FF#3: Koi Fariyaad~Last update page 100 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
great start keep it up.We want the next part very soon please😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Great start😊 loved the ff title tooo...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
or haaa dear......i forgot to tell u that the title of this new ff is nice.............actually the best title......much more meaningful than the titles of ur previous FF's....!
Hope u don't mind me telling u this........but "koi fariyaad"[I][/I] has just captured my heart!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Nice n interesting start Yumna di........would really love to read more than this.....plz update as soon as possible...,am impatiently waiting for the next partsss!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
great start.interesting.plz update sooooooooooooooonn.don't keep us waiting.good luck for your FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Precap

The night passed by silently , the sunlight was coming in the room brightly making the girl open her eyes slowly ..The girl was looking up at the ceiling tired .. She touched the side of her fore head and feels a bandage ..Her gaze turned confused she tries to get up resting her back on the bed rest ..She was puzzled she saw picture of a boy on the walls ..She had no clue where she was? , her gaze fell on Dev who was sleeping with his head on the bed and sitting on the floor..The girl started to get scared ..Yeh admi koun hai ?? Main yahan kya kari hoon ??? Kahin yeh ladka muhje chot pounchana chatha hai?? (Who is this guys? What am I doing here ? This this guy want to hurt me??)

Her gaze remained fixed on Dev frightened ..she started to sweat from her forehead , tears started forming in her eyes ..Dev felt someone moving lightly ..He slowly opens his eyes he stretches himself and his gaze fell on the girl who was looking at him confusedly .She had beautiful round eyes , with nice dark brown hair , her skin was fair and soft , her lips had a perfect pink shape, she had cute cheeks and a beautiful innocent face .Tears started forming in her eyes .Dev understood that the girl was really scared and confused ..She probably thought that he wanted to hurt her ..he smiles lightly ..

D: Hey ..

The girl started crying ..Dev was taken back by this and quickly gets up worriedly, he didn't know what to do and started panicking a little ..

Hey guys thank you so much for the wonderful comments , im really happy that you guys are ready for another journey with Radev ..Hopefully I wont bore you guys ..I wont have time to update today maybe tomorrow😊 TC ❤️

Edited by billo77 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
pls update as soon as u can...waiting....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
thank u! hungary for more...lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Thank you for the Marvellous precap looking forward
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Good starting billo in different way...Precap is wonderful...

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