reaches home late in the evening.
At PH, PF is restless thinking about the decision of Dev, some are mad, some astronished ... Radh is lost, silent, sitting in the Kahna mandhir alone thinking of Dev's decision he announced infront of everybody.



guys didnt expect this to be thiii iiis long. just wanted to write RaDev's confrontation scene. but before that wanted them(RaDev) to leave home and ended up writing this big...Hope u didnt get bored...RaDev confrontation in next part.😃



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it will keep up my confidence.😃

second part continues...see the next post.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dev comes home, he walks inside and sees everybody silent, he stops and looks at them, who are standing with questionable looks, He looks and without saying anything walks into his room ... ...

Radh gets to know that Dev has come...hearing this she still sits in the trance and slowly she walks and goes into their room...She enters and finds Dev wearing white Kurta and holding a frame in his hand...She stands there for a while looking at him...Dev too notices Radh, looks at her for a sec and them again concentrates back on the frame...Radh slowly comes near to him... ...Dev moves his hand and places the frame on the side table...and goes from there, passing Radh...Radh notices this but she moves to the table, sees the frame...It is DDg's pic in it...she stares at it and says...

Radh: "Agar aaj DDj jeevith hothe tho Aaj unhe bahut dukh hota!" in a sad voice... Dev stops his steps listerning to her words but still facing his back...she continues " Yeh dekh kar ki unka potha aaj unke virodh ja raha hai". She turns back and looks at him who is facing other side...She continues...
" unka yeh sapna tha, unhone 12 saal pehle dekha tha! ki unka potha bada hoga aur RP ka padh sambhalega, RPhithi ko aage badayega aur unka sirr garv se ooncha karega" " Aur jab woh waqt aaya hai tho woh shayad tut ke bikkhar jathe apne pothe ka nirnay sunkar" in a low and sad tone

Dev turns to her and looks at her, Radh too looks at him...there is a silence... Dev break the lock and moves to other side...Then Radh asks...
Radh: Kyun kia aapne aisa? asks in questioning tone but in low voice.
Dev hears!!!
Radh: Aapko kithna samjha ne ki koshih ki meine ... Aur Aap ne khud dekha ki logon ko RPhithi par kithna vishwas hai, Aur woh RPhithi se kithne jude hue hai!!!! Phir bhi aapne aisa nirnay liya? her tone raises a bit
Dev listerns silently...
Radh: Aur aap ithne swarthi ho gaye ki aapne DDg ka khayal thak nahi kiya, Unka aadarsho ke khilaf nirnay liya?her restless tone raises more!!

Dev turns back and looks at her, who is having restless questioning looks!!
Dev: Tum samaj thi ho ki mein DDg ke aadarsho ke khilaf gaya hun? asks her in soft appealing tone.
Nahi Radhika!! mein kabhi bhi Dadaji ke aadarsho ke khilaf nahi ja saktha...Abhi bhi DDg ki ek ek baath mujhe yaad hai...DDg ne bacchpan mein mujhse yeh baath kahi thi...
he tells the incident where DDg tells him to close his eyes and take the right decision...
Aur kal rath meine bhi yahi kiya tha, Mere phisle mein DDg har waqt mere saath hai Radhika!! He says trying to make her understand.
She hears him but is not convinced...
Radh: Agar Aap DDg ke phaisle poori tarah se maanthe hai tho unke nirnay ka virodh nahi karthe. in restless tone.
Dev: Radhika agar mein DDg ka nirnay sweekar kartha tho mere dharam ka kya hotha!! tumne kabhi yeh socha hai?
Radh: Aap aise phiselon mein Swarthi kaise ho sakthe hai?
Dev: Mein swarthi nahi ho raha hun Radhika!!!...with stern voice ... ... Agar jab samaj ko yeh sach ke barein mein patha chalega ki meine apni Pathni ko chodkar kissi aur ladki se shadi kia hai, kya woh wahi samman aur izzat woh RP ko de payenge??!!!" says with command in voice.
Radh: " Agar aapne woh nirnay liya hotha tho..." says looking into his eyes but then turns back and continues "...tho mein Aapke zindagi se kabka chali gayi hothi...stops for a sec ... aur samaj ko patha bhi nahi chaltha ki Radhika naam ki koi ladki aapke zindagi mein bhi thi" says with a heavy heart tears dropping from her eyes...
Dev is stunned to hear this from Radh, his words get struck, but he takes the courage and
Dev: " Magar Sach kabhi kisi se chupa nahi hai Radhika!!!!" says in stern and loud voice looking at her back posture..
Dev's words hits her and she makes her eyes wide listerning it...She stands silent...
there is silence between them for a moment...Dev cools down and ask
Dev: Radhika tum kyun apni Zid par adi hui ho, Kyun samajh nahi pa rahi ho!!!! ... ... Kyun nahi samajh pa rahi ho ki mein swarthi nahi balki apna kartav nibha raha hun!!!
Kya tumhe samajh bhi aa raha hai ki tumhare iss bartav se mein iss sangarsh mein kithna akela mehsoos kar raha hun!!
Radh is going weak from inside but still in stern voice...
Radh:
tho Aap kya haasil karna chahthe hai yeh sab karke!!!
Dev gives her unbelievable look seeing Radh still so adament...
Kya aapne socha hai, Agar samaj aapki pathni ke roop mein mujhe sweekar nahi karega tho
RPhithi ka kya hoga? her voice shakes a bit
Dadaji ke Ummeed ka kya hoga?
Logon ke vishwas ke saath kya hoga?
Dev looks at her back posture, he senses her change of voice, goes near her and holds her hand... she jerks, he turns her to his side...looks at her but she does look into his eyes...He holds her chin makes her looks into his eyes...
Dev: Kya woh log uss RP par vishwas karthe jab unhe patha chaltha ki woh RP unko dhoka mein rak raha ho!!!
Kya woh RP apna RPhithi poori nishta ke saath kar patha jho woh khud apna dharm se muh mod liya ho!!!
Kya woh RP kabhi apne nazaroon mein khada ho patha!!!
Radh finally breaks her lock and moves from there, but Dev holds her hand.
Dev: Tumne jawab nahi diya Radhika!! in a relaxed tone...
She doesnt turn back...He goes to her and frowns with concern seeing her tears...
Her tears doesnt stop...

Dev: with concern, Radhikaaa!!!!!
but she finally breaks...and starts crying continuously... Dev gets very concerned holds her tight and takes her near...Radh holds him tight, cries like a baby and some time later says " mein Haar gayi"
Dev is puzzled but he doesnt speak anything...he waits for Radh to calm down a little...
He calms her down and asks with concern" Radhika Kya hua!, Tum aise kyun roh rahi ho!" ..."Batho!!!" ... she finally controls herself... gets out of his hold and is about to go...but Dev stops her to know the reason...Radhika with little stern voice says that she has to go...Dev asks her again but she " kuch nahin" ... ...
Dev: tumhe bathana hoga Radhika!! with little demand in his voice.

Radh turns the other side...
Radh: is silent for a while and her tears role down silently...she with heavy heart " in a sad and low tone..Shayad meri wajay se aapko yeh sab dekhna pad raha hai...Aur meri wajai se Aaj RPhithi sankat mein hai... Agar Samaj ne mujhe sweekar nahi kiya tho, meri wajas se aap RP ban nahi payenge ... ... Aur jo astha logon ko RP se judi hui hai woh sirf meri karan tut jayegi... Magar meine bahut koshis ki...Magar mein haar gayi...tears gush out of her eyes.
Dev is stunned to hear all this from Radh, thinking herself responsible for all this!!!.
He turns her, cups her face with his hands and wipes her tears with his thump fingers...
Dev:"Radhika tum kyun apne ko dhoshi maan rahi ho, issme tumhari koi galathi nahi hai, Tum aise soch bhi kaise sakthi ho"

Radhika tum aise kaise himmath haar sakthi ho, Hum janthe hai ki humne koi galthi nahi ki hai, Jo bhi hoga hum saath milkar saamna karenge"
tries to confront her
Radhika tum meri pathni ho, Aur iss sach ko koi nahi jhutla saktha, agar Samaj nahi mantha hai, tho mein manaunga, hum dono milkar saamna karenge...

Aur Radhika Shayad tumne iss baar kahdiya magar iss baar nahi kehna ki meri zindagi se jaane ke barein mein...he gets very emotional and in heavy voice, kyunki tum chali gayi tho meri zindagi mujhse cheen jayegi Radhika!!!...tear drop from his eyes...even Radh gets emotional and hug him...They have an emotinal hug.😳


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end for now.😳 😃
Hope u have liked it.

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Lo bhai ab tho in dono ko mila diya, cleared their misunderstanding for now, ( atleast for now😉) Ab in dono ki marji samaaj ko samjhaye ya manaye!!!😆. Now its their resposibilty to fight for their right together. ( we will only watch how will they stand together😆)

Hope from here Radh will be happy girl with light heart( bahut roya liya na😆 ) with good and new determination. But i think she'll still be stubborn( i love her that way only😳). Remember she can do anything for her KK...but i think whatever she'll do now it wont be against her KK's wish.


And the reason for me that i included Barkha was...I bet no other person would have opened their mouth to confront their marriage truth...it had to be Dev or Barkha...And i didnt wanted Dev to be shown as pointing finger at someone else even thought it was their fault...Dev is not the one who would point to others mistakes, so i was forced( 😕 😆 ) to add Barkha.
and anyways little bit of Barkha chaltha hai. she's only accepting her fault with no nonscene added.
😃

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Phew!!!!!! too much of a bit update right. Sorry didnt think this will come this long.
And plz ignore if the dialogues were too pakao.😛 ( as i myself think sometimes, what pakao dialogues)


Thanks for reading.
😃


and plz click the like button if u liked it.
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Edited by NiHa24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice niha, but me upset:AGAIN barkha ?! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i like your post niha..i wish-Kassh aisa hi ho..atleast truth will be revealed infront of everyone..and i don;t care about that wat will happen after that..b'coz dev radhika will be together...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Very nice niha, but me upset:AGAIN barkha ?! 😆



😆 myra i know someone would ask that, but i do have a reason.
will give it in the next post...
but see i have only given two dialogues for her.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Very nice niha, but me upset:AGAIN barkha ?! 😆


Why not Barkha , Myra ...She is the person supposed to get married with Dev , now she has tell the society it was not her , people will believe her ...So Barkha is needed for this revelation...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neerjaa


Why not Barkha , Myra ...She is the person supposed to get married with Dev , now she has tell the society it was not her , people will believe her ...So Barkha is needed for this revelation...

I would have wanted dev say the whole truth of their marriage and then bh just confirming his words :"yes, i did all that"
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LIKED UR POST AND EXACTLY,THERE SHOULD BE CONFRONTATION OF RADEV ITS MUST
i was waiting for dev making her understand before too like that radev with barkha scene but only radev and rads come out of guilt.

now after DEV ANNOUNCING ,CVS CAN ATLEAST SHOW dev making her understand so that rads didn't misunderstand him and accept whole heartily.requires radev alone scene must.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Niha liked your OS , you are good at writing scenes and dialogues and it looks real as if part of the scene ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i hope like that just finger cross

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