Originally posted by: chipak
Angel⭐️
Happy to see the update. very small one😭 but very interesting one..perview not included😭 and eagerly waiting for it....this update shook me with Rads pain. Knowing his father was cruel but did not expect him to be this cruel to try n brun Rads hand😡 and there is more of her brutal past😲 (hope dev gets to know this or interprets by his patni bahaviour that smth is sinister with her father..) sorry, Seema, I did not include the preview because I already gave the preview for the next part a long time ago... remember?😆 Yes, Radhika's father is very cruel... but what's worse is the fact that such a thing happened in real life... there have been incidents where a mother tried to burn her son and a foster mother burned a girl's hand that was in her care.... I just finished reading a novel last night written by one of the victims from the Eunice Spry case which has given me nightmares... the horrific tortures she subjected to the children in her care will bring you to tears and make you question humanity and the warped social service system.....
Wow u said interesting part will strat and i wonder its already very gripping, how more it wil get😲😃....will wait for the whole mystry of Radhika past and coming future to unfold but dear pls update soon...ahh regarding the hint (me bad in solving puzzles)..but is it related to Rads Ma's death (guess its still a mystery as how she died protecting rads while she was pregnant..) or smthing else😕 You are right on spot... the next mystery to unfold is Radhika's mother.... her death....
And thanks for the praising words. as a reader i can only appreciate your creation which is truely a gem⭐️⭐️⭐️ Going by your comments looking for more Dev caring and even rads getting to know Pati more..wud be interesting how dev fall for her n not just for her beauty..ahh is this my first time i m saying..I CANT WAIT FOR MORE UPDATES...Nooooo😉 lolz.... I am sorry, I know I have been very irrerugal with the updates... but I am trying to work on the ff, just can't choose which direction to take.... I have written some scenes but they are just all over so trying to make them flow with the story.... 😕
I hav some Qs..for this update (hey you written part 8 but it shud be 22..guess typo😉)
Is it happening in present - after the three weeks of weeding when Dev was going back to his room after chatting with his sis and inbetween encountering Muskaan..right/? Yes, everything is happening in the present... the flashback will always be in italic...
Some more Qs from previous updates n your comments (now you willl know i not only read your FF but also browsed your comments carefuly😛) Sheesh, obsessed much?
**OK so first I guess Krishna's lover is Kirti Husband and Maane is supposedly adopted by him and he is also planning to adopt Rads once she turn 18 ...aisa hai kya but i know i can be entirely wrong.....thoda hint chalega😉 No comment 😕
**Now if rads is still not 18 (say 17.5 sth) and dev is 27/28...so 10 yrs diff😲😲 Yes, I know it seems like a big age difference but it is needed... Radhika needs someone who is mature and old enough to understand and take care of all her needs...
**in one of your comment you mentioned "Dev's protectiveness will just get worse in the future when he falls in love with Radhika, I don't know if you will find it cute then though'' angel what was that...i mean is he going to treat Rads her possession even after falling in love with her Maybe, probably, possibly....,
** again you had wriiten somewhere "My ff has quite a lot of parts, there is too much to cover and I hope I will be able to finish the story in the right manner" ...angel guess there is lot more to it so one request please cover everything and keep writing dear whenever u find time..we will always be there to read... Thank you, Seema, it gives me a little relief that i can take as much time i want to complete this story and not mess it up by rushing through it.... 😆
**One more thing you said there is one short FF apart from this one which you had written with different setup (uess for some competition) Please do share if you wish, woud love to read that too. Ahem.. ahem.... I believe you already read that SS, I posted it as Maneet version... although the holidays are over, do you think i should still post it in RaDev version?
Please tell me if my guess for the hint is correct...till then TC and Njoyy👍🏼
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