FF:Out Of Darkness *Part 29* (Pg 75) *Updated* 9/7 - Page 42

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gauranitai

WOW!!! di dat was marvelous!! i'm sooo looking forward to the romantic scenes!😍 plz make Radz well soon! It's killing me 2 see her like dat! I wanna see her more responsive 2 Dev, an hopefully she could trust him more! great job an i'm waiting for the next part so chop chop!! start writing! lol



I assure you there will be quite a lot of romantic RaDev scenes after this whole nightmare episode... Radhika will soon begin to come out of her shell... and she will definetely respond to Dev and the family.... That's the first focus of Muskaan... to get Radhika to speak! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: billo77

Angel that was quite an interresting update 😉

So Radhika said some words that maybe will help Dev figure out her pass ..Even muskaan was observing her .Im feeling really sad for RAdhika shes been abused by her father and brothers..I cant wait until Dev finds out her truth ..I think mr,Malik is probably RAdhika uncle or he knew her when she was small and His "son" could be manee..Im very curious please update soon cant take the suspence any longer 😉...I wonder what mr. Malik said to Dev??
Hopefully the therapy will help Radhika become more stronger and her fear will diminish and she will start interacting with everyone normally ..Im sure the interaction with Mayank is going to help her ..with Dev support and care she will get better ..And I cant wait to read more Radev scenes 😳...and radev relation getting stronger .
Thank you so much for updating ..I hope everything is going fine with you with your personal problems ..But dont worry everything will be fine inshaallah 😊
Take care ❤️
ps : Last year you started another FF called The persuasion of Purohit ..you made it specially for christmas I hope if you get time you could continue it ..BEcause christmas is just around the corner 😉and I would love the read the next part ..😃..But if you cant then its perfectly fine I could understand 😊



yes, Radhika threw a big hint to Dev and Muskaan... now let's see if they will catch that or not..... 😉 and as for Mr. Mallik's son being Mannee.... Sheesh what made you come to that conclusion? Mannee is Radhika's brother, son of Brij Mohan... remember? 😆 why would Mr. Mallik say anything to Dev... He finally agreed to sell his property so that Dev can complete his dream project.... From now onwards the future parts will focus mainly on radhika's treatment, how everyone plays their part in Radhika's road to recovery...

My SS "Pursuasion of Purohit".... I will see if I can find the time to edit the character names... if possible then I will post the story....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rkath

OMG yeh kya???

You're back!!!!!!!!!!!
Ahh Angel I'm so happy!!!
Will read the update as soon as I can!!!
Can't wait!!!
Raji



Hey, Raji.... yes, i am kinda back, i guess... still not regular with the updates but trying....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DAIRY25

Very nice part Angel , i feel touched the way Dev is taking care of his wife so calmly , probably when he start working with Mr . Malik , he comes to know about the dark past of Radhika.THANKS .



Maybe... but Mr. Mallik might have some totally different plans.... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rkath

Hmm hint what hint??!
Hmm was it Muskaan peeking in on their conversation??
No maybe not that.
Well I can't believe that Radhika's father burned her hand with acid. God man what is wrong with you!
Oh wait. Was the hint in there? When Radhika thought she was being burnt she called out to her mother. Hmm whatever happened to her mom? Did you mention how she died before??
Oh gosh did her husband maybe kill her???? 😲
Ok Angel continue soon please because you've got me completely hooked now!!
I can't wait to read on and see what's going to happen in the future.
But I'm glad to see that Radhika is slowly coming to know that pati is different from what her brothers said he would be like. Wait what's Radhika's age in this FF?
I thought it was 17 but I'll have to read again and check!
Cont soon! I know I've said that a lot!!
-Raji



Sheesh, leave it to you to figure out the hint! 😆 The next mystery to unfold will be about Radhika's mother... how she died.... so you were right on spot with that😉 Radhika is 17 yrs old in this ff....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: radhika5

Hi AngelKiss

Your FF is very gripping--there are many unsolved issues.
Please continue--would love to read how the story unfolds; especially how Radhika overcomes the issues brought on by emotional as well as the physical abuse; the fear and the nightmares she has lived all her life....

Most of all< i am curious to know the intricacies between the different relations. There was a reason why Radhika was treated the way she was---there are many characters in this story whose lives are intertwined--I hope, you continue to show us glimpses of what may have happened in the past and how the current situation is helping to uncover the mystery...

Thanks and looking forward to the updates




Well... I would like to make one thing clear... lot of times, there is no actual reason for the abuse, some people are just twisted and derieve pleasure from hurting others... but when it comes to parents as abusers... most of the time it is because the parent him/herself was abused thus ends up abusing their own children and sometimes the parent might be suffering from some mental illness.... anyways... my point is don't expect any big reason for the abuse inflicted on Rads by her father... I already gave the reason, Brijmohan hated Radhika because she was a girl child.... and later on the hatred grew because Radhika's mother begin to loath BrijMohan because of the way he treated Radhika... and as for Radhika's brothers... well that has also been explained... they didn't know any better, as children they were taught to obey their parents... they looked up to their father and idolized him which lead to them behaving like him and abusing Radhika.....

I might just have to write a part focusing on this... i hadn't planned on it because well.... i wanted to go with the theory that a person need not have any strong reason to inflict abuse on another.... as no reason can justify the trauma an abused victim goes through...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RaDev_addict

Hi Angel......it was really an awesome n touchng update!
The clue i got 4rm ths update is that Dev will try to unfold Radhika's past n wil try 2 get 2 know her more n i thnk that Radhika wil also start trusting in him!



Yup, the next step is Radhika's slowly begins to trust her Pati.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: palak13

wow i really loved t cool update hopefull radhika will realize soon that the family she is staying with is loveable and caring especially dev update soon thanks 4 the pm sorry 4 the late reply



Radhika is already seeing the vast difference between her family and her pati's family... so slowly she will begin to become part of this new family..... something you all will probably enjoy....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chipak

Angel⭐️
Happy to see the update. very small one😭 but very interesting one..perview not included😭 and eagerly waiting for it....this update shook me with Rads pain. Knowing his father was cruel but did not expect him to be this cruel to try n brun Rads hand😡 and there is more of her brutal past😲 (hope dev gets to know this or interprets by his patni bahaviour that smth is sinister with her father..) sorry, Seema, I did not include the preview because I already gave the preview for the next part a long time ago... remember?😆 Yes, Radhika's father is very cruel... but what's worse is the fact that such a thing happened in real life... there have been incidents where a mother tried to burn her son and a foster mother burned a girl's hand that was in her care.... I just finished reading a novel last night written by one of the victims from the Eunice Spry case which has given me nightmares... the horrific tortures she subjected to the children in her care will bring you to tears and make you question humanity and the warped social service system.....
Wow u said interesting part will strat and i wonder its already very gripping, how more it wil get😲😃....will wait for the whole mystry of Radhika past and coming future to unfold but dear pls update soon...ahh regarding the hint (me bad in solving puzzles)..but is it related to Rads Ma's death (guess its still a mystery as how she died protecting rads while she was pregnant..) or smthing else😕 You are right on spot... the next mystery to unfold is Radhika's mother.... her death....
And thanks for the praising words. as a reader i can only appreciate your creation which is truely a gem⭐️⭐️⭐️ Going by your comments looking for more Dev caring and even rads getting to know Pati more..wud be interesting how dev fall for her n not just for her beauty..ahh is this my first time i m saying..I CANT WAIT FOR MORE UPDATES...Nooooo😉 lolz.... I am sorry, I know I have been very irrerugal with the updates... but I am trying to work on the ff, just can't choose which direction to take.... I have written some scenes but they are just all over so trying to make them flow with the story.... 😕
I hav some Qs..for this update (hey you written part 8 but it shud be 22..guess typo😉)
Is it happening in present - after the three weeks of weeding when Dev was going back to his room after chatting with his sis and inbetween encountering Muskaan..right/? Yes, everything is happening in the present... the flashback will always be in italic...
Some more Qs from previous updates n your comments (now you willl know i not only read your FF but also browsed your comments carefuly😛) Sheesh, obsessed much?
**OK so first I guess Krishna's lover is Kirti Husband and Maane is supposedly adopted by him and he is also planning to adopt Rads once she turn 18 ...aisa hai kya but i know i can be entirely wrong.....thoda hint chalega😉 No comment 😕
**Now if rads is still not 18 (say 17.5 sth) and dev is 27/28...so 10 yrs diff😲😲 Yes, I know it seems like a big age difference but it is needed... Radhika needs someone who is mature and old enough to understand and take care of all her needs...
**in one of your comment you mentioned "Dev's protectiveness will just get worse in the future when he falls in love with Radhika, I don't know if you will find it cute then though'' angel what was that...i mean is he going to treat Rads her possession even after falling in love with her Maybe, probably, possibly....,
** again you had wriiten somewhere "My ff has quite a lot of parts, there is too much to cover and I hope I will be able to finish the story in the right manner" ...angel guess there is lot more to it so one request please cover everything and keep writing dear whenever u find time..we will always be there to read... Thank you, Seema, it gives me a little relief that i can take as much time i want to complete this story and not mess it up by rushing through it.... 😆
**One more thing you said there is one short FF apart from this one which you had written with different setup (uess for some competition) Please do share if you wish, woud love to read that too. Ahem.. ahem.... I believe you already read that SS, I posted it as Maneet version... although the holidays are over, do you think i should still post it in RaDev version?
Please tell me if my guess for the hint is correct...till then TC and Njoyy👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Awesome!! I guess, i read it late, that's y am late to comment!! Sorry for that!! But, circumstances n many other things kept me away from IF and CB's forum!!!😭 I miss u guys a lot!!



Liashna, where have you disappeared? I miss reading you constant pms and posts... i hope things are okay with you.....

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