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palak13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

I want u to complete ur story I will always be in this forums u may think I am mad but I miss choti[/QUO

dw priya i will always update my story and thanks for like it lol if ur mad then im mad coz even im always gone be on this forum i thought i will be the only one to be visiting this form but i guess there others who r gone be coming on this forum coz everyone misses cb

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palak13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hotie im waiting for ur reply u sed u gne comment but still havent hurry up lol 😳

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palak13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sun_singh
Very nice dear!

thank u 😊

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liveforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Palak awww you were waiting for me to comment okay then I am going to try to make it long okay?

Okay so here it goes!.....

Palak yaar amazing!!!!!! You are too good!! First the part and now the promo got me thinking hmmm what will happen? Will there be fights between the two or will they get together and hang out together and start loving eachother! Hmm Wah suspense shuru kar di tumne!! You have to update soon okay and please do it quick!!! Quick like a lightning 😉 jaldi karo muhje aur wait nahi kaar jataa!!! Okay I think I should post this now because how Are you going to read it if I dont post it. So I am posting it now!!!

Awesome promo and part and update soon!!!

Love Anmol! 😊

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palak13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: hotie
Palak awww you were waiting for me to comment okay then I am going to try to make it long okay?

Okay so here it goes!.....

Palak yaar amazing!!!!!! You are too good!! First the part and now the promo got me thinking hmmm what will happen? Will there be fights between the two or will they get together and hang out together and start loving eachother! Hmm Wah suspense shuru kar di tumne!! You have to update soon okay and please do it quick!!! Quick like a lightning 😉 jaldi karo muhje aur wait nahi kaar jataa!!! Okay I think I should post this now because how Are you going to read it if I dont post it. So I am posting it now!!!

Awesome promo and part and update soon!!!

Love Anmol! 😊

thanks hotie for the awsome commet lol dw prob i will update 2dai

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n_sinha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

awesome palak13...i really like it...so many characters......... will be difficult to remember..

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palak13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

recap: both of the groups were on their own vrindavan.to both car was about to bump into eachother and this cause a argument between the two groups but thanks to the traffic man they left to their respective car.

part 2:
in vrindavan gayatri and vashali were making arrangements becasue dev was gone return from USA

Gayatri: vashali tum ne dev ka pasan ka kahana dek liya na kuch baki to nahin hain na.

vashali:arre gayatri mujse zyaada khushi to tumhe hori hain, tum chinta mat karo sab kuch ready hain

both the lady share a smile but then gayatri thinks y radhika has not come yet and decides to call her:

gayatri :vashali mein radhika ko phone karke ati hoon

vashali:with a smile teekh hain

gayatri :hello radhika, kaha ho tum beta itni der kyun hori hain.

on the other side of the phone

radhika : mama aap chinta mat karo hum thori der mein poch ne wale hain

gayatri:teek hain beta

in few min radhika lot arrived to vrindavan and entered their house and all the kids ran inside

armaan:ma kaha ho aap hum log aa gayein hain (armaan calls gayatri ma and radhika dad papa)

gayatri and vashali came running from the kitchen

vashali: arrein aa gayein tum log kitni der laga di beta. ker ab chodo or jaldi se fresh ho jao phir main tum logo khana dethi hoon teek hain

sapna: arrien aunty app chinta mat karo hum logo ne rasstein me kahana ka liya tha

both the ladies smiled at the kids

nikki: mama koi ghar mein dik nahin raha bakhi sab kaha gayien

vashali: arrein beta woh sab log bor ho rahein thein is liye gum ne sab saath challe gayein

radhika: oh or dadima kaha gayien

vashali: tum logo ki dono dadima dooserien gar mein hain tum logo ka intezaar kar rahein hain ab jaldi se mill lo warna narazz hoge

(guys in vrindavan radev house is close to each other its like neighbourhood but between their house their another house where both the family sit and chat toghether, eat toghether they mostly spend their time over their and that were the dadis are hope it makes sense )

all of them ran to dadima but the first one to entre was armaan and as he saw both of the dadi he said :
armaan: hey girlfriends
(im gne put r dadi meaning as radhika dadi and d dadi meaning as devs dadi)

both the dadi turned

R dadi: arrien armaan beta tum log aa gayien

armaan: yes gf number 1

D dadi: par beta bakkii sab kaha hain aur tum logo ke der kyun ho gayien ha pretending to be upset.

radhika:hum yaha hain

everyone came in and took the blessing of the two elder who they respect the most

anjali: dadi hum logo ne aap logo ko kitna miss kiya. mana ke only for two weeks eariler u left for vrindavan but the house felt so different without you

both the dadi go emotiona but then radhika decide to lightne the atmosphere

radhika:ohho tum sab kitne boring ho or kya tum logo ko buckh nahin lag rahin kyun ki mujhe to bohot bukh lag rahin hain

armaan:ohho to tummein buckh lagi hain or jab sab tummein khanne ko ketien hain to tum kethi ho tum mein buck nahin hain. dekha dadi ye humesh ase hi behave karti hain.

everyone was laughing seeing the cute argument between armaan and radhika

radhika: wo wo wo mein to bas eshin ker rahin thi. aur by the way atleast main tumarien jaise fat toh nainh hoon na so im proud of my self

armaan: WT tum ne mujhe fat bola, u just wait i wont leave u

radhika: omg hamesha same dialogue bolte ho tum aur kuch naihin atta kya

rahul: ok guys relax ab bas bhi karo tum log jab shuru hotein ho toh kitna larte who. mujhe to lag ta hain ke tum log hi ho is world main jo zyaada lartein ho. kyun muskaan

muskaan: exactly

radhika: huh looks whos talking jo log sab se zyaada lartien hain who loh hum ko sika rahien hain

armaan: basket yh hain hein aise our yaar champu tu aur musski to hamesh argur kartien ho aur kabhi bhi ek dusre ki baat par agree nahin kartien to ajj kesien hmm

muski: wo wo wo bas asine hi
rahul: eh basket tu ke rahin thi kuch

radhika: no rahul main to kuch naihn ke rahin thi

riddzi: ok guys ab enough teek hain

everyone statred to laugh by seeing RM embarrased but the gang were suspicious that something is wrong.

d dadi: accha tum log jakein rest karo teek hain aur radhika tummein yaad hain bachpan main tumara ek dost tha looking at R dadi and smiling.

radhika: um dadi woh kuch yaad nahin hain par kyun

d dadi: arrien beta woh to mera pota dev hein na woh aaj hi anna wala hain USA bas abhi tori der mein ara hi hoga

radhika wasnt suprised about this coz she didnt remeber dev coz they were quite young but nikki shared a worried look

nikki:in her mind thinking "oh god dev or radhika toh ek dusre se mill chuke hain par woh mulakat achi nahin thi or dono group ke beech argument hua hain ab kya hoga"

sapna sees nikki in a deep thoughts and decides to ask her

sapna: nikki kya hua tum itni parshaan kyun ho ani problem

nikki:huh nahin er mujhe kuch nahin hua mein teek hoon and then in her mind thinking (mujhe armaan logo ko sab kuch batana pareega)

nikki: er radhika tum phele fresh ho jao we all we be there in 5 minutes

radhika: in doubt but nodded her head and went to get freshen up

both the dadi decide to go for a walk and left the kids there

anji: nikki kya hua tum itni lost kyun lag rahien ho aur tum ne rads ko kyun akle bej diya

everyone look at nikki except for armaan and riddzi because they were lost in eachother eyes. nikki was about to say something when she sees ar lost in their own world and which makes everyone follow her gaze

suddenly everyone shout togehter in armaan and riddhima ear and say:PLS GUYS NOT DONT START UR ROMANTIC MOMENT HERE which makes them come back to reality and be embarassed

abhi : ab bato kya khene wale thi

nikki: oh god tumein har baat mein jaldi kyun rethi hai

sapna: guys plz ab tum log shuru mat ho jao

nikki: guys tum logo ne suna dadi radhika se kya pooch rahin thi

atul: ha yahin ke agar usein apna bachpan ka dost yaad hain ya nahin par yh tum kyun pooch rahin ho

nikki: hey bagghu tum logo ko yaa nahin aaj rastein mein kya hua tha

muski:kya hua tha looking at everyone

rahul: muskaan tum sab kuch bool jati ho yaad hain woh argument jisse armaan or who aadmi ke beech agument hua tha aur phir hum gadi mein sai baar nikle thhe aur phir.... rahul stopped as he rembered nikki hugging him and calling him bhai

abhi: aur phir nikki usse gallien mill aur use pucha...

sapna:bhai u r back we all missed u so much

everyone was in a utter shock when they rembered that and the scenes started flashing in their mind

ridzz: ab kya hoga dadi toh samaj rahin hain ke yh dono achhein dost banne gain par ab

armaan: ab shayaad kuch bhi nahin ho sakta hain kyun ki u knw guys agar koi bhi humse ya koi bhi family memeber se rudely baat karien to radhika kitna gussa ho jati hain aur jab radhika uss dev ka sammna karien gi to wo to tomatoe jaise laal ho gi

sapna:kuch bhi ho guys par hummein kuch to karna parega i mean dadi aur garwale kitne upset hogien aisa behaviour dekhne ke bad

they all decided to think of something but then suddenly radhika turned up which made them to come out of their thoughts

radhika: guys tum log yaha kya kar rahien ho aur itni worried kyun lag rahein ho

anji: kuch nahin babes bus hum log yuhin betthe the

radhika: betthe the itni der tak and looking at nikki she said nikki tum toh keh rahin ti tum log todhi der main aa rahienn ho par ayeein hi nahin

nikki: soz basket par ab tum yaha betho hum tumse kuch puchna chathe hain

radhika:teekh hain pooch ho

nikki signaled armaan to speak which armaan nodded

armaan: er basket woh er who hum log yh kehna charien te ke woh um..

radhika: kya armaan
for armaan it seemed as he was doing some test which he didnt know how to answer becoz he knew the result of this wnt be good so he prayed to god and said

armaan: basket tummein yaad hain us road par who argument hua tha us inssan ke saath

radhika facial expression was calm but as she recollected that argument her face turned angry and she asked armaan:

radhika: armaan y u asking me this

armaan: er because we were just talking about wt if u suddenly meet them then will u fogive them, erm well i think u should forgive them because everyone makes mistake right an..

radhika who was angry was getting really mad but was trying to control herslef and sed
radhika: no armaan i wont forgive them did u see wt kind of attitude they had it was there mistake and they didnt say sorry and u knw if anyone says something bad about my friends or family then i wont tolertate it do u get that

riddzi: we understand radhika but

radhika: no riddzi seriously i dont even want to see there face and i knw kahna wont ever show me his face again she said thinking a little possitvley and went away from there leaving they guys shell shocked

Atul: ab kya hoga

Sapna: atul ob jo hoga wo kanha pe chrona parega

abhi: ha kyun ki ab indono ko milne se koi naihn rok sakta aur indono ka ek na ek din ammna sammna hoga na shyad ajj hi

nikki: guys ab hummein fresh honna chayein aur ha uske baad mein radhika se baat karne jaoogi usse phele koi nahin jayega teek hain and of they went to their respectives room to get changes

dev dadi was in her room and suddenly she hear a car sound coming and she knew who that be so she ran downstair and told r dadi and vashali and gayatri

d dadi: vashali, gayatri kaha ho tum log jaldi aoo na

both the ladies came running

d dadi: arrien dev log aa gayein jaldi se aarti ki thali lao

vashali: ji majji mai abhi layein and wnt inside who was so happy that her son came

gayatri was nervous thinking will dev reconginse her or not, vashali came with the arti tahli and gave it to dadi.

dev lot arrived at the door and was stunned to see everyone waiting he was so happy and waitied till dadi does the aarti. she done the aarti tilak on dev and welcome him in
as soon as dev enter he lifited dadi in the air and was spinnig her around

d dadi: arrien dev kya kar raha hain chor mujhe main gir jaoongi chor baddmash she sed wile slapping him on his back

dev put dadi down but when he was about to hug her he felt a pain in his ear and said:

dev: owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dadi chod dard hora hain pls dadi pls

everyone was laughing seeing dev at this state

dev got freed and hugged dadi and said i missed u so much

d dadi: i misss u to par tum kitnne badmash ho gaya hain re huh showing mock angriness

dev :oh dadi im very sorry putting his hands on his ears which made dadi smile

dev saw R dadi and went to her and took her blessing and gave her a hug and a kiss kaisi ho aap dadi

r dad:had tears in her eye thinking that how clutured enough dev was and blessed him

r dadi: kush raho beta with a smile

then he went and took gayatri blessing and said missed me:

gayatri who was smiling from ear to ear: kush raho beta and ha missed u so much

and the lastly he went to his mom: hey mom he sed pulling her cheeks

vashali: teri yh adat abhi gayin nahin kya,

everyone else took their blessing and then
vashali sed: acha ab tum log fresh hoke niche aao aur beech wale gar mein khana lag diys hain ka lena
while eating dadi asked dev
d dadi: dev tujhe radhika yaad hain

dev: ha dadi kyun aur waise be wo hain kaha aur baaki koi dikkia nahin dera

benji: ha dadi aap radhika ke barrien mein batto kyun ki dev uske barrien mein kitne sarre battein kara tha kyun uday:

uday: ha but then thinking and asked erm benji kab poocha usne aur kya tum log dev aur radhika kein barrien mein baat kar rahien the scratcching his head
then suddenly he felt a smack on his head

uday: oww di apne mara kyun

dia: shut up dodo gadi me jab dev radhika ke barrien mein batta raha tha to tum ky karien the

uday:mein mein kya kara tha soh raha tha or was i eating

dia: dodo tum kha rahe the duffer

gunjan: shant ho jao dia tum gussa mat ho

suhaani: waise dadi kya appne radhika ko dekha kya

adhiraj:ha dadi bato na kya app usse milli ho

dadi with a smille said ha millie hoon aur woh abbhi bhi yahhan hain millo gain usse

everyone in exitement said yes:

dev: ek min ek min phele main usse millu ga phir tum sab mill lena theek hain

everyone: dne

dev and dadi went in seach of radhika and found her sitting with nikki. dev couldnt see radhika face because she wasnt facing him but he somehow knew that was radhika
suddenly nikki saw dadi and dev cming but the smile she has on her face vanished and a worried expression came on her face

nikki:oh god ab kya hoga dadi toh bhai ko lekein yaha is taraf arrien hain and kept looking toward radev

radhika who saw nikking looking worried was in puzzled thinking y ish she worried

radhika: kya hua nikki tum itni pareshaan kyun lag rahien ho

suddenly dev was now behind radhika and he called out her name and said

dev: radhika

radhika turned around but soon their smile faded away and had an angry expression and said togethere
TUM !!

nikki closed her eyes as she knew this had to happen and now dadima might know the truth.

dadi was kind of confused and asked radev if they knw eachother

dev: dadi yeh yaha kya kar rahien hain

d dadi: dev yh tu kya ke raha hain abhi to immpanient ho rahien the aur ab pooch rahien ho yh yaha kya kar rahin hain huh

radhika: dadi yh kaun hain radhika asked suspicioulsy

d dadi : hai kahna wt has happend to both dono itnio chock kyun rahe ho theek hain ek minure radhika yh hain dev tumahara bachpaan ka dost aur dev yh hain radhika ur chilldhood friend ok.

both of them knew that there no point of creating a scene so dev sent dadi of
saying see if the other want anything to eat

as soon as dadi went nikki was thinking now no one can stope the two fires from blowing
and sat down thinking wt 2 do
radhika:YOU!!! pointing her fingers toward his face

but dev put her fingers down and said

dev: keep ur fingers down okay and wt r u doing here

radhika who was in utter shock that someone was asking her wt she is doing in her own house

radhika: how mean who r u to ask me wt im doing in my own house huh give him a angry expression moving a step forward
dev comes a step forward and said with a attuidutde
dev: weill if u r deaf and didnt hear dadi sai my name then let me tell u my name is Dev Purohit
radhika who couldnt tolerate this anyomore and was trying to say something
radhika: U, U, U,U R SO... but dev didnt let her complete her sentence

dev: hot, handsome, clever, matures enough any ways ive got a long list unless like u

radhika: just shut up and wt u trying to say that u got all these qualities and me whos got none u think im dum

dev: is it i never knew u were dum anyways thanks for telling me ill remeber in the future
he smirked

radhika who was boling with anger didnt know wt to say but then saw the postiton they where standing in and moved back she looked to the side and saw nikki sitting with her hands on her head she went near nikki and asked her

radhika:nikki tum theek ho na tum aise kyun bathein ho she asked worriedly
dev who heard ask nikki the same question and went to her

dev: nikki kya hua tum itne pareshan kyun ho

radhika: cant u think of any other queston instead of reapeating wt i say huh

dev. hello i didnt copy u i sed...

enough said nikki

nikki: tum logo ko ho kya gaya hain baccho jasi kyun lar rahein ho pretending to be serious

dev and radhika never saw nikki like that and were shocked to see her like that but then when they looked at her they saw a smile forming up but she tried to hide it and they both got that she is only joking and then she continued

nikki: kya tum log kabhi dost nahin ban saketein plz

they gave nikki some false sad expression and together said NO, NEVER, IMPOSSIBLE

suddenly both the gang came up looking for radev and were shocked to see each other

TUM LOG YAHA KYA KAR RAHIEN HO all sed togethere

radev and stood next to their friends and dev said

dev: guys just forget and bare their faces for few days or waise bhi hum log looser ke moo nahin lagte

radhika : exactly guys let just ignore them coz we r not like these ill-mannered ppl who dont have any respect to speak to anyone

dev: nikki tum hamerin saath ajo u dont have to be with them:

nikki was waking to dev and the rest was shock seeing her walking near him.

but soon with a smile she said

nikki: bhai i respect and luv u alot par mein apne dost so bhi bohot pyar karti hoon so soz but im with them so ismein mein inlogo ke saath hoon and went to her group and stood their with a pride

samrat: tum sab useless ho kuch karne ki hiimat nahin hain

adhiraj: exactly nikki tum ne waha jakeh bohot badhi galti kardi

nikki: no adhiraj jis tarar tum dosto ek dussere ka saath dere ho waisa mein bhi to kar rahin hoon

suhaani: par nikita tum us group mein rohogi jise hum sab aur kas kar tumara bhai nafrat kar raha hain

nupur: exactly nikki yh sab sahin keh rahein hain aj ja hameirn saath

radhika: jab nikki ne keh diya hain ke woh hamerien saath hain to tum log usse force kyun kar rahhien ho

mayank who was angry: hello miss whatever ur name is we r talking to nikki not to u so u better stay out of this

armaan who was angry now couldnt keep quite and said

armaan : well for ur kind infromaton her name is radhika gupta and u r calling us looser well let me tell u this is the radhika that was the childhood friend of dev he said with some confident

mayank and everyone was in a shell shock and didnt knw what to say

dia: wt this is radhika

uday: oh ma yh hain radhika

benji: radhika devs friends oh god

anji : armaan yh kya keh diya tumne ab yh log kitne pareshaan hain dekh na ab yh log soch rahiien hoge ke yh dev ko kya khaine looser ya ill mannerred showing mock dissapointment

gunjan: guys ab bas bhi karo aur yh sab chodo fight karne se kuch nahin hoga.

dev: nahun gunjan yh log samjt te hain ke that we are illl mannered and not capiable of doing anything

abhi: is it humme to nahin pata tha thankss 4 telling us

atul:yh right abhi sahin kahan tum logo ne

nupur: accha toh phir hum jo kahin ge karo ge

rahul: hum log kisi cheez se darteij nahin bolo

mayank wishpers something in dev ears and the rest of the groups ear and dev says ok how about a basket ball match wt say

riddzi: manzoor

nupur : by god har joa gain

nikki: nupur tumhnee to pata chal hi gaya hain ke tum abhi se harne wale ho kyun said with a smile which nupur or the other didnt like

dev: no my dear sis haro ge to tum log. anyways samrat inhe rules toh batao

samrat: hmm ok so rules yh hain ke hum sab tho group mein hain so match hum logo ke beech hogi par uski baad jo best player hoga dono team mein se woh kelehge ek dusre ke saath one on one from each team and the person who loose will have to listhen and do whatever the person who win says which is one of us

dia: by the way hamerien team main bohout acches sai player hain is liye pata naihn kaun khele ga one to one with u lot coz i think ke tum logo ke pass koi best player hain hi nahin

muski: hain hammerien pass best player hain aur tum logog ko kudh baad mein papta chal jayyega kaun accha player hain she gave a hi-fi to nikki

dev: ok then its a deal after 4 days will be team match then later on we will decide when it gone be the one on one match

radhika: deal

mayank : get ready to loose

anji: ya sahin kaha u get ready to loose and we get ready to win

nupur : we will see

armaan: we surley will see

suddenly gayatri called them inside and all of them went inside and met the rest of the family member who turned up and were happy to see them they ate dinnere and chatted to each other and went to their own house to their respective room in gupta house the girls were sharing the room together and the boys sharing the room and it was the same in purohit house

nikki was staying with the gupta family as she knew if she stayed with nupur and lot they would keep blabbing about her friends which she couldnt take

both the gang told the their brothers and sister the incident that happend which turned in to a big argument and caused them to do this bb match to see who is the best and they lot couldnt stope laughing except the elder didnt knw anything about this

precap : everyone went to the mandir but radhika and dev were in the same house becoz both of the dadi tld them to stay at home. but they didnt knw that both of them are toghether in 1 house all alone hmm wonder wts gne happen

ok guys that was part 2 hope u like it

Radev alone in the same house 😉

Edited by palak13 - 14 years ago